Hello! This is my second story! I have been a member of fanfiction for a very long time and have finally decided that I might as well publish something! Please critique, flame, love or whatever else you wish! I want this to be a enjoyable experience for anyone reading! So if no one likes it, I wont continue lol As of right now this will be a one shot. We will see where it goes!
Anyways! I do not own Naruto! Only my OC Suzuna! Enjoy!
The War
"I have nothing to say to you. Just die, bound by this reality..." Obito drawls. "Katon.. Bakuduu Ranbu!"
Naruto yells in a panic, "Kakashi!"
"The kyuubi's tails..?!" Obito says to himself.
The witnessing ninja's gasp in shock.
Guy stutters out, "What is this!?.."
Questioning glances from the other shinobi towards a smoky spot near Obito, all wondering who this new addition might be.
Obito, looking to his left sighs knowingly. '...What a flashy entrance..'
The figure in the smoke finally emerges. "You seem to be having fun here. Obito."
Kakashi whispers to himself, "That is.."
Naruto, fuming at the sudden appearance, which can only mean the worst for his friends and allies. 'No! This could mean..' "Why..!? Why is the Madara that was there here!?"
Madara, glancing beside him, "He's a kagebunshin too. Where's the original? Obito."
Coming to his senses, the 8 tails shudders, "Hey! Naruto! Does it mean that.."
Eyes going wide with realization, Naruto screams at Madara franticly "What happened to the others!?"
B looks down sadly, "Brother.." in his mind knowing the likely outcome.
Madara chuckles, "You mean there?" looking down at Naruto with a calm smirk.
Shaking with rage, Naruto spits out, "I asked you what happened!"
Smirking evilly, Madara fuels Naruto's rage, "Who knows. They're probably... Not OK."
Back at the earlier battlefield, the 5 kage's who had fought Madara with all they had, lay lifeless and bloody. Miraculously, Tsunade still being conscious calls her slug summon.
Katsuyu, appearing in a cloud of smoke looks on to her master with worry. 'She will be fine.. She has to be fine!'
"I need to ask you something.."
"Yes! I'll stick your body back together and.."
"No.. You can think about my body.. later.. Now you have to.. Take the Kage.. to where I am.. I can.. Still save them.."
Thinking to himself, 'Before I could use the seals chain...' "You can have it. It's yours after all." Throwing back his old weapon that Obito has being using in his time as 'Tobi' in the Akatsuki.
"... Hn..!" Madara nods.
Appearing out of thin air seemingly, a dark haired girl lands in font of Madara and Obito unceremoniously on her butt. "OOF!"
The other shinobi stare at her in shock. Naruto, forgetting his earlier rage, "Who.. Who is this now!?"
'An ally of theirs..!?' Kakashi thinks to himself, weighing the options to this new situation.
"Wha.. Where am I..?" Confusion clearly written on her face. Rubbing her eyes, groaning in pain.
Madara looks expectantly at Obito, "...Obito. Is she one of yours?"
Obito pauses, "..No."
Turning around, the mystery girl screeches, "What is going on- OH MY GOD MADARA?! What.. Obito?!" turns around again "NARUTO!? What the hell?!" 'How did I get here?! I was re reading the manga at the scene where..
..oh.'
"Who are you.. How do you know my name?" Eyeing her up and down, wondering about her strange clothes.. Madara blinks.
"Oh my god-.. umm..!" 'But how did I get here?!' "Umm.."
He blinks again, "..."
"Umm uhh.. I'm not from here.." The girl blushes under his gaze.
"What do you mean not from here..? Who are you!" Naruto yells. 'And how did she just appear out of thin air like that?!'
The girl looks down at the shinobi gathered around Naruto, Kakashi and Guy, panicking. "Just.. umm.. Hold on a second!" Sighing, she looks down at her bare feet contemplating how she should respond. Sitting there in front of the two most powerful shinobi in existence, in her pajamas. 'Will they even understand what I'm talking about? This must be a dream. Yes! A dream! That's all this is. Hahahaha I will wake up from this and never remember anyways! Ok, I got nothing to lose so here goes..?' "I'm from another world.. And I don't know how I got here! But uh.. My name is.." 'What should I say..?' "Suzuna..?" 'Yeah that will work!'
Madara smirks down at the girl "You are unsure?"
Obito sighs, "..." 'Were wasting time, this is useless. Why don't we just kill her and get on with ending everyone's pathetic lives?'
'What's this horrible feeling.. Like someone wants me dead..? Oh well!'
"Well my real name is probably odd for all of you so we will go with this one!" smiling nervously, she kneels before Madara. "Madara-sama.."
Looking down at the strange girl in mild interest, he resists the urge to chuckle.
Looking up nervously, "I will explain.. I am from another world. From a place called America. And you all are in a.. story of sorts. Someone from my world made your entire world up. Have any of you heard of a thing called a manga?" 'Well this is probably a long shot..'
Naruto pipes up, "Yes we have those.. What do you mean were all made up?" 'This must be a joke! Did I get hit in the head..?'
"You mean to tell us we are made up characters in some book..?! "Kakashi yells. "That's ridiculous. You had us going there for a minuet!" 'Hahaha.. What! This is no time to be laughing! Man she's cute.. UGH stop brain!'
"What the hell is wrong with you Kakashi.. You're making funny faces! OH I see! You are exorcising your facial muscles to remain youthful!" Guy shouts with pure glee on his face, striking a familiar and.. scary pose.
"Huh? Oh sure, whatever you say.." 'Idiot..'
"Let us have a friendly competition, Kakashi! Who can make the most funny faces in 2 minuets time! FOR YOUTH!" Guy, sticking his tongue out, rolling his eyes around in circles and flapping his nose with his hand. "Uwwaahahwaa.."
"Someone.. Please stab me in the eyes." Kakashi groans, shaking his head.
"This is ridiculous.." "Am I dreaming..?" "Why are we even listening to this chick?! She is obviously crazy.." "I bet this is just an illusion set up by this Madara guy!" Someone sneezes, "ACHOO. Ughh.. Anyone have a tissue?"
"Well.. Yes!" Suzuna laughs nervously "Heh heh.. uhh.. So basically.. I know everything about all of you, and some things that have yet to happen. I have seen this entire war and everything before it. Madara-sama, I know all about the Uchiha and the Senju.. Naruto, I know everything that has happened between you and team 7.. And Sasuke.
Naruto whips his head up, "What?! Do you know where he is?!"
Kakashi looks on, shocked. 'How could she possibly know anything.. Hmm..'
"Yes I do know where he is right now actually!" Smiling down at him. If only she could just stop this entire war thing. If only she could find Sasuke for him right this instant and slap him silly for leaving his best friend and brother behind over some useless conquest for revenge. And now Itachi is dead, and for nothing! 'I have to stop him from attacking Konoha! Hopefully The previous Hokage's will talk some sense into him..'
Madara brings her back, "...You seem to have an allegiance towards me?"
Startled, she looks up at him, eyes twinkling. "Oh yes! Where I'm from, you and the rest of Akatsuki have a huge fan following!" -Quiet fan girl giggling..-
Naruto screeches out in disbelief, "WHAT!?"
"Sorry Naruto..!" Sweat drops. 'HAHA I just sweat dropped! Wahaha being an anime character is so cool!'
Obito, finally having enough, "Enough of this! Are you useful for anything? If not.." He glares menacingly.
Startled from her googly eyes, "Oh um.. I'm not sure! Like I said, where I'm from you are all made up characters.. Everyone like me.. Well we don't have any ninja's there." 'Uh oh..'
Madara throws a kunai at her head.
Subconsciously, whipping around and grabbing the kunai before it can slip into her skull, gasping in surprise. 'OH GOD'
The crowd begins whispering again. "She's a ninja?!" "I'm so confused.."
Smirking, "It seems you have gained some power coming here. I wonder what else you can do." Roughly grabbing Suzuna by the arm, "Obito I will leave them to you, for a while longer."
Blushing bright red, Suzuna stammers out, "O-Ok..!"
And they vanish.
Naruto, Kakashi both blinking in confusion, "Where did they go?!"
Somewhere else.
For the second time in the past 30 minuets, Suzuna falls down again. "Oww.."
Walking back and forth in front the girl, Madara whispers, "Tell me, Suzuna, what all do you know?" 'How can she know anything about my past..? Oh god does she know about that time when I tripped over that rock and flew lips first into Hashi..' His eyes shifting back and forth, blushing. 'Please no please no..!'
"Well the manga hasn't gotten to far from where we are right this moment. So I'm sorry to say I can't tell you if you win or not, yet. But I do know a bit of useful information for you!" Nodding confidently to herself. "But I have a question.. Why are you all doing this? If you want peace, all you had to do was complete that eternal mangekyo thing you were doing earlier. Then you could have just taken control of all the strong ninja's that you killed off or are about to. Although, having them all under your complete control wouldn't be very fun.. You would never have a challenge." She looks off to the side.
Madara stops for a moment. "Obito seems to have a grudge against humanity." He begins to pace again. 'Maybe she hasn't seen it.. Ohh good..' Sighing in relief.
"Well I guess that settles that.." Looking to the side, frowning at her new train of though. "I know the two of you have a.. interesting relationship, being allies but not really liking each other. Couldn't you just tell him what's what? Show him who's boss around here!" She pumps her fist. 'Yeah!'
Madara grins down at her. "But the way things are panning out, is much more interesting. Enough small talk. You will assist me in the annihilation of the allied forces." He stares at her. 'What will you do..'
"Well me catching that kunai earlier may have been a fluke.." 'No I don't think so.. There's no way I would have been able to do that..!' Eyes going wide with worry, "I don't know if I have any jutsu ability!" 'I'm dead meat. Maybe I can charm him into letting me live..'
He ponders to himself for a moment. Looking up at her, "I can see that you have chakra. Close your eyes and imagine a jutsu."
"Ok I will try!" She closes her eyes. "..." 'Ehh I have chakra? Awesome! Ok ok I need to concentrate..
...
...
..Nothing. Oh noo..'
Madara grabs her head roughly, getting impatient. "Never mind, open your eyes and don't blink."
Startled, she opens her eyes. "Oh I see! You are going to use your sharingan to draw out my abilities!"
He smirks down at her. 'She's quick.. Let's see..'
'His eyes are so amazing-' Slumps forward.
Inside the Tsukuyomi.
Looking at the inside of her mind, Madara is surprised to see that everything glows an eerie blue and white, and there are cats everywhere. Shaking his head. "..Strange." There is a huge gate locked with a very large padlock. "There." He forms a series of hand signs. "Release!" The padlock explodes apart easily and the gates swing open revealing a huge burst of light. 'Well that was easy.' A giant blue and white glowing snow leopard slowly stalks forward.
The big cat curiously tilts its head to the side. "And who might you be?"
"Uchiha Madara. You are this girl's guardian..?"
"I am a lot of things." The mysterious cat smirks.
Madara looks at the cat, confused. 'Is it possible for a cat to smirk..? How.. Interesting.' "You are not a normal animal guardian. Who are you?"
Maniacal laughter fills the odd room. "Oh but this is fun! Why don't you guess? Oh but I'm sure you have never heard of me." The cat begins to circle around Madara, chuckling.
"I grow tired of this useless drivel. Release her dormant abilities and I may just leave you with your life, cat."
The cat stops for a moment. "I do not threaten." And he vanishes.
"...Wha-"
After a blast of blinding light, he jolts out of her mind.
Suzuna slowly comes back to the present. "M-Madara-sama? Did it work?"
Flinching, he says, "If you glowing blue is of any indication, then yes."
Looking down at herself, "I feel, like I can do anything." She looks up at him with wide eyes.
"Let us test your new abilities." He grins. "Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!"
'..What?! OH GOD?' "Uhh..! Suiton: Suihachi!" 'What is this?! I don't even..' Jets of water spew out of her hands to counter the great fireball. The fire however proves to be to much and she dodges out of the way at the last second. Gasping in shock. "Madara-sama!" Pouting at her near death experience. 'So mean!'
Smirking, he informs her, "Your eyes, they are glowing like mine, only blue. I wonder.." Pausing for a moment. 'Sure why not.' "Copy what I do." He then dishes out hand signs at a impossible speed, using a multitude of flashy jutsu's.
'Oh my gosh oh my gosh! Ok lets see..' "Ok! I got this!.. Heh heh.. Oh boy.." Concentrating, she begins the hand signs slowly before becoming more confident, gaining speed. "I'm doing it I'm doing it!" Jumping for joy. "Yay!" She yells, laughing and smiling while jumping up and down..
Smirking, Madara lays a hand on her shoulder, stopping her celebration. "Quick indeed.. You will join me."
With a bright smile, beaming up at him, she says, "Yes, Madara-sama!"
So.. What did you think? :D
