Title: The Real-er Orange County
Rating: PG-13 ish.
Disclaimer: I do not in anyway own the O.C. characters or Laguna Beach people. Most of the dialogue is from Laguna Beach, not from me.
Summary: Love triangle, exactly like in the show Laguna Beach, Alex is Stephen, Marissa is LC and Kristin is Kristin. This story is Laguna Beach, but with O.C. characters, I guess anyway.
Summer- Lo character
Lindsey-Christina character
Taylor- Morgan character
Ryan-Trey character
Seth- Talan character
Kaitlin- Jessica character
Other characters thrown in at random.
Starts at a beach in Laguna. It shows people in the water. It goes to a brunette girl, who is walking on the beach. We find out she is Marissa, who narrates the show.
Marissa (Voice over) : This is where it all happened. New Port, California. A small town in the OC where I grew up. (It shows scenes of her senior year, like the black and white party and prom) I just finished my senior year of high school, a year I'll never forget. I'm really gonna miss my friends. Especially my best friend, Summer. (It shows another brunette girl. That's Summer. It shows her and Marissa hanging out together) No matter how crazy it got this year, I could always count on Summer. (Shows a redheaded girl, her friend Lindsey. It shows her singing and hanging out at the black and white party) That's Lindsey. She's the reverend's daughter. No, really, she is. (Shows another brunette girl. She is Lindsey's best friend Taylor) There's Taylor. Her goal is to save herself for the right guy. (Shows a sandy blond guy skateboarding) That's Ryan. I guess you could say he was the serious one. But he also had the best party house in Laguna. (Shows a brunette guy surfing named Seth) The guy on the surfboard, that's Seth. He's a junior and he's hooked up with most of the girls at our school, twice. (Shows a blond girl named Kristin) That, that would be Kristin, another junior. Wherever Kristin went drama followed. (Shows drama that involves Kristin then shows her in her pool) She thinks she's hot. Okay, I guess she is, but she can't stand me. (Shows Marissa and Kristin) Here's the reason why. (Shows a blonde named Alex) Alex. I guess she's kind of her girlfriend. (First shows Alex with Kristin, then Alex and Marissa as kids, then them now, Marissa kissing Alex on the cheek) But Alex and I have been really close forever. (Shows a picture of them) We're even going to college together in San Francisco. (Shows Alex and Kristin, then Alex and Marissa on the beach) Kristin's the wrong girl for her. I'm just waiting for her to figure it out. (Shows Marissa on the beach) Oh, and me? I'm Marissa. (Shows pictures of her, then her on the phone) I've always been the nice girl. (Shows her checking out Alex at the party) But this year, I realized sometimes you just have to go after what you want. (Shows scenes from the party) And all this drama started with the black and white party.
Opening Credits
CUT TO: Outside MARISSA's house
Marissa: I want to go to the beach so bad.
Taylor: Well it's where you live.
Summer: I'm relaxing. This is nice.
Taylor: Are we gonna plan a theme party or what?
Marissa: Well what have we done so far? Like we've done the whole G.I. Joe…
Lindsey: Dress up, like a dress up party.
Summer: We did the astrocrat party, like trophy wife astrocrat.
Lindsey: But not like that.
Summer: Would this be like go get a cute new dress?
Marissa: Oh that could work.
Summer: We could make it like a black and white cocktail hour, black and white cocktail party.
Taylor: At Cami's, no one dressed up. We have to make sure you're not let in the door unless you're fully decked.
Marissa: Where do you wanna have it?
Summer: A hotel?
Taylor: That would be amazing.
Summer: (Gets ready to write) So what should the invitation say?
Lindsey: Everyone's gonna wear black and white so let's make it like a black and white…
Summer: A black and white affair?
Lindsey: That works.
Summer: Okay.
Marissa: Okay. Let's do the guest list.
Taylor: We'll do twenty and then ten, you know like if we forget you kind of thing. 'Cause a lot of times you're like "I meant to invite you, but I just forgot you."
Summer: Taylor. Who do we wanna come?
Marissa: Well us obviously.
Summer: Our friends. Mora, Brit, Jill, Jen, Sahara, Nate, Caitlin, Joselyn.
Marissa: Alex, Johnny, Ryan.
Summer: Kristin? (Marissa coughs) Drama.
Marissa: Yeah.
CUT TO: Kristin's House
She is lying in her pool when her phone rings. She gets out to answer it.
Kristin: Hello?
Kaitlin: Kristin.
Kristin: Hey Kait.
Kaitlin: Hey, what are you doing?
Kristin: I'm just laying out. What are you doing?
Kaitlin: Do you still wanna hang out later?
Kristin: Yeah I do. I'm just gonna visit Alex at the surf shop really quickly before I come get you, but it'll probably be around 8:30-9:00.
Kaitlin: How are you and Alex?
Kristin: We're good.
kaitlin: Aw.
Kristin: We're really good, yeah.
CUT TO: Alex's Work
Kristin walks in to see her.
Kristin: Alex.
Alex: Hello.
Kristin: Hi.
Alex: What's going on?
Kristin: Nothing, what are you doing? (They hug)
Alex: Nothing, working.
Kristin: How is it?
Alex: It's lagging. It's dead.
Kristin: Oh.
Alex: Shoot me now.
Kristin: What are you gonna do after?
Alex: Going to Ryan's barbecue.
Kristin: Are you gonna go to that?
Alex: I might have to go cook myself a steak. What are you going to do?
Kristin: I told Kaitlin I'd go hang out with her for a little while and then we're going to figure it out.
Alex: You don't wanna go to Ryan's at all?
Kristin: I don't know, call me when you get there. I'm not going if Marissa's going.
Alex: Really? (The phone rings)
Kristin: Aren't you going to get that?
Alex: The phone? (Picks it up)
Kristin: Surf and sport.
Alex: Surf and sport. Yes, we do do surf lessons. $8.00 a person per hour. Have a good night. (Hangs up) Thanks, surf lessons.
Kristin: Have fun working.
Alex: You're leaving me?
Kristin: Yeah, I told Kaitlin I'd go pick her up.
Alex: Thanks for coming by. (Kisses her on the head) Bye.
Kristin: Okay, bye Alex. (She leaves)
CUT TO: Ryan's Barbecue
Marissa: Hey Summer. It's Marissa. I'm still at Ryan's. I'm like the only senior girl here. So call me when you get this. Bye. (Hangs up her cell phone)
Luke: Coming over to Ryan's right now? We're having the pre sesh at Ryan's right now and after that we're going to my mom's house. (To Ryan) Is it okay if Shane cruises over too?
Ryan: Yeah.
Luke: Yeah, Shane, cruise on over buddy. Knock like dun dun dun dun dun dun, you know when you knock.
Johnny: Do you not like being here? Do you wanna leave?
Marissa: No I don't care.
Johnny: Alex's gonna be like in a little?
Marissa: Yeah. She's gonna come here.
Johnny: Are you gonna spend the night there?
Luke: Hey Johnny!
Johnny: I'm claiming that as mine. That was my hat for some night, I swear to God.
Luke: Ryan gave this to me. It's been at my house since he gave it to me.
Johnny: Bull s.
Luke: No it's not bull s.
Johnny: We're going bubble bathing tonight. You wanna come?
Marissa: Bubble bathing?
Luke: We're going to be putting bubble bath in Jacuzzi's so it creates a massive amount of bubbles.
Marissa: Why would you do that?
Luke: Why wouldn't you do that?
Marissa: Don't you have to empty the Jacuzzi?
Luke: We're not going to do it in my Jacuzzi.
Johnny: We're going to like a hotel.
Marissa: That's mean.
Johnny: That's mean?
Marissa: Yeah.
Johnny: Well I'll write them an I'm sorry letter.
Luke: How inconsiderate is that? She's like thinking about the hotel.
Johnny: Marissa always thinks about the smart s.
Luke: Remember when I used to be the smart one?
Johnny: No.
Marissa: (Laughs) Yeah, I don't remember that either.
Johnny: That never happened. (Alex comes) Lex! Lex! (Marissa watches her. Alex high fives Johnny)
Marissa: Hey. (She hugs Alex)
Alex: You solo?
MARISSA: Yeah.
CUT TO: Kristin's House
Kristin and Kaitlin are painting their feet.
Kaitlin: Kristin, you're supposed to put those on before you paint your toes.
Kristin: I forgot. I forgot.
Kaitlin: Do you know if Alex has talked to Marissa like recently at all?
Kristin: Uh, they're friends, but Marissa's a stuck up little brat.
Kristin: Oh I know.
Kristin: But Alex's mine. (They laugh)
Kaitlin: If you and Alex had babies, they'd be so good looking. (Kristin laughs) They would.
Kristin: 'Cause Alex's all tan.
Kaitlin: Alex's hot.
Kristin: Alex's really hot.
Kaitlin: She likes you so much and she's admitting it to you.
Kristin: I can't believe it.
Kaitlin: Like she can't help herself smile whenever she sees you.
CUT TO: Ryan's
Alex: (He high fives someone) Call me tomorrow.
Marissa: We'll give you invitations called a black and white affair. And you can only wear black and white. And it's formal.
Taylor: It's Friday night. At the Surf and Sand. And we got the suite.
Marissa: If you're wearing any color you're not allowed in. No, I'm just kidding. (Marissa looks at Alex. Then she gets up)
Alex: (To Marissa) You coming over?
MARISSA: Yeah.
Alex: (To Ryan) See ya. Yeah, we're going to my house. (Her and Marissa leave)
CUT TO: MARISSA's new house that is being built.
It shows her dad watching them do stuff. Then it shows Alex come and hug Marissa. They walk around the house together.
Jimmy: Go ahead guys. Keep going. That should be about square in the whole right there. (On the phone) We're just dropping a palm into my backyard.
Marissa: Hey Alex.
Alex: Where's your dad at?
Marissa: I don't know. He's somewhere measuring stuff.
Alex: They do that kind of stuff?
Marissa: My dad's an architect. He's gonna do all kinds of fun stuff.
Alex: He could just draw something.
Marissa: There's more to being an architect than just drawing it.
Alex: Do you wear hard hats?
Marissa: No.
Alex: That's kind of random. People are gonna trip over that.
Marissa: What?
Alex: Right there.
Marissa: Oh it doesn't stay that way.
CUT TO: Inside the house
Alex: (She whistles) You have like the sickest view of like anyone I know.
Marissa: Come on. (They keep on walking)
Alex: Awesome.
Marissa: (Points to the left) Sister's room, and my room.
Alex: Is your room the best?
Marissa: Of course.
Alex: Of course.
Marissa: I think my bed goes here.
Alex: Where?
Marissa: You're on my bed.
Alex: Nice.
Marissa: I have two closets.
Alex: Shut up.
Marissa: This is my clothes closet. (Points to the other) And that one's my shoe and purse closet.
Alex: This is nice.
They go outside.
Alex: Dude, this is so gnarly. It reminds me of the houses on the Valley. Oh God.
Marissa: Maybe this is the Jacuzzi. (Points to the right)
Alex: Look at people are down at the beach right now. No, the Jacuzzi's over there. (Points to the left) Let's go sit in the Jacuzzi. (They go in it) It's gonna be so nice. (She whistles)
Marissa: Oh just like my old one.
Alex: The jets right here. (She pretends they're there and Marissa laughs)
Marissa: (Points) There's Kristin's house.
Alex: Where?
Marissa: Right there.
Alex: Oh yeah. Have a nice little room up in San Francisco and come back to this place.
Marissa: I'm not gonna wanna leave.
Alex: You're not gonna wanna leave up there?
Marissa: I'm not gonna wanna leave here.
Alex: I know. Pretty sweet. (Marissa watches Alex)
CUT TO: Outside
Kristin is talking to Seth
Kristin: Yeah, I don't know. I'm really stressed out on Alex and Marissa because last night, she told me she was going to bed early, and today I found out she was at her house.
Seth: Do you know if they hooked up?
Kristin: She says that they didn't.
Seth: Does that bum you? I mean, it's kinda funny, you guys like have a relationship that's like on and off. 'Cause you hook up with her, she hooks up with Marissa, you hook up with her, she hooks up with Marissa, I kind of come in on the side and like grab one of you every once in a while.
Kristin: Yeah.
Seth: Gosh, our town is so small. We need another girl.
Kristin: What is that supposed to mean?
Seth: I don't know, I'm kind of sick of hooking up with the same girl.
Kristin: You're sick of hooking up with the same girl? Who?
Seth: You know it's you. It's seems like whenever I call you, you're with Alex, and whenever I call Marissa…
Kristin: She's with Alex. Either wants to go back out or stop whatever we're doing.
Seth: So you think it's Marissa's fault they're hanging out all the time?
Kristin: I think it's both their faults. I just hate Marissa. She needs to go out of my life.
Seth: That's a little harsh.
CUT TO: Surf and Sand Hotel (The location of Black and White Affair)
Jan: I'm gonna show you the suite. You have 30 people from what I understand? The hotel room usually rents for $700.00 a night.
Summer: Sounds fabulous. Oh it's so nice.
Marissa: Oh, I like the big deck.
Summer: So do I. I really like the big deck.
Jan: So you obviously see how close how you know this guest room is to all the other guest rooms.
Marissa: Yeah.
Jan: And obviously noise is a concern for us while you're here.
Summer: Noise control. Yeah.
Jam: And you know you understand you're not planning a dance party or anything like that. So it's more, kind of a get together.
Summer: Definitely. We're trust worthy, don't worry.
Jan: You're trust worthy? All right.
CUT TO: Store
Luke: Wait, are you going with Marissa or are you going with Kristin?
Alex: I don't know. There's like mad tension there, so I don't know.
Luke: Can you imagine like Marissa and Kristin fighting over you?
Alex: Having Marissa and Kristin fighting over you?
Luke: Yeah.
Alex: Kristin's like a really good girl to hook up with and have fun with. We can have like so much fun. But, coming down to the girlfriend stuff, Marissa would like a better girl.
Luke: Such drama.
Alex: It is.
Ryan: Could have seen you though dude.
Alex: I know. It sucks for me because I don't know what to do because either way I'll be like hurting one.
Luke: It's a tough choice man. But it's a predicament…it's just the way it goes.
Alex: Exactly.
CUT TO: Kristin's House
Alex comes to pick her up. She rings the doorbell.
Kristin: Hey.
Alex: Hello.
Kristin: What's up? (They hug) Ready?
Alex: Okay.
Kristin: Bye Dad. Okay.
Alex: See ya Dennis.
They leave and go to a restaurant.
Alex: What the hell did Seth say to you today that got you so pissed off?
Kristin: At you?
Alex: Yeah, I sent you two messages and then you're like "I know why you're not responding because you're lying" or something like that.
Kristin: You did lie to me.
Alex: I didn't lie to you. I went to sleep last night.
Kristin: Taylor saw you at 9:15 Alex.
Alex: Where did she see me?
Kristin: Driving down from Marissa's house.
Alex: How did she know I was at Marissa's house?
Kristin: Well you were. So I mean don't say that because you were.
Alex: Maybe Taylor saw me but I wasn't there at 9:15 that's for sure.
Kristin: I know. So you were at Marissa's house. You just lied to me.
Alex: That's what I'm saying. It was like 7:30 when I was there.
Kristin: So then what were you doing up there? See I don't believe you.
Alex: She was weirded out because people were asking her "So what's going on like with you and Alex" and stuff like that and she didn't know what to say.
Kristin: She could be like "Uh, nothing. We're friends".
Alex: I guess that's not the way she feels or something like that.
Kristin: Well all I heard about is that you and Marissa had sex, and like Alex and Marissa. All right.
Alex: There's like so many times I could have gone and hung out with her.
Kristin: Whatever. 'Cause I am over it if all I'm gonna hear about is you and Marissa, you know? Then yeah, I'm over it. (Alex runs her fingers in her hair)
CUT TO: Surf and Sand Hotel
Marissa and her friends are getting ready for the party.
Lindsey: It's fun getting ready though.
Marissa: I like getting ready. Even if you don't really do anything.
Taylor: I'm wearing this.
Summer: This, really? That's so cute.
Lindsey: Remember the dress I wore sophmore year?
Marissa: When you went with Hue and he got kicked out.
Summer: Is that the one with the bow?
Lindsey: No.
Marissa: Your freshman year dress.
Lindsey: Shut up.
Marissa: Did you see my dress? It was orange.
Summer: I had a cute dress.
Marissa: Summer had a cute dress.
Lindsey: What was your dress?
Summer: It was the Vissi Viggi one, like green.
Lindsey: Oh that one was so pretty. Remember I tried to fit it into it?
Taylor: Kristin and all the junior girls are coming right?
Summer: Uh, yeah.
Marissa: I wonder what Alex and Kristin are gonna fight about tonight.
Taylor: Seriously.
Summer: I don't know, but hopefully they're not loud.
Marissa: Oh they will be.
Summer: I wish I had a white dress.
Taylor: I know, that's what I wanted to wear.
Summer: I know. I have never found a cute white dress like ever. They're all trashy.
CUT TO: Kristin's
She's getting ready.
Kaitlin: You look pretty.
Kristin: I have to ask what shoes should I wear. Ok, here. This one? Or this one?
Kaitlin: Those look more approiate with the outfit.
Kristin: I'm gonna call Alex and make sure they're coming to pick us up. I'm really not into this.
CUT TO: Ryan's House
Alex leaves to go get Kristin. She runs over Johnny's cologne.
Alex: It's broken.
Johnny: You just ran over my expensive thing of cologne dude.
Alex: It wasn't half full.
Johnny: How are you not full for running over my cologne? If I put a baby next to your car, you're gonna run over it?
Alex: Why would you put a baby next to my car?
Johnny: Why would I put cologne next to your car dude?
Alex: It's your fault.
Johnny: F off.
CUT TO: Party
Taylor: It's gonna be the best party of our senior year. Got that? (It shows them at the party and Kristin getting ready)
Summer: What's Kristin's phone number because she's with all…
Marissa: I just spoke with Johnny and he's like "Me, Alex, Kristin, and Kaitlin are gonna stop by and say hi and we're cruising over to Luke's".
Summer: What?
It shows them coming.
Kristin: I wanna stay for like 5 minutes. I'm sorry Alex. I just don't wanna hang out with these people right now. (They knock and Marissa answers the door. She hugs Alex when she comes in)
Marissa: Hi. This is Ryan's suit and it's blue and white.
Alex: I know.
Lindsey: This is fun though. Let's put on some music and dance. Hey guys come on let's dance.
Kristin: Nah.
Taylor: Come on everyone dance.
Lindsey: Woo! (People dance)
CUT TO: Outside
Marissa: Wait, you guys wanna come? At 2:00, we're all running down there and jumping in the water.
Alex: Naked.
Marissa: No, I'm wearing a bathing suit. You can go naked.
CUT TO: Inside
Lauren and Kristin are in the same room, but are talking to different people. Goes back and forth between the two's individual conversations.
Kristin: Alex's like "We're only here for 5 minutes". This is such bull s. Is this like the boycotting hotel room party right here?
Marissa: I like how we're all wearing black and Kristin's wearing white. How ironic.
Kristin: I'm the only one that wore white. I'm different.
Marissa: I just want to…
Girl: I know.
Kristin: All right let's go. Alex's lagging.
Cut to; Outside
Kristin: I wanna get out of here. I'm leaving.
Marissa: I swear if Kristin says she wants to leave one more time, I'm gonna pick up, pick her up and physically remove her from the hotel. (Alex goes inside. Kristin watches. Marissa goes inside and looks at Alex.)
Kristin: I seriously need to get out of here. I'm sorry. I'm leaving. (She goes to find Alex and everyone else follows) Kaitlin, let's get out of here. Come on. (They leave)
Kaitlin: What, we're leaving? Why aren't we staying? (Marissa goes outside)
Guy: Are you bummed?
Marissa: I'm so bummed right now.
Guy: On the whole night?
Marissa: Yeah.
Guy: Skinny dip sesh, later. (Everyone leaves so Marissa is alone. It shows Kristin and everyone leaving, then goes back to Marissa alone.
AN- Yeah, hopefully that was good. It's not gonna be exactly like Laguna Beach, but I liked the way they introduced everyone, so yeah. Feedback would be GREATLY appreciated, just so I know whether or not to continue or where people want things to go. It'll be more in-depth and less choppy later, but I'm kinda tired so yeah.
K