Here's my final oneshot in my series The Monster. And although no that many people have read the series overall (most likely because of its rating) I'm having the series made into a multi-chapter fanfiction, that I'm almost positive will have more feedback. It's not like I can complain about anyone not reading this because I don't read anything under M anyway (except for a few that was by Rizember who is an amazing writer and makes everything as good as the best!) and there are a lot of good T rated fics out there. So, from now on, I'm going to look for fics of ALL ratings (*sigh* even K) and review them all. Becuase not only M rated fics are the best!
Yours In Wonderland,
mu149
Naruto
It was all because of him
The Need pulses through me
Faster than Kirin
Hotter than Amaterasu
Everything's on fire
Burning
Screaming for release
And then all too quickly
It explodes
Everything dissipates
All the pleasure
All the pain
God, the euphoric pain that kept me grounded until this moment
Nothing else mattered the few seconds that followed my release of Need
But him
Not even me
Not anymore
Only him
Uzumaki Naruto
Perfect Naruto
The perfect temptation that dragged me into the clutches of the monster
Until I was addicted
Hard
For life
It didn't matter
Nothing else was as important to me as he was
It was only him
My addiction
The source of my Need that grew so violently that it engulfed us within minutes
I was completely and inexplicable trapped by him
I belonged to my addiction
To Naruto
And I couldn't leave
I refused to
I never had a doubt
And when I did he was there
Tempting me with that orgasmic body
With his sultry voice
And I was addicted all over again
There was no reason for me to leave
Naruto made sure of that
But there was every reason to stay
Stay for him
Stay for Naruto
For this Need that pulsed through my every vein
It was so hot
Fire blazed through me at times
Often
It was like simmering coals
Just the faint reminder of what it could be
Always hiding below the surface
Patiently waiting
For my addiction
For Naruto
Because nothing else mattered
And when he would appear
Nothing else was there
And the addiction grabbed hold of me again
All of me
And it refused to let go
He never let go
Like if he did, I would disappear from his sight
I am weak
Weaker than I should be
Only a second with my addiction and I'm on my knees
But I don't care
My Addiction was the only thing that would satisfy my Need to live
My Need for him
A Need that would not stop
Could not
I yearned for release
Begged for salvation
But it was only him
The source of my Addiction
A Need that devoured me to my very core
A great dependence on something
That was not easy to break
Impossible to break
Impossible to leave
But so easy to stay
Addiction
It was what happened after you heard the Monster
The Monster introduces you to the possibility
To the temptation
My perfect temptation
Naruto
Perfect Naruto
A Sun-kissed God that would bring any nation to its downfall
But he was all I knew
All I wanted
Every second, the Need grew stronger
It was always tempting me
Whispering words of doubt
Words of comfort
Words that would always win out
And it was all his fault
He was there
My small moment of weakness
With the perfect temptation that would drive a lesser man to insanity
And I fell
Hard
So foolishly
I fell in love
With the temptation
My Addiction
My Need
It was almost too easy
Allowing myself to be taken to a higher high than I was ever capable of
And even if I wanted to leave
It was impossible
I couldn't get him out of my head
Each time I closed my eyes
I saw him
Every night he would be there
And I would relive the night of ecstasy again
Where he would always whisper
Those four meaningful words that kill me every time
"I love you, Sasuke…"
And the Need would burn all the brighter
It was like an addiction
Like the monster was still here
I was hooked
Again
To Naruto
The perfect temptation
And now I can't get enough of it
Of him
Every second of my existence
I Needed him
Cried for him
Begged
And I would do anything to obtain that in which I desired with such a passion
I used to be satiated just by looking
Fantasizing about that perfect body
Growing hot by the mere thought of being within him
Buried so deep I'd suffocate
But that was before I met the monster
Before I developed an addiction
And before this became a Need
And now all I can do is stare into those eyes
Those orgasmic lust-filled eyes
As he parts that perfect mouth
And moan those perfect words that drive me to insanity
"I need you Sasuke…"
And just like that, it all ends
Because nothing else matters
When he moans those perfect words
Those words that drive me to insanity
Coming from that perfect mouth
And now all he can see is me
With those orgasmic lust-filled eyes
And I can't help but wonder
What was it like before
Before this became a Need
Before I developed an addiction
Before I met the monster
Before then I would be buried in the thought of being with him
Fantasizing about that perfect body
And I would quench this thirst just by looking
Taking in all he had to give with my probing eyes
But that was no more
Now
I would do anything to obtain what I desired
I would beg
Cry
Scream
Because I was nothing without it
Without him
I needed him
Every second of my existence
All of him
I couldn't get enough
Naruto was perfect
The perfect temptation
And I was hooked
Again
As if the Monster was still there
Like an Addiction
And the Need would burn all the brighter
Each time he whispered those words
Those four meaningful words that killed me
"I love you, Sasuke."
And I would always hear them in my night of ecstasy
Each time I closed my eyes
And it was impossible to leave
It's not like I wanted to
And allowed myself to be taken to a higher high than I ever was capable of
It was almost too easy
Giving in to it
My Need
My Addiction
The Monster
And I fell in love
With the temptation
So foolishly
I fell
Hard
Because he was there
My small moment of weakness
The perfect temptation that would drive a lesser man to insanity
And it was always his fault
All his fault
Whispering words
Words that would always win out
Words of comfort
Words of doubt
Tempting me
And every second I was with that temptation
The Need grew stronger
And he was all I wanted
All I knew
A sun-kissed God that ended up bringing every nation to its downfall
Perfect Naruto
My Naruto
My perfect temptation
The temptation
That the Monster introduced me to
And I was so easily addicted
Addiction
It was what happened after you heard the Monster
And it was so easy to stay
Impossible to leave
Impossible to break
That was not meant to break
A great dependence on something
A Need that devoured me to my very core
The source of my Addiction
Only him
And I would scream
Beg for salvation
Yearned for release
From the Need
A Need that would not stop
Could not stop
My Need for him
Because my Addiction was the only thing
That would satisfy my Need to live
My Need for him
And he was my Addiction
My temptation
My world
I was weak
Weaker than I should've been
But I didn't care
Because nothing else mattered
And when I was with Naruto
Nothing else was there
And the Addiction grabbed hold of me again
All of me
And it refused to let go
Naruto never let go
Like he was addicted just as hard as I was
Like I was his Need
His Addiction
Because my Addiction for him was patiently waiting
Always hiding below the surface
With the faint reminder of what it could be
But only simmering coals
As it appeared to be often
But mostly
Fire blazed through me
It was so hot
This Need that pulsed through my every vein
Told me-
Commanded me-
Screamed for me to
Stay for him
For Naruto
Because there was every reason to stay
Naruto made sure of that
That there was no reason to leave
And I was addicted all over again
Whispering words of temptation with his sultry voice
Tempting me all the more with that orgasmic body
To smother all my doubts
I never had one though
I refused to
Because I couldn't leave
I belonged to my Addiction
To Naruto
And I was completely and inexplicably trapped by him
The source of my need
A Need that grew so violently that it engulfed us within minutes
My Addiction
It was only him
Nothing else was as important to me as he was
Because nothing else mattered
Because I was addicted for life
Hard
And it came so naturally
The perfect temptation that dragged me into the clutches of the monster
Perfect Naruto
Uzumaki Naruto
Because nothing else mattered that followed my release of Need
But him
Not even me
Not anymore
And God-
The euphoric pain that grounded me until that moment
Couldn't be described
Because all the pain
And all the pleasure
Everything
All of it dissipates
It explodes
All too quickly
Because I was screaming for release
Burning
Everything was on fire
Hotter than Amaterasu
Faster than Kirin
The Need that pulsed through me
And all because of him
Naruto
There you have it! If you want, check out the first two in this series, The Monster and My Addiction. And keep your eyes out for Monster by xXxvirtuosoxXx because he's the one publishing my oneshots into multi-chapter fics.
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