Okay this is my very first story on here, so be sure to leave your thoughts on this, constructive criticism. Please don't just point out just the issues, leave one thing you liked about it to give me more information about what to fix and what to keep.
On a side note, I don't own Doctor Who or the Percy Jackson and The Olympians.
It had been a few weeks since Percy and Annabeth the other five members had gotten out of the very incarnation of hell, Tartarus. But Percy was growing weary, more so then when he had to defend Olympus while those whom he cared about died and suffered. He had a long running thought about wether or not he should run from his journey. He pondered this as he walked the streets of Rome, they had been resting there for awhile to make repairs and regain strength. He was either fortunately or unfortunately alone.
Meanwhile in Space...
The Doctor was not having a good day, so far his latest companion refused to travel with him any longer and on top of that he was being pursed by his newest enemy, an enemy who now held Timelord technology, they were a brand new enemy who had dug up remains of a Timelord colony, it had been the first to fall in the great Time War { A/N Don't really know if Timelords actually have colonies}. Not a TARDIS, but they held weaponry capable of destroying one. So The Doctor prepared to make a completely random jump in time and space. He pulled the final lever and the TARDIS shot off through the Time Vortex into the great unknown.
Back on Earth...
Percy rubbed his eyes, not knowing if some one had drugged him and he was hallucinating , or even worse this was real; after all a blue phone box had randomly and suddenly materialized in front of him. And then it opened slowly, his hand crept down to his pocket and pulled out his pen, he uncapped it and Riptide elongated into his hand. And then the worst creature ran out of the box, a cloth covering his mouth. " Who the hell are you!?" Percy questioned while raising his blade to the man's throat. "Uh hello I'm The Doctor and I please ask you to lower your weapon. You know? This reminds me of when I visited Troy during that huge war, ah you humans and your love triangles." Percy was highly confused by this strange, strange man; so he asked the first question that came to mind "Doctor who?" The man known as The Doctor grinned and surveyed the area, " Ohh I'm guessing Rome , 2011? Huh of all the places The TARDIS chose here why?" He then glanced at Percy "Oh, I think I found a new companion" then to Percy " You need to come with me, it might not be safe here" Percy looked at him, his interest was definitely at a peak and the man didn't seem like a monster or god so why not?
And then he said the one thing that changed his life more then when he found out he was a Half-Blood. "Let's go." and with that he walked into the strange little blue box and into a new beginning...
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