Authors Note: Hey, this is my first story, all criticism is welcome, but pleaseno swearing. Don't worry, I'll change to normal writing in the second chapter, this is just an opening, please don't be deterred from the story because of this chapter. Also I need names for the male main character, please feel free to give me some, if it helps he'll be a commissar. Thanks, Kasrkin-Ghost.
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23RD ALEXANDRIA ELIPSON LOADING...
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LT COL ADRIAN HAWKSON...
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Enduron Prime was a harsh uninhabitable world in the Segmentum Solar. It was first discovered in M32-145 and cleansed of the –CLASSIFIED- Legion which inhabited its surface. Soon the planet was mined heavily for its adamantium and ceramite. In M41-997 the chaos space marines of the Silver Paladins had attacked. In response the Imperial Guard regiments of the 9th Vendoland, 23rd Alexandria Elipson, 4th Cadian, 562nd Mordian, 1871st Konigswelt, 73rd Bostonian Mechanized and the 8th Bostonian Mechanized attacked the surface. The Ordo Malleus sent three squads of Grey Knights to assist the invasion and the Raven Guard and the Novamarines sent half a company each.
Imperial Guard casualties were: 46.58%
Space Marine and Grey Knights casualties were: 21%
Result: Imperial Victory, 9th Vendoland and 4th Cadian remained as peace keepers. Silver Paladins exterminated. 562nd Mordian executed after they turned traitor.
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