Vietvn: Okay, so Im gonna try to narrarate how this story would sound like if someone was telling it(plus a little dialogue from the characters) instead of it being a video/movie like story. Now the story is really sad (in my opinion) and its seperated into two parts. I'm gonna be following the format of how the story is broken down into those parts which will result to this being somewhat of a two shot/songfic if you must. If you still need visual aid to this story then go look up the video on youtube (Timeless korean mv BUT DO IT AFTER READING MY STORY LMAOO...No seriously.) And the characters are roughly 17-18 years old. I'll give the sum of the story at the end if you don't get it :P
So here we go, onto part one.
Small Note: ITALICS + BOLD equal LYRICS
ITALICS equal VISIONS
ITALICS + 'COMMAS QUOT.' equal 'Character Thoughts'
Disclaimer: This story line is NOT MINE, I just wanna re-write it as a story that you would read instead of watch because I absolutely love the story. I don't own the beyblade characters but I do own my OC so woohoo, onto the story now.
Timeless Part One
The sun peaked over the horizon in Tokyo and slowly began to rise from its sleep. The bustling city of Tokyo was still barely awake when a disturbance raced through it. Numerous police forces sped up ramps leading to the upper floor of a parking lot building. They assembled quickly, circling around the area on the ground and up in higher places where they all had a clear view of the figures dressed in black. Guns and rifles were directly pointed to the terrorist but none were fired because of the innocent person a terrorist was holding hostage.
A black car rushed into the scene and the door immediately opened. Stepping out, the young Chinese man made his way to one of the approaching officers that greeted him.
"What's the situation here, Lee?" The addressed man handed the chief officer a holster with a pistol secured to it.
"We've got three terrorist who tried escaping from a robbery but we've managed to corner them but they got a hostage so we're all on standby, Chief."
The young chief slipped off the black jacket he was wearing to replace it with a protective black vest over his white collared shirt. He took the offered holster and secured it around his waist on his black pants. He turned his gaze up ahead where the three terrorist were, his brows furrowed into a serious expression.
"Tell the snipers to remain in their position; if they can get an opening then they can fire at will. We'll try to settle this calmly with the terrorist, if they're not going to co-operate then we'll just have to do it the hard way then."
"Roger that Chief."
The young man smiled at his friend, "You don't always have to call me Chief, Lee. We're friends right?"
"Yeah...You're right...Ray..."
Ray grinned at his reply before his expression returned back to a more serious one. He slowly began to make his way to the front of the group of police officers and cars that surrounded the three men in black, his arms were raised slightly to show that he was not armed.
"Hey, listen, buddy. Why don't you just let her go and we can deal this in a way that'll work for both of us..." Ray spoke calmly as he tried to reason with the man holding the hostage, despite the pistols and rifles pointed his way.
Baby come close let me tell you this
In a whisper my heart says you know it too
Baby we both share a secret wish
And you're feeling my love reaching out to you
The man scoffed behind his mask, "Heh, like that'll ever happen. Why don't you just back off and let us go before I end up shooting her." He pulled the young woman that was hidden off to the side of him with a jerk of his arm. Once she faced the front directly, he directed the gun to her head.
Ray finally got the chance to look at the woman clearly. Shock overcame his features but no sooner, rage began to burn in his eyes as he gritted his teeth.
'Suki...'
Without a second thought to his actions, he pulled out the pistol from his holster and pointed it at the captor.
"DROP THE GUN NOW!"
"Ray!" The young woman could barely manage to shout from her captor's hold on her. His arm held her in a headlock that was soon making it hard for her to breathe as she was being jerked around. She gripped her hands on the captor's arm, trying to make him loosen his hold but it was no use.
"DROP THE GUN NOW BEFORE I SHOOT!"
"IF YOU SHOOT THEN I'LL SHOOT HER!"
"Ray! Please!"
Ray could see the definite fear in her eyes and it was written on her face too. It pained him to see that her life was in someone else's hands. He gripped the pistol harder, trying desperately to think of someway to get her out of there. Just like how Ray saw the fear in her eyes, she too could see it in him. He feared for her life as she feared for his.
Timeless
Don't let it end (no)
Now that you're right here in my arms where you should stay
Hold tight baby
Timeless
Don't let it fade out of sight
Just let the moments sweep us both away
Lifting us to where
We both agree
This is timeless love
"I WON'T ASK AGAIN! PUT THE GUN DOWN!"
"Ray..."She cried weakly.
The captor behind the mask scanned the many police officers and a few SWAT units, sweeping the gun in all of their direction once in a while.
"ANY OF YOU SHOOT, SHE GETS IT!"
He glanced around again but soon found one officer off to the side inching closer to his way. He knew immediately that he was ready to shoot despite his warnings.
"I'M WARNING YOU!"
The officer still didn't heed his warnings and fired a daring shot at him. He jerked his hostage out of the way and the shot missed and without thinking about it, he fired a return shot back. The bullet shot and made contact on the young chief. A spurt of blood and a falling body left nearly everyone who had witnessed speechless.
The young woman stood frozen along with her captor in shock.
'Ray...No...'
I see it all baby in your eyes
When you look at me I know I feel it too (yes I do)
So let's sail away and be forever baby
Where the crystal ocean melts into the sky
It's been nearly two months after that day. Suki took every chance she had to visit the one she loved and every time she saw what condition he was in, it only made her break down in tears. Ray was rushed to the hospital soon after from getting shot while she was left only to watch as the terrorist and the police crew broke out in a shooting war. She was knocked unconscious afterwards without having any memory of how she had managed to get out safely.
After hearing the news that Ray was still alive in the hospital, she spared no time getting there to see him. Her hopes were held too high as she came and had a word with the doctor on details of his conditions.
"He may still be alive but he's in a deep coma. The bullet made contact with part of his head, he's barely hanging on." Suki's eyes widen and she looked at the doctor desperately.
"Will he ever wake up?"
"I'm afraid that's not possible...I'm sorry." Without another word, the doctor left Suki rooted to her spot, unable to recover from the shock she was in to question him further.
Now here she sat with tears brimming over her eyes, watching over the peaceful figure of the sleeping Ray.
"Ray...Of all the jobs you had to take on, it was a police officer huh?" She spoke softly to him though she knew she'll never get a response. Suki reached out her hand and placed it gently over Ray's.
"Please Ray...Please...Just open your eyes..." She knew her pleas were left unheard but that reality was something she can't grow to accept.
We shouldn't let the moment pass
Making me shiver let's make it last
Why should we lose it don't ever let me go
"Man, it's been so long since we've went out!"
"Yeah, we've been pretty busy lately."
"But it's our job so we should expect it."
"True Tala..true..."
Four figures made their way through a lounge in a high class suite, having plans of heading out for the night. Three of the four were talking amongst themselves while the last remained silent. Just as they were nearing the suite exit, the navy haired teen faltered in his steps. He winced in pain as he clutched his chest.
"Kai? You okay?" His red head friend asked, concerned as he steadied the bluenette. Kai glanced up weakly at Tala, trying to push himself off the slightly taller teen but was overpowered by the searing pain as it worsened. His whole body fell limp and he collapsed onto the ground, still clutching his chest.
"Kai! Kai! What's wrong?!"
"We should get him to a hospital! Quick!"
The remaining teens heaved their fallen friend and quickly made their way to the medics.
Timeless
Don't let it end (no)
Now that you're right here in my arms where you should stay
Hold tight baby
Timeless
Don't let it fade out of sight
Just let the moments sweep us both away
Lifting us to where
We both agree
This is timeless love
That night, Suki was soon accompanied by many other people who now stood inside Ray's room. The head of his family had heard of the news and after a long talk amongst the family, they decided that it was best to let him go. Suki was overwhelmed by the news but she knew that Ray would not last long if he was kept in the way he was. A priest had also accompanied the family when they arrived, ready to wish peace on Ray and hope his spirit can rest at last.
Suki had to turn away from, hiding her flowing tears as they unplug the life support. The constant pulsing beep changed to the long, dead drone.
"The least we could do is donating the organs, that way he'll still be saving lives after death." She heard one of the elders say as they were given the forms to sign.
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah
Baby its timeless
Oh baby its timeless
(Hold tight baby)
"He needs a heart transplant?" repeated Tala after the doctor had told him the condition of his friend. The doctor nodded in confirmation.
"He'll need it immediately, so are you willing to pay the expenses?"
"Yes."
The doctor handed over the consent forms and Tala placed his signature under the agreement line. The doctor took the form and handed a copy of it back to Tala and with a nod the doctor went straight to getting everything prepared.
Timeless
Don't let it end (no)
Now that you're right here in my arms where you should stay
Hold tight baby
Timeless
Don't let it fade out of sight
Just let the moments sweep us both away
Lifting us to where
We both agree
This is timeless
This is timeless
Love...
To Be Continued...
R&R! Before going on the next chapter please :)