An: Okay my second attempt at a sailor moon fic. I will be updating my other stories soon. Anyway on with the show.
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN SAILOR MOON. IF I DID THE GENERALS WOULD HAVE BEEN WITH THE SENSHI.
A second chance at perfection
Prolouge: Judgement
Five young men lay commatose on the cold hard marble floor, each man was
bespattered with blood, sweat, and dirt. They were all very noble men once. They
were often associated with honor, glory, loyalty, and love. They all had this but it
was all quickly lost. A twist of fate was what changed it all. For jelousy is a dangerous thing when a woman is involed, and thus our story begins.
"Get up you betrayers of earth and duty. Get up for you can not sleep any longer.
Sleep longer and your judgment will never be passed. Now arise," the maroon eyed senshi commanded. With the tap of her staff on the floor, a jolt was sent through their once un-moving bodies. The leader of the lot was the first to stir. His silvery grey eyes opened and he quickly picked himself up off of the white marble. The next to rise was a sky blue eyed youth who grumbled in reply to the kick he had received. Thus the other three rose and stood to attention as the time guardian's intent gaze roamed over them.
"It appears that you must be made to look more presentable," she murmered.
With a wave of her hand, they instantly looked more "presentable."
"Follow me," she said turning and heading through a 100 foot tall white door. They
followed silently single file and instantly droped to one knee as they were infront of
royalty higher than they.
"You are all here for judgement," The former silver haired Queen of the Moon said.
"Judgement for your crimes," the former Queen of Mercurey said.
"Your betrayals," the former Jenovian King of Jupiter said harshly.
"Of your land," the former War King of Mars said.
"Your hearts," the former seductive Queen of Venus said.
"You have been condemed for two millenia of solitude from earth. The silver alliance no longer exists. The nine planets have been destroyed as have their rulers. We are all in the hall of time. A realm that only we are the inhabitants of. You five will be evaluatted and watched," the silver haired Queen said. Her hands were placed neatly in her lap.
"The Princesses will pass two millenia without you. We are still trying to determine
whether or not you shall return by the third millenia," the golden haired Queen said.
"You are dismissed," the War King said.
"If I may, your majesty," the former Prince of Earth said to the former Queen of
the Moon.
"Yes Endymion," she said her silvery blue eyes flashing.
"Where is the Princess Serenity?" he asked cautiously.
"The location of my daughter is NONE of your concern," she said tightly.
"Of course, excuse my rudeness for asking such a question," he said bowing and
stepping back.
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"King Aeries where is the Princess Reitera?" I asked unabashed.
"She is not yours to inquire of General!" He bellowed rising from his throne.
I bowed in reply and followed my comrades out of the chamber. Lady Pluti led us
to our living quarters. And I must say we were all relieved to see that they were inhabitable.
The walls were a soft natural white (they were not white enough to blind us), the floor was a light wood, twenty rows of bookcases lined the walls (to which Zosite quicky went to), there was a large window with a spacious balcony (Nephrite quickly retreated to this area), there was a fireplace with five chairs located right between two bookcases (Endymion quickly sat by the fire), and there was a large set of double doors that led to the training grounds and garden (of course Kunzite went to this area, sword in hand). I sighed and, controling my rage, followed him.
He moved as fluidly and quickly as a serpent, going from one technique to the other. I brought out my bow and arrow and tapped him on the shoulder. I asked to join him, or I would, have had I not had my feet kicked from under me.
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I swung around and kicked his feet from under him, his only reply was an ompf and a deadly glare. I offered him my hand which he took as I helped him off of the ground.
"I forgot about that, or was that your way of getting your anger out?" he said
raising a golden brow.
"Yes you may join me," I said simply and then we trained. He had his magniificent
red and black bow and arrow that Princess Reitera had given him. He notched a red feathered arrow on to the bow and fired. I deflected it and soon started to sweat
as he continued to fire more arrows and I continued to deflect them.
"I'm going to leave you now to sort out your thoughts," he said retreiveing the last
arrow. I nodded in reply. He left and I trained longer, my thoughts wandered to
how I had first met my golden haloed angel.
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I was eight and my mother was still alive. I had inherited my silvery grey eyes from her and the silver hair from my father.
"Kunzite Malachite Shin you will come to your father's banquet and that is final,"
she said her silver grey eyes flashing and her pale blonde hair swooshing as she
left the room. I sighed and quickly followed, my cape billowing out behind me.
I waited at the top of the stairs to be announced and walked down. I heard
the crowd gasp as my booted foot touch the bottom of the stairs and turned to
see gold and yellow tumble down the stairs. I rushed up as the petite body
touched the third stair and scooped the small body up into my arms. Her small hands grasped my shoulders and then she looked up. I was lost in a sea of dark blue eyes.
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We met eleven years later. She was once again a vision of gold and sun kissed blond hair this time with the shape and grace of a woman. At 18 years-old every man wanted her. She had the look of a goddess at five feet ten inches, a slender, but voluptuous, hour glass figure, and full pink lips. I shook my head sheathed my sword, and walked down the stairs to my room. The others had retired long before I had, but this was often not uncommon. I always did seem to stay awake at night. I opened the door, located my bed, and fell into a fitful sleep.
AN:WHAT DO YOU THINK GOOD? BAD? Stop? Continue? Please leave constructive critisism. LATERS
