Wolfy: well... I can't wait for Kuri to finish the totr2 so I will
write about happenings of Deodesh before he joins their group.
Rave: Yay! You're writing again whoo!
Kuri: About time ya decided to go on
Wolfy: yeah yeah =P anyway lets get this story started shall we?
Tomb 1:Intrusion
As Deodesh lay asleep next to his fair maiden writhing in his everlasting nightmare, something lurked in the shadows outside of his cottage. As the blackened figure crept to the single door Deo's wolven ears perked to the soft thud of the earth. He stirred from his bone-chilling nightmare with a start. "Who ever it is... Ill kill them..." he sprang from the deep pile of lace cushions that lay ornately over the bed with a small clap of fur meeting ivory. He ran to the crawl space to greeted by the sounds of a wooden door being crumbled in. "they're paying for that..." he concentrated on his body for a moment his form melting into the earth. A grayish tent of soil moved rapidly to the hidden entrance of the fireplace. Another crash this time of some type of pottery crashing against the ground resonated through the dank air.
"Where are you!? Show yourself I have a message for you from my master Freheiyl."
Deo rose from the ground behind the ghoul and tapped her on the shoulder. "You know... you really should have knocked first... It's more polite" He smirked as the ghoul froze in her tracks.
She wheeled around on him throwing her force behind her left fist aiming for his jaw, only to have it snatched in one of his left paw by the mid wrist his grip was like iron. "Let me go animal!" she hissed through her teeth.
"What and let you hit me? I think not... time to die insolent whelp..." He pulled his left arm back his claws jutting from their sheathed position aiming for the ghoul's heart. Deo lunged his hand forward for the kill when she yelled out.
"Stop stop! I can take you to Freheiyl" He stopped right as his claws touched her aqua blue sleeveless T-shirt; he tacked his claws rhythmically against her chest. He leaned down sniffing the air around her.
"Speak... you have two minutes..." He leaned his towering frame back up the scent of roses still wafting in his nostrils he had to hold back a sneeze that had built up in the back of his twitching nostrils. He let her left hand go and it fell limply to her side deep gash marks where his claws had bitten into the skin of her forearm and wrist.
"I...I... I can lead you... to him... but you will need more than yourself... He controls powerful magicks that you couldn't possible fathom." Her azure eyes where shaking with fear as her form trembled like a sapling in a raging windstorm. "Just... don't ki.. kill me... please..." she managed a frail smile as she looked up at him in his silver blue eyes they seemed to burn like the fires of hell itself. A small chuckle rose from him as he moved his hand away from her chest he began laughing the fire all but gone. "What's so funny!" she yelled at him stomping her high heeled foot almost slipping but caching herself on the broken table. Deo burst out into a full laughing fit after that. She stood and dusted her faded denim jeans one leg ripped off at the kneecap.
He finally stopped and stood to his full 6'7'' height looking down at her mere 5'4'' stature her auburn hair trickling over her shoulders and to the midriff of her stomach and back. Her deeply tanned skin looked like a horses hide. "So.. What else do I get for not killing you..."? He looked around the whole cottage was in ruins all his pictures where broken and torn his table with his ancient Egyptian pottery was broken all to hell, the door had been broken off the hinges a splintered hole punched into it. "You did some pretty serious damage to my house, someone's going to have to clean it up." Deo's gaze fell upon her once again "What's your name missy.."
"My name is of no consequence to you." She was glaring at him with eyes as cold as an artic glacier. "And if you think i'm cleaning this up your crazy I'm not your ghoul..." she poked him in the stomach with her forefinger for infuses.
He snatched her finger in his right hand again. "That's right you aren't are you... your that lechers ghoul... so I guess I'll be killing you then." He smirked down at her she had begun shaking in fear again.
"No..no... don't do that.. I'll clean it up.. I swear" her voice was shaking almost as bad as her body.
"I can't have a ghoul under someone else working under me... so what are we going to do about that..." His smirk grew even bigger if that where even possible.
Her eyes grew as big as a softball "You can't be serious..." she looked into his stern eyes and realized he was and if she said no she was probably kill her. "Ohh fine... I am yours to command" she looked at the floor and huffed.
"Now that you are under my service.. What's your name missy" He wasn't about to let go of the subject, he would use this to his advantage and finally get revenge on the damndable wizard. Deo laughed in the back of his mind at the thoughts of the impending battle, he would tear the damned fool apart.
"My master called me Efferri and I have adopted the name."
"Your master has good taste in names at least... bad taste in people to mess with... anyway Efferri clean this up... and I will give you money to go to town and buy new items... and perhaps more for yourself" he looked her up and down "you look like you need it... anyway clean this up in one hour and I will give you one hundred extra."
"ONE HOUR!!!! I CANT GET THIS DONE IN AN HOUR! ITS IMPOSSIBLE" she screamed at the top of her lungs.
"Nothings impossible only improbable and now you have fifty-nine minutes get to work..." He said as he went to the fireplace and disappeared from sight back into the earth.
She began cleaning frenzied manor "That asshole... next he'll ask me to bed him..."
Wolfy: so how ya like the beginning of my new story? Good I hope
Rave: Ya it's good
Kuri: Very nice...
Wolfy: good to hear such good responses hope you readers will actually review! *hint hint* anyways later all don't forget to look for more soon. Next chapter should be interesting someone might even be seen. *hint hint*
Rave: Yay! You're writing again whoo!
Kuri: About time ya decided to go on
Wolfy: yeah yeah =P anyway lets get this story started shall we?
Tomb 1:Intrusion
As Deodesh lay asleep next to his fair maiden writhing in his everlasting nightmare, something lurked in the shadows outside of his cottage. As the blackened figure crept to the single door Deo's wolven ears perked to the soft thud of the earth. He stirred from his bone-chilling nightmare with a start. "Who ever it is... Ill kill them..." he sprang from the deep pile of lace cushions that lay ornately over the bed with a small clap of fur meeting ivory. He ran to the crawl space to greeted by the sounds of a wooden door being crumbled in. "they're paying for that..." he concentrated on his body for a moment his form melting into the earth. A grayish tent of soil moved rapidly to the hidden entrance of the fireplace. Another crash this time of some type of pottery crashing against the ground resonated through the dank air.
"Where are you!? Show yourself I have a message for you from my master Freheiyl."
Deo rose from the ground behind the ghoul and tapped her on the shoulder. "You know... you really should have knocked first... It's more polite" He smirked as the ghoul froze in her tracks.
She wheeled around on him throwing her force behind her left fist aiming for his jaw, only to have it snatched in one of his left paw by the mid wrist his grip was like iron. "Let me go animal!" she hissed through her teeth.
"What and let you hit me? I think not... time to die insolent whelp..." He pulled his left arm back his claws jutting from their sheathed position aiming for the ghoul's heart. Deo lunged his hand forward for the kill when she yelled out.
"Stop stop! I can take you to Freheiyl" He stopped right as his claws touched her aqua blue sleeveless T-shirt; he tacked his claws rhythmically against her chest. He leaned down sniffing the air around her.
"Speak... you have two minutes..." He leaned his towering frame back up the scent of roses still wafting in his nostrils he had to hold back a sneeze that had built up in the back of his twitching nostrils. He let her left hand go and it fell limply to her side deep gash marks where his claws had bitten into the skin of her forearm and wrist.
"I...I... I can lead you... to him... but you will need more than yourself... He controls powerful magicks that you couldn't possible fathom." Her azure eyes where shaking with fear as her form trembled like a sapling in a raging windstorm. "Just... don't ki.. kill me... please..." she managed a frail smile as she looked up at him in his silver blue eyes they seemed to burn like the fires of hell itself. A small chuckle rose from him as he moved his hand away from her chest he began laughing the fire all but gone. "What's so funny!" she yelled at him stomping her high heeled foot almost slipping but caching herself on the broken table. Deo burst out into a full laughing fit after that. She stood and dusted her faded denim jeans one leg ripped off at the kneecap.
He finally stopped and stood to his full 6'7'' height looking down at her mere 5'4'' stature her auburn hair trickling over her shoulders and to the midriff of her stomach and back. Her deeply tanned skin looked like a horses hide. "So.. What else do I get for not killing you..."? He looked around the whole cottage was in ruins all his pictures where broken and torn his table with his ancient Egyptian pottery was broken all to hell, the door had been broken off the hinges a splintered hole punched into it. "You did some pretty serious damage to my house, someone's going to have to clean it up." Deo's gaze fell upon her once again "What's your name missy.."
"My name is of no consequence to you." She was glaring at him with eyes as cold as an artic glacier. "And if you think i'm cleaning this up your crazy I'm not your ghoul..." she poked him in the stomach with her forefinger for infuses.
He snatched her finger in his right hand again. "That's right you aren't are you... your that lechers ghoul... so I guess I'll be killing you then." He smirked down at her she had begun shaking in fear again.
"No..no... don't do that.. I'll clean it up.. I swear" her voice was shaking almost as bad as her body.
"I can't have a ghoul under someone else working under me... so what are we going to do about that..." His smirk grew even bigger if that where even possible.
Her eyes grew as big as a softball "You can't be serious..." she looked into his stern eyes and realized he was and if she said no she was probably kill her. "Ohh fine... I am yours to command" she looked at the floor and huffed.
"Now that you are under my service.. What's your name missy" He wasn't about to let go of the subject, he would use this to his advantage and finally get revenge on the damndable wizard. Deo laughed in the back of his mind at the thoughts of the impending battle, he would tear the damned fool apart.
"My master called me Efferri and I have adopted the name."
"Your master has good taste in names at least... bad taste in people to mess with... anyway Efferri clean this up... and I will give you money to go to town and buy new items... and perhaps more for yourself" he looked her up and down "you look like you need it... anyway clean this up in one hour and I will give you one hundred extra."
"ONE HOUR!!!! I CANT GET THIS DONE IN AN HOUR! ITS IMPOSSIBLE" she screamed at the top of her lungs.
"Nothings impossible only improbable and now you have fifty-nine minutes get to work..." He said as he went to the fireplace and disappeared from sight back into the earth.
She began cleaning frenzied manor "That asshole... next he'll ask me to bed him..."
Wolfy: so how ya like the beginning of my new story? Good I hope
Rave: Ya it's good
Kuri: Very nice...
Wolfy: good to hear such good responses hope you readers will actually review! *hint hint* anyways later all don't forget to look for more soon. Next chapter should be interesting someone might even be seen. *hint hint*