So I just completed Allegiant for the second time and thought that I could change the ending to suit more fans wants. Tris doesn't die in my ending. Tell me what you think Jas of right now I'm going to keep it as a one shot please let me know if you like it enough to be a story or not. Thanks!

Tris POV

I can do this. I have beaten the death serum before I know I can do it again. It wasn't fair to Caleb to have him die even though he was the one to turn me over to Jeanine for my execution. He is still family. That's what I keep telling myself as I head down the last hall way to the Weapons Lab. Just as I hit the door I feel a shooting pain go thru my arm. I drop my gun instantly and keep running to the door. I reach it and pry it open as quickly as possible. Once inside the room I start to feel the serum seep into my exposed skin. You can do this I keep telling myself as advance to the other side of the room where the key pad is to type the code that will stop the reset. Before I get there I am stopped by David.

"I knew I would find you here" he says with his gun pointed right at me. I didn't think I had lead on that I was being devious.

"How did you know?" I say inching my way toward the key pad. If I get there soon everything will be over.

"You have been hanging out with GD people all week. Way to make my suspicions go up Tris." He spits. Just a little further and I will have it. I just have to keep him talking.

"Most of my friends are GD so why would that be suspicious?" I ask him coyly.

"Give it a rest Tris. You are expendable and you know I am going to kill you. Stop trying to prolong the inventible." He says watching my every movement. It's now or never. I take my chance and jump at the key pad. A sharp pain hits my leg as I finish the last number. Another pain seers thru my side as I hit the green button. I slump to the floor as the memory serum takes over the room taking the place of the death serum.

I did it. I saved the people I love even though I won't make it. My mother is here to take me. Her blonde hair pulled back in a braid.

"Did I do well? Can I be done?" I ask her as sleep edges into my vision.

"You did beautifully Tris. You are done. Come with me we need to get you to safety." She tells me.

"Can't I just stay here? I'm too tired to move." I complain knowing she will let me stay.

"No Tris we have to go now we don't have much time. Caleb is here to help me move you." She says pulling me up gently. Only this isn't my mom anymore it's Cara. She and Caleb are here to save me. I did survive. They pull me as quickly as they can considering I have lost a lot of blood. I try to help them the best I can even though I am growing weaker with each step.

"A little further Tris, please hang on." I hear Caleb plead with me. My vision is black now. Not long after my hearing is gone. This must be death. I'm sorry Tobias. I failed to come back to you.

I don't know how much time has passed but I feel warmth within me and someone's hand in mine. I open my eyes to find Tobias slumped over asleep in the chair next to me. He looks like he hasn't slept in day's maybe even weeks. The last thing I remember is being pulled down the hall way by Caleb and Cara while I was bleeding to death. What has happened between then and now? Is everyone ok? I hope all of this wasn't in vain. I squeeze his hand just slightly to wake him. He jerks awake with a start looking directly at me. His blue eyes stare deep into mine.

"I thought I lost you." He tells me tears spilling over his eyes. I have never seen him cry before. I feel like I broke him.

"I thought I did too." I tell him, tears spilling over my own eyes. He leans in and kisses me fiercely. I kiss him back with all my might. He breaks away and rests his forehead to mine both of us breathing heavily.

"What happened to everyone? Did the plan work?" I ask him spewing out questions left and right.

"Everyone is fine. Cara had seen where David was heading when they called for the lock down and headed straight that way sensing what was going to happen. She found you gun and Caleb on her way. You had just hit the green button, David had already shot you twice. She shot him in the arm and her and Caleb grabbed you and took you here. You have been unconscious for about 2 weeks now. From all of the blood loss it was touch and go the first few days. Then you started getting your strength back. as for everyone in the Bureau their memories were removed and they are now being retaught the truth by Cara and Matthew. Uriah is going to be cremated and his ashes are going to be spread in the chasm. We were waiting for you before we did that. And finally my parents have agreed to a peace treaty and there are no more factions." He explains. The only way I know how to respond is to kiss him. So I do and he kisses me back. The world has changed so much in the short time that I have been in here. Everyone I love is safe.

"Marry me." he whispers resting his head on mine. I stare into his closed content eyes and couldn't think of anything else I would rather do.

"Yes, I love you Tobias of course I will." I tell him kissing him between his eyes then back on his lips.

I'm leaving it here. If you want more let me know otherwise I will leave it as a one shot. Your choice readers! Please review!