A/N I changed the main characters name to one I like better cuz chaos
sounded retarded. I am also changing the story to have fewer characters.
Instead of a band of 5 or 6 there will only be 3. It will be way more
challenging for the vampires, and I have some things plotted out for that.
And one more change, since you guys asked for more detail on the main
character I would put the prologue as chapter one and then put the plot
info on chapter two.
Vampires
This is about a recently bound trio of vampires trying to stay alive in a world where they have been found out. Now they have to pull out all the tricks to stay alive.
Distant Past. My name was known throughout the land. It brought fear to every town that heard it. Grobyc was the name, and it meant destruction for many. I would ride into towns burning them down taking everything of value as my own. I wanted everything and got everything. Every good, or bad in my case, must come to an end. I was overthrown by a mob of angry villagers disgusted and driven to madness trying to keep their valuables away from me. My back was against the shop wall. I took out my sword; its long blade gleamed in the moonlight. With my great speed and power I could take at least 20, no 30 before they would take me down. They charged with pitchforks and torches flying. I took the first challenger's head off, still with the stare of death upon his face. A little boy no older than 9 came at me with a torch. The little bastard with red hair and freckles burned my left cheek and pissed me off. I took my long blade and stuck it in his heart, my sword stained with blood coming out of the child's back. I was just about to be taken down by the mob of angry townsfolk when a dark, man like figure dropped from above out of thin air it seemed. He took out his long scimitar and slashed the heads of three nearby villagers splashing steaming hot red blood on my face. His sword and clothes were already heavily stained with blood after a few minutes. It was like this god (I thought that's what he was at the time) had unnatural speed and power not matched by any one I have ever seen, not even my self. After about 5 minutes he had killed the whole town's population save on who he bit and sucked on for a few minutes, of which he disposed of by taking his gleaming sword stained with blood and stuck it in the person's heart. He turned to me and said "You have great speed and power, and you'll make a great addition to the clan. I will be your sire, Sepiroth" I was still amazed at the carnage and blood spilt by just one person. There were at least 60 bodies, all of which had been decapitated or stabbed right through the heart. Still amazed, confused, and now afraid I said, "What do you mean? And what will become of me?" Sephiroth with his dark booming voice that sounded like thunder said, "You shall find out very soon, for even if you don't, you will have eternity to find out anyway." He then laughed a very sinister laugh, one I will never forget.
Embrace
After we had talked Sephiroth grabbed me with long cold fingers. His grip was that of steal and I could not break free. Sephiroth slowly bent his head towards mine. His teeth were elongated at the canines and it was then that I knew what he was. I started screaming for I was terrified, no horrified at what I would become. A nightstalker. That is what I had heard from stories that were as old as time. It became very dark and shadowy after that. I remember going into an abandoned house in the town of massacred people. That is all I remember until now. I don't know what to think. All I know is that I am getting stronger and more powerful everyday. Sephiroth has been teaching me fighting techniques and has been telling me stories every night. I still can't believe I am a vampire. (Sephiroth told me that was our name) I go to bed in agony knowing I will never see my family again. I thought of my daughter and of my wife. Oh my beautiful wife with a nice white gown on. After about a week I tried to run away. Sephiroth said go ahead; you'll never make it past sunrise. Very Close to dawn I began to burn. This burn was like no other; it came from inside me. It made me insane with pain that made me go into agonizing spasms. I started digging as fast as I could. With a lot of luck, I mean a whole shitload of luck I managed to get under the sand just in time to get out of the sun. I waited to nightfall and returned to Sephiroth. He was in another town, about 3 hours away from where it all began. I knew just where to go but I didn't know how. When I got there, he said he was impressed that I had survived. I caught him off guard and tried to stab him. I connected stabbing him right through the stomach. Black oozing blood came out from the wound and had stained my sword. Sephiroth turned and hit me with the blunt end of the sword and laughed at me. His dark cold eyes burned into mine. All I could do is stair at him. He was all black it seemed. He had black pants that went down to the bottom of his pants. Sephiroth wore what appeared to be a dark leather coat over a black shirt. He had black boots that went past his shins. The only part of this "nightstalker" that wasn't black was his skin. Sephiroth was pale and I imagine I was that pale also. "You think you can kill another kindred that way?!? HAHAHA I will teach you some lessons boy!" He pulled the sword out by the blade pulling the handle through his body. I could not believe he could do this. Sephiroth took the long sword that had killed many a man and jammed the cold hard steal right into my chest. I passed out from that. When I woke up I had a great hunger for blood. It was driving me insane. I looked up and growled an animal like yell and sprang to my feet. Sephiroth who was already up looked at me and gave me my sword. "Tonight we feed. You will learn how to get your own blood after the first one. I expect you to learn very fast." He took me outside. I still had no idea where he had taken me after he had stabbed me. That's right!!! He stabbed me! How the hell am I still alive!! "Sephiroth, how the hell am I still alive, you stabbed me. Wait how in the hell are you still alive, I stabbed you. THIS IS FUCKING CONFUSING!!!" "In time all will be explained, but for now, we hunt." I never knew the joy of satisfying a hunger like that until that night. By the next week I was in full training and doing well. I had forced myself to forget most of my human life. It was easier that way. But one thing changed in me. I only became tolerant of those who I had to be, and a ruthless, murdering maniac who stopped at nothing to win. I became very much a loner, except I trained and became my sire's apprentice. He taught me a special skill with the ones that I developed from my bloodline, so I am told. Sephiroth taught me to use my mind to pick up objects and to make mortals do my will. Soon I became even more powerful than Sephiroth.
Vampires
This is about a recently bound trio of vampires trying to stay alive in a world where they have been found out. Now they have to pull out all the tricks to stay alive.
Distant Past. My name was known throughout the land. It brought fear to every town that heard it. Grobyc was the name, and it meant destruction for many. I would ride into towns burning them down taking everything of value as my own. I wanted everything and got everything. Every good, or bad in my case, must come to an end. I was overthrown by a mob of angry villagers disgusted and driven to madness trying to keep their valuables away from me. My back was against the shop wall. I took out my sword; its long blade gleamed in the moonlight. With my great speed and power I could take at least 20, no 30 before they would take me down. They charged with pitchforks and torches flying. I took the first challenger's head off, still with the stare of death upon his face. A little boy no older than 9 came at me with a torch. The little bastard with red hair and freckles burned my left cheek and pissed me off. I took my long blade and stuck it in his heart, my sword stained with blood coming out of the child's back. I was just about to be taken down by the mob of angry townsfolk when a dark, man like figure dropped from above out of thin air it seemed. He took out his long scimitar and slashed the heads of three nearby villagers splashing steaming hot red blood on my face. His sword and clothes were already heavily stained with blood after a few minutes. It was like this god (I thought that's what he was at the time) had unnatural speed and power not matched by any one I have ever seen, not even my self. After about 5 minutes he had killed the whole town's population save on who he bit and sucked on for a few minutes, of which he disposed of by taking his gleaming sword stained with blood and stuck it in the person's heart. He turned to me and said "You have great speed and power, and you'll make a great addition to the clan. I will be your sire, Sepiroth" I was still amazed at the carnage and blood spilt by just one person. There were at least 60 bodies, all of which had been decapitated or stabbed right through the heart. Still amazed, confused, and now afraid I said, "What do you mean? And what will become of me?" Sephiroth with his dark booming voice that sounded like thunder said, "You shall find out very soon, for even if you don't, you will have eternity to find out anyway." He then laughed a very sinister laugh, one I will never forget.
Embrace
After we had talked Sephiroth grabbed me with long cold fingers. His grip was that of steal and I could not break free. Sephiroth slowly bent his head towards mine. His teeth were elongated at the canines and it was then that I knew what he was. I started screaming for I was terrified, no horrified at what I would become. A nightstalker. That is what I had heard from stories that were as old as time. It became very dark and shadowy after that. I remember going into an abandoned house in the town of massacred people. That is all I remember until now. I don't know what to think. All I know is that I am getting stronger and more powerful everyday. Sephiroth has been teaching me fighting techniques and has been telling me stories every night. I still can't believe I am a vampire. (Sephiroth told me that was our name) I go to bed in agony knowing I will never see my family again. I thought of my daughter and of my wife. Oh my beautiful wife with a nice white gown on. After about a week I tried to run away. Sephiroth said go ahead; you'll never make it past sunrise. Very Close to dawn I began to burn. This burn was like no other; it came from inside me. It made me insane with pain that made me go into agonizing spasms. I started digging as fast as I could. With a lot of luck, I mean a whole shitload of luck I managed to get under the sand just in time to get out of the sun. I waited to nightfall and returned to Sephiroth. He was in another town, about 3 hours away from where it all began. I knew just where to go but I didn't know how. When I got there, he said he was impressed that I had survived. I caught him off guard and tried to stab him. I connected stabbing him right through the stomach. Black oozing blood came out from the wound and had stained my sword. Sephiroth turned and hit me with the blunt end of the sword and laughed at me. His dark cold eyes burned into mine. All I could do is stair at him. He was all black it seemed. He had black pants that went down to the bottom of his pants. Sephiroth wore what appeared to be a dark leather coat over a black shirt. He had black boots that went past his shins. The only part of this "nightstalker" that wasn't black was his skin. Sephiroth was pale and I imagine I was that pale also. "You think you can kill another kindred that way?!? HAHAHA I will teach you some lessons boy!" He pulled the sword out by the blade pulling the handle through his body. I could not believe he could do this. Sephiroth took the long sword that had killed many a man and jammed the cold hard steal right into my chest. I passed out from that. When I woke up I had a great hunger for blood. It was driving me insane. I looked up and growled an animal like yell and sprang to my feet. Sephiroth who was already up looked at me and gave me my sword. "Tonight we feed. You will learn how to get your own blood after the first one. I expect you to learn very fast." He took me outside. I still had no idea where he had taken me after he had stabbed me. That's right!!! He stabbed me! How the hell am I still alive!! "Sephiroth, how the hell am I still alive, you stabbed me. Wait how in the hell are you still alive, I stabbed you. THIS IS FUCKING CONFUSING!!!" "In time all will be explained, but for now, we hunt." I never knew the joy of satisfying a hunger like that until that night. By the next week I was in full training and doing well. I had forced myself to forget most of my human life. It was easier that way. But one thing changed in me. I only became tolerant of those who I had to be, and a ruthless, murdering maniac who stopped at nothing to win. I became very much a loner, except I trained and became my sire's apprentice. He taught me a special skill with the ones that I developed from my bloodline, so I am told. Sephiroth taught me to use my mind to pick up objects and to make mortals do my will. Soon I became even more powerful than Sephiroth.