This is a remake of my story first fanfic "Love at first sight". I Hope you enjoy the remake, it's a much better version in my opinion, so enjoy! Also, I dedicate this story to my best reviewer lil-popcorngurl without her this remake would have never happened and it wouldn't be half as good as it is. She helped me edit my story repeatedly until it was perfect and I really appreciated her help and what she did.
Special Thanks to lil-popcorngurl you're the best!
"I think I love you"
Chapter 1
"It's such a beautiful day out," Serenity said as she walked out of the Moon Palace to the Garden. 'The air is so cool, the wind is so calm, and the air smells so lovely almost like… roses. I guess it's just my imagination though because roses don't grow on the moon... I can't wait to meet my new lesson instructor, I wonder who it is? She said listlessly.
Mars saw Serenity walking so she decided to have a little fun and ran towards the princess. "Gotcha!" Mars yelled in a playful voice.
"Huh? Oh! I'm not playing today Mars!" Serenity said in a some what annoyed voice.
"Ha-ha! What's a matter can't take a challenge? Serenity's a chicken!"
"Am Not!" Serenity defended herself.
"Are too!" Mars yelled.
"You're gonna take that back!" Serenity exclaimed in a mad voice.
"You're a Chicken! Chicken! Chicken!" Mars sang over and over again.
At that Serenity started chasing Mars who was circling the flower bushes.
"Never gonna get me!" Mars said with a giggling voice.
The other princesses Jupiter, Venus, and Mercury were sitting down in the grass talking about how their day went and about the up coming ball. Then they were distracted over hearing Mars and Serenity bickering back and forth about how slow the other is and who's a chicken.
"Come on Sere! I don't run that fast!" Mars Yelled as she got farther and farther away from Serenity.
Then the other princesses got up and went to join Mars and Serenity in their game of tag hoping to stop the bickering.
"Who's it?" Mercury asked eager to play.
"Serenity is!" Mars yelled as she ran towards them
Jupiter exclaimed in an excited voice. "Come on Bunny! Get us!"
"She's just chicken." Mars teased.
"No I'm not!" Serenity screamed.
"Then if you aren't, come get us!" Venus said with a challenging voice.
Serenity started running towards Mars everyone else ran towards the palace away from Serenity. Serenity not knowing where she was going bumped into something.
"Oof! Oh, I'm so sorry!" Serenity said in a sincere voice.
"Oh, I'm sorry too here let me help you up." Said the stranger offering a hand.
Serenity took the strangers hands when she met his eyes she felt like she was melting. 'Wow his eyes are gorgeous. They're an amazing Midnight blue' Serenity thought in awe.
End of Chapter 1
Ok for those of you that also read "Love at first sight" is this a better version so far? Be honest please. Review review! Keep in mind that this is still my first fanfic please!