Criminal minds fanfic
this is my first story so I hope people will enjoy this. I am also thankful if people will leave reviews and if they are loving the story or areas that I can improve.
I don't known anything it all belongs to criminal minds
chapter 1
It was a dull, Monday morning the first person that walked into the bullpen was Dr Spencer Reid. He was dripping wet but he didn't care. He set his bag onto his desk and discarded his wet gear. He was wearing a gold chain around his neck that had a wedding ring on it. His coffee sense was kicking in, to control it he went to the coffee machine. He put enough sugar in it to feed an army. He was so deep in this thoughts over what happened over the weekend, he didn't realise that JJ walked to the coffee machine. He turned around and there he saw JJ. She startled him. "JJ you scared me" she said "sorry Spencer, where was you on Saturday?" "oh sorry I forgot to tell you it was an emergency, family stuff can't really talk about it" he was thinking oh no she has rumbled me and found out my secret. She has just noticed the chain around hi neck that had the ring on it and before she could question him about since he only wore a watch, the unit chief Aaron Hotchner came out of his office and called the BAU team into the conference room. Garcia was just getting everything ready when everyone walked into the room. As soon as everyone was sat down she started to present the case. "this has been flagged as a high priority case from the LVPD, they have a missing cop, her name is Holly Laking and she was also a graduate from the FBI academy." When Garcia said her name Reid's face dropped, and all he kept thinking about was Holly and where she could be. He said "she has a year old daughter, she is slightly asthmatic and she also diabetic. Has anyone seen her?" The team was surprised when he said this. Rossi piped up and said "how do you know this and if you say its because your a genius, so help me God." " she is my daughter" the team looked surprised. Hotch said "if you are telling the truth then I need to take you off the case." "the unsub has my daughter and my partner I'm not just going to sit here and wait for the news, I'm coming with." the team looked startled, there was the father that Reid was. The team left on the jet for Las Vegas.
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