This is a Poem to Hiei from his trainer Kuroi about Yukina; it was an assignment for school

This is a Poem to Hiei from his trainer Kuroi about Yukina; it was an assignment for school. Please review! I would love to hear you guys' opinion on it Enjoy!

Disclaimer: I do not own Yu Yu Hakusho, at all

However, Kuroi, the POV is mine

Training

Your fighting skills were atrocious

the first time we met.

pride is your strength and weakness

protecting you and at the same time pulling you down.

down into what you thought was comfort

blinding you from the things you needed to be taught.

other than your fighting expertise which has now improved

I watch as every other trait remains the same

as you lie to your sister yet again.

Don't worry, I'll teach you

to realize that your selflessness for her

is actually selfishness.

one day you will let all the truths come out

to the innocent ears that need to hear them.

relationships are just like training.

they take time

Be patient.

Again, please review, constructive criticism is also welcome thanks