Author's Note
Well guys it's been a while hasn't it? Shit it's been six months hasn't it. Damn I really was having a hard time with my Heir to Superiority story and rewriting chapter one of this story. Yep I said it, rewrite.
Now I know that's something you really don't want to hear since you are all expecting a new chapter for this, but all I have is a rewrite of chapter one and this stupid Author's Note. Some of you are no doubt cursing me right now and I don't blame you, I curse at authors that do this, and right now I'm cursing myself. But it couldn't be helped.
Actually it could have, I'm just freaking lazy and I have been on an anime spree; that's basically the whole story. Sorry.
Anyways check out the rewrite of chapter one, it's basically the same up to the point where Naruto becomes a devil. Tell me what you think with a review on this, I'm leaving this note up, because it serves another purpose. So review chapter one, or don't, I'm indifferent to it.
So now the other purpose: What are some good anime to watch? I do have some criteria though. First off, nothing before 2000, but I prefer stuff after 2010. Next it has to fall under any of these categories: action, magic, martial arts, ninja, supernatural, hero, and demons. Basically stuff similar to Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, Beelzebub, Campione, Is that a Zombie, A Certain Magical Index, A Certain Scientific Railgun, Tokyo Raven, Trinity Seven, Date A Live, ect.
Ok looking for animes to watch is actually the secondary purpose of this note. The real is to put all the information on possible sacred gears on this. Some of you are complaining that I'm making Naruto way too powerful, since with any of these Sacred Gear plus his talent, skills, and Kurama, Naruto will be very overpowered. But he won't be ok.
Boosted Gear:
The first sacred gear is Boosted Gear. Now while this is a great sacred gear, I can't help but feel that the armor is kind of stupid. While yes the Balance Breaker was great, it kind of got ridiculous as the series kept going. Seriously the strongest mode it has is basically similar to the original armor mode, but now it has four cannons; couldn't the writers think of anything better?
So I have decided to give Naruto a subspecies version of Boosted Gear, though he can transform it back and forth from the original version and the subspecies version. Now the subspecies version will be in the form of nearly unbreakable red chains with metal dragon heads as the tip; allowing it to bite and grip shit. So the number of chains represent the number of boosts Naruto has gone through; so nine chains means nine boosts. Thinking of calling the form Domination of a Heavenly Dragon, you know since Ddraig represents domination and is a Heavenly Dragon. As the dragon heads can act as addition points from where Naruto use magic attacks or dragon shot from.
For the Balance Breaker, I was thinking of either a biomechanical dragon that Ddraig inhabits and uses to attack, making it's sort of like an independent sacred gear. Or have the sacred gear form three separate beings that represent the bishop, knight, and rook piece. That would be called the Ningen Sage (Bishop), the Demonic Ninja (Knight), and the Draconic Samurai (Rook).
P.S. The Boosted Gear will not be able to boost Kurama's chakra. The drawback on using the Boost Gear and Kurama's power is that Boost Gear doubles the amount of Kurama's chakra being let out. That means Naruto can easily be overcome by Kurama's power, potentially allowing it to escape or take over Naruto.
Incinerate Anthem:
This sacred gear is a Longinus class sacred gear that hasn't been introduced in the anime or manga yet, but it has made an appearance in the Light Novel. So this sacred gear is basically the ability to produce holy purple fire. Now this would extremely helpful for a devil, especially when fighting other devils in rating games. This sacred gear nearly killed Sairaorg Bael in one shot, so it's a powerful sacred gear. Plus I think that if a devil uses it, they can train their body to become immune to holy objects and power, limiting their weakness.
I was thinking of also making a subspecies sacred gear form for this one also. In the original form, the gear produces cross shaped purple flames. Now I want to combine it with Kurama, so that it makes them in the shape of foxes. And the Balance Breaker form would either be a giant fire version of Kurama, which it could control. Or it would form a giant version of Naruto's Shinigami, which creates fire versions of those seal inside Naruto to fight for him; Kushina, Minato, Kurama, Dark Naruto, other stuff that may get seal inside him.
Yoko Kitsune:
This is one of the first artificial true sacred gear that Azazel was able to make, thanks to the knowledge that Jiraiya provided. This sacred gear is modeled after the Longinus class sacred gear Canis Lykaon. Like the Canis Lykaon, Yoko Kitsune is an independent avatar type and has its own instincts. It takes the form of a huge orange fox with crimson eyes. This sacred gear contains the soul of Kurama and is powered by it power. Naruto has complete control over how much of its power it has access to.
The Balance Breaker form would be allow Kurama to have access to all of its power, grant it a huge form. It also forms a sword for Naruto to use. The sword will either be a demonic sword, a holy sword, or an artificial sword made by Kiba's sacred gears.
P.S. What I mean by first artificial true sacred gear, is that this artificial sacred is on par with a true sacred gear. In the series it's said that while Azazel has made artificial sacred gears they pale in comparison to the real ones.
Reynard Equip:
This is also an artificial sacred gear made by Azazel. An outfit, similar to Madara's or Hashirama's armor, that grants Naruto enhanced speed, endurance, strength, senses, and agility equal to say his three/fourth tailed form. He could also were light weight armored gantlets and boots that would change in shape and size similar to the Akimichi's size expansion techniques. Balance Breaker would allow him to utilize all nine tails of power but looks like his Asura Tail Beast Mode; Naruto will gain the Balance Breaker when he introduces Asura's power to the sacred gear.
Vulpine Reverie:
Another artificial sacred gear made by Azazel for Naruto. This one is actually to overcome Naruto's genjutsu weakness. This allowing Naruto to cast powerful illusions on his targets, the targets would be limited to two or three and the pain inflicted on the targets with the illusions become real in a Freddy Krueger-esque fashion. Balance Breaker I have no idea, maybe just increase the number of people that can be caught in it.
Kitsune March:
Allows Naruto to summon armored soldiers wearing fox masks/helms. The soldiers would be limited to around a dozen. They would be as durable as a devil to differentiate them from Kage Bunshin. The balance breakers would be more fantastical versions of their initial forms.
Indra's Arrow:
Bow and arrows, where the arrows have different abilities. The arrow will have three modes, first one is called Indraastra and it shoots arrows that can multiply and have a slight anti affinity. Meaning that if it hits devils it feels like it was blessed, if it hits angels it fells like its curse, it isnt very lethal unless you are hit multiple times. The second for is called Vasavi Shakti and it shoots an arrow that can not be dodged, though it doesnt necessarily mean it has to be lethal, also its first target near the arrow. The final form is called Vajra, and it takes the form of a lightning bolt, it flies at godspeed and is nearly impossible to dodge, and also delivers shock. Balance Breaker can be a fusion of two or more arrows or enhancing certain abilities. Like first type does more damage and multiples even more time, the second one you can choose which person it lock on too, third it can pierce through some barriers. Or I might just have the Balance Breaker shoot Tail Beast Balls at various strengths.
The second thing I wanted to ask about is what familiar should I give Naruto? I want it to be cool. Here is a list of what I have thought: Sky Loin, a loin with tremendous fire powers; Inugami, a mythical dog with shadow powers; Nundu, looks like a giant leopard, breath is filled with toxins and diseases, and resistant to magic; Tyrant Hydra, it has an immortal body and poison that can kill Devils; and finally a Basilisk, it has a strong poison and its very stare can kill. By the way Naruto will have the Skíðblaðnir that Issei gets later on, though I will be modeling its form on a vehicle from another anime.
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Well thats all for now. Im working on the second chapter, have the whole plot for it set and done. Its similar to what happens in episode 2 of the anime, but I have twisted it a bit. Tell me what you think.
