Hello people this is two here. So I got a dare from a friend to make a naruto fanfic story and here it is. Also this is my first naruto story so go easy on me will you. Don't be afriad to give out pointers and tips to make my story without further a do. I give you ladies and gentleman or first naruto since I didn't have enough spac e in th esummary naruto will hav ethe sharingan/rinniegan and mokuton. The pairing will be naruto x kin x tayuya x harem (ill yet u guys decide who will be in the harem and how big it will be.) also give me tips if im spelling a character name wrong or if I spelled a jutus or anything wrong remember this is my first naruto story and fanfic so go easy on me.. Also no flames .
Demon- kyubii speaking
Hello- human speaking
Whats up= author speaking.
Hello- jutus and other things
Hello- story teller speaking
So lets begin
Once apon a time in the land of fire.
Allright I don't know what im doing so lets get on to the good stuff.
(ok I now must of you now what happens at the begging so to cut this short the kyubii tell me if im spelling his name wrong. Is attack the village of the hidden fourth hokage takes his three new borns. 2 girls and one boy. To seal the kyubii into.)
"aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh'' a random cilivian yelled before getting step on by a ragging ( really hard core) kyubii
''defend the village till the fourth gets here" A weasel maksed anbu yelled to his fellow shinobi.
"Hai" all the shinbi yelled
BOOOOM!
"Ahhh shit" a random chunin said
They saw the kyubbi fire up a bjinn bomb and fire it at the hokage mounment. They watch as it was destroyed into pieces.
Some of the shinobi (genin,chunin,jounin..) pissed themselves.
Well other (anbu) couldn't help but think they were fucked.
'THE HOKAGE HAS ARRIVED KILL THIS MONSTER' A random ninja yelled ( I got tired of spelling the names but don't worry this wont be a habbit )
A blonde haired man with three babies win his arms arrived at the sceen.
"OK I WANT THE AREA LOCKED DOWN TIGHTER THAN A SCREW IN NAIL NOTING GETS IN NOTING GET OUT" THE BLOND HAIR MAN YELLED.
"HAI" all of the shinobi respondied.
"minato we need to hurry up and seal the kyubii who knows what could happen if it continues to run rampent." A old man dressed in battle armor said to a now idnefied minato.
"I know hiruzen" minato repiled while handing the three babies over to hiruzen
"ill began the sealing process you protect me and your kids." Hiruzen said
"im afriad I can't yet you do that." A unknown voice said from behind minato
Suddenly minato vision turned balck and was knocked unconscious
"who are you?" hiruzen demanded while getting into a bettle stand with the babies in his arms
"I am uchiha madara" the know idenfied madara repsoned while going into the light of the moon.
The figure was a male by hiruzen guess wearing a black robe and a orange mask with tiger like stripes on it.
"now hand over the children would you kindly will" "madara" asked
"over my dead body" repied hiruzen
"that could be arranged old man" madara replied before dashing toward hiruzen
"come at me your old statue" hiruzen repiled then making 5 shadow clones and sending them after "madara" while he goes to seal the kyubii.
"so your running away while sending these pathetic clones after me im disappointed in you hokage-sama" "madara" replied clashing with one of the clones
"Earth Release Earth dragon bullet" a clone shouted
A dragon head made out of earth or mud (don't know whick it is so please tell me)
poped up and started shooting mud or earth at "madara" who then threw out his out and a hook came out and grab one of the clones and use him as a meat shield.
As the clone took the loast of the bullets he threw it at the clone who made the earth or mud dragon with a papper tag on it.
BOOM
Sounded acroos the area as the papper tag exploded
"two down 3 to go" "madara" though
"Your doing good" a voice said in 'madara mind
"thank you madara-sama" the "madara" though
As he charged at the remaining clones with a kunai in hand.
_with hiruzen_
Hiruzen was flashing his way thought hands seal with the kyubii behind him covered in a mud prison with is maw sticking out with the three he got the memories from his two clones
"dam it" hiruzen yelled
As he was starting to reach the end of his hand seals for the jutus a sword burst though his chest.
"now now old man what did I tell you" a voice said from behind him
"H-How?" hiruzen said gasping from shock
"did you really think those clones would be able to stop me?" the voice said
"S-Stop you hhahhaha they were ment to delay lay you madara" said hiruzin while doing the last hand seal need for the jutus.
"delay me for wha- madara voice was suddenly hiruzin yelled
DEAD DEMON CONSUMING SEAL( I think was the name of the seal correct me if im wrong)
Suddenly a ghostly figure was infront of hiruzin
"Sh-ingami-same!" the"madara" yelled
"what do you wish of me to do human?" the shingami asked
"I want you to seal the kyubii chakra in half equally into each of thesee 2 girls and seal the soul and this guy behind me into the boy naruto" hiruzin replied
"it shall be done" shingami replied and then did the sealing
"wwwhhhaaaatt? No no nnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooo" "madara" yelled as he was sealed into the boy along with the kyubii soul
"the job is done now for your soul" the shinigami said
As it took hiruzin soul.
"im sorry minato I wont be able to see your children raised up" hiruzin thought
"but have fun with the papperwork" hiruzin thought with a evil silme as he died.
The end
Wel guys that's chapter 1 hope you enjoy tell me what you think in the repley section.