OKay, so I began writing this story last year, never finished it, and now am inspired to continue writing it...this is my OWN story, do not copy it, AND please review!!!...this is my 2nd fan fic....... Chapter 1
Mallory Davis never imagined running through the backyards of small town Eddisburg, Vermont. The police and social services were after her and Mallory could only think of running away. She was diagnosed with a mild mental illness which would mean that the baby she was about to give birth to would be taken from her and put into another family's hands.
Although her illness was mild, it was still severe enough to label her as being incapable of raising a child. She was diagnosed about seven months ago, right after Jared found out she was pregnant and left her. Now she was left to fend for herself and her unborn child. Her father reacted like Jared and refused to acknowledge his daughter. He was a college professor and expected better from his own child. Her mother just did not want to talk about the matter and ignored Mallory.
Mallory slowed her pace and came to a halt. Her breath came fast and heavy. She felt the dry stinging in her throat from running to long without stopping. Her hands leaning on her knees, she lowered her head so that it touched her chest and began to cry. She didn't want to run from the police and social services; she didn't want her mother and father to ignore her; she didn't want Jared to leave her; and she certainly did not want to give her baby to someone else. She wished she had never gotten herself into this situation to begin with. At this point, she didn't think she'd ever have her perfect family with or without Jared and she'd never win her battle alone.
By this time Mallory figured if she didn't continue her escape to wherever she was going (she had no plans for where to go) they would catch up with her and she'd be in worse trouble. So she continued down the dirt/gravel road.
So what did you think? Good? Bad? Horrible? Stop writing the darn story?? Well please review----I know it's short but stay with me. Thanks
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