Tater: um guys I just made this sorry if it's not good

this is so freaking messed up I thought as looked around the class room looking and memorizing the faces of my classmates. I can't believe my mom I thought as I flashed backed to that conversation, me and my dad were playing video games when my mom came in and paused the game. we looked at her "what's up mom" I said when I noticed a big paperback book in her hand, "kei honey u know kohona academy she said grabbing my hand, yea I said looking at the enlighten way her eyes looked ."well I've decided that's the school your going to this year" she said all happy like. "wha.." was all I could say then everything went black and fuzzy. I could feel the blush turning my cheeks rosy red. I woke up out of my daze when I felt a cold hand touch myshoulder even though I was wearing a jacket I could still feel the coldness of his hand, I looked into the smiling face of my older brother akabane he was the teacher of my first and last period. "You can take your seat now" he said with a smile, I turned around and walked towards the empty seat next to a red head with his head down I was still a little dazed when walking down the aisle I didn't notice someone's foot outstretched to try to trip me. So this is how my day's going to start…
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