AC: Dear readers. You are probably wondering why I'll make a story similar to Chaotic in the human world. It is because I notice in that story that character development was weak because the story was fast. Do not worry, I will not erase or end it. I'll make a side story in which the pace of the story will be slower. There will also have 5 protagonists with 5 creatures, one per tribe. The 5 tribe's creatures are already chosen but 2 humans aren't for the Danian tribe with Faash and the M'arrillian tribe with Phelphor.
For the 2 humans, they will be children between 6 and 11 years old. I will give them a back story considering the personality they will have.
The 2 who will create them will be 2 major supporters: Jason Nightlight and Ladyanaconda.
Sorry Blitz190. You are also a major supporter...I will give you in compensation the choice of which of the 2 group your character will be in and also which name and creatures partner and tribe. Depending of the group, they can be more good than evil.
I am glad to have the 3 major reviewers to choose first who they want. The 9 others will by anyone else.
There will be no military in this story, gun etc. It will be fighting against nightmare and other team.
It will take long before the team will be done compare to the other story because I want a slower speed of story development.
There will be also 2 more groups of the same number prepare the same way. One group is evil and the other one will use both group. There will not appear for a while. When the time comes, you will be able to create a character and their partner in a few exceptions.
There will also be an evil creature's name nightmare that will attack the city and I hope you will like a slower story with more moment between characters, which the other one was more poor.
Yeah...I become more ambitious but I won't give up the other story.
I inspire the story of living among monster with Creatures in the human world and I now am inspired by him to write this one.
Summary: One year ago, a boy makes a wish to a shooting star. The wish becomes true and the city has creatures of Perim appearing. The wish makes his dream become true but his nightmare and monster too. The Wisher, a strange one will give 15 scanners to 15 humans and partners. A war game will begin. 9 places open on 12.
There is a story that says that when you see a shooting star, you can make a wish.
A young boy is on the ground and he looks at an imposing figure under the rain.
Wish under the star can come true if you wish strong enough.
"What...What are you?" Asks the boy who doesn't see things clearly.
A young boy makes a wish a while ago.
"What do you mean? I should ask you that question." Says the imposing figure.
He makes a strong and complex wish on his dying bed. Wish containing dreams.
"Wait a minute...You...You are him." Says the boy surprise by him.
He dies from his disease and his wish has come true for the others.
"Him?...Let me present myself...I've forgot about it. I am one of the general of the Overworld...I am Tangath Toborn."
But the wish also contains nightmare that creates from the wish of a better life...Nightmare are dangerous...Everyone will confront themselves or die...When the game and TV series of Chaotic...Become real. A war will begin...The game for someone else.
Chaotic: His war game.
Opening theme: Stand up
YEAH, STAND UP BOYS
hora mae wo muite
kimi wo tsutsumu ERU ga michibiku
asu e ikou
YEAH, STAND GIRLS
RIARU wo koeta saki
atsui kumo ni oowareta hikari tsukamu yo
ima made no hibi jyairarenai
FURU SUPIIDO de
takai kabe mo
uchi nuite ikou
STAND UP FOR YOUR DREAM
donna koto demo muchuu ni natte
tsuki susumeba kiri hirakerunda
sagashi motometa kotae ga
donna tooku demo
STAND UP FOR YOUR DREAM
tatoe omoiga
yowase misetemo
chikaku deki koeru kimi no koega
chikara to yuuki wo kureru
doko mademo hashi ite yukeru yo ne
Translation
Yeah, stand up boys!
Come on, face forward
Step towards the tomorrow whose call enveloping you is your guide
Yeah, stand up girls!
At the end of what's more than real
We'll grab a light that's been covered by thick clouds
How we spent our days before isn't good enough
At full speed
We can blast through
Even the highest walls
Stand up for your dream!
Be enthusiastic at what you do,
No matter what it is
Push your way through to make an opening
No matter how far
The answer you're seeking is
Stand up for your dream!
Even if my feelings
Show weakness
Your voice that I hear close by
Gives me courage and strength
I can go the distance
Prologue: Under the holy star Meeting occurs: Part one
1 year ago: Hospital
The sound of the cardiogram goes at a normal rhythm. The cardiogram is attached to the chest of a young boy of 6 years old, reaching terminal disease. He now has pale to white skin looking outside, waiting for his life to end and being free of his pain. He looks at the TV screen and he sees his favorite show going on. He is now reaching the end of the second seasons and sees how the M'arrillian invasion ends. He really likes the show even for his young age and he also likes the card game. He learns fast the rules and play with those of the hospital. Sadly, he will never get out of the hospital and play with the other kids. This card game and the TV series were his only distraction. He then sees the generic saying that the show ends and he turns around outside. The sky was full of star. The big city has his light close for tonight when the shooting stars will come. He wishes he can see them. The moon was big and is shining in the sky and makes his eyes shine too.
He then sees it, Shooting stars falling from the skies. One of them was bigger and shinier than any stars in the sky. He then remembers what his mother told him. If you make a wish under the shooting start; it might come true. He then closes his eyes and he makes a wish. It is not a simple wish. He didn't wish to live a normal life. He wishes for something more. He wants the Chaotic game to become real and creatures of Perim be on Earth and lived a fantastic journey with them. He wants the 5 tribes to come on Earth, with a few restrictions. He then opens his eyes and he sees the star changing color from his blue light to a red one and explodes in midair.
The cardiogram suddenly gets worse. The heart of the kid beat slower and slower and it emit a continued bip indicating that his heart has stop giving sighs of life. The doctors and infirmaries come and try saving him...But it is too late. He is dead. So young to die, but the will of the stars will respect his wish.
1 year later: Elementary school
The bell rings, it is the end of school for everyone and they get out of the school running. 2 boys walk together and they are being a little provocation by the students when they pass near them.
"Hey look! It's the 2 girly men!" Shouts one of them.
"When are you going wearing makeup?" Asks another one of them.
The 2 boys who are being mock regret their mistake they have done one year ago. They sigh and continue ignoring them.
What is worse is the fact that they are partially right. The 2 boys are Tomgirl. They have some feminine behavior that causes them mockery. It becomes worse when they both make the mistake of acting too much like a girl one day at school. The boys are mocking them and the girls are interest in them. Their personality makes the 2 friendlier to the girl. They also both hate violent sports, they often cry like girls, etc.
The taller one is Julius. He is 11 years old and his size is 4ft. and 2 inch. He is a Caucasian originally of Quebec until they move to Stardust after a big situation that end in court. He has blue eyes and long blond hair attach to his back by a red ribbon of his mother which she didn't use. He wears a red T-shirt since it is a hot day of September and also a blue shorts. He lives with his mother only who has 2 jobs and they rarely see each other's. Even so, she is his hero and they have a strong link uniting them.
His only friend is Jack who's 10 years and his height is 3ft. 7 inch. He wears blue glasses. He is originally of the New York City but his parents decides to move out to Stardust. He has peach skin with Asian blue eyes. He has brown short hairs on which he has blue taint for being a little more exotic. He wears a blue T-shirts and a brown short. He lives with his mother who also has 2 jobs and his drunken father who does nothing of his life except sitting and does nothing with his fat beer stomach.
It makes it clearer why they are more Tomgirl persons.
They talk together about the usual stuff: Chaotic game and school. Julius is a player who prefers the Overworld creatures while his friend prefers the Underworld. It didn't matter to them and they love playing this game against each other's and they always finish on a draw.
They walk together until they separate when they are close to their home.
Julius home
Julius has open his TV and is waiting for the Chaotic show to begin when the door of his house knock. He puts the TV on mute and he goes opening the door.
"Hello." Says Julius.
"Hello...Julius." Says the man reading the card.
"What is it?" He asks carefully.
"I am here to give you this package free of charge." Says the delivery guy.
"Hum...I didn't ask anything." Says Julius.
"We know, it is a gift from that you have to take...He paid us to give it to you and be sure you'll take it...He says you'll like the gift by tomorrow." Says the delivery guy.
It was strange, but Julius doesn't care and he takes the package. He then closes the door and puts it on the table.
"Should I open it?" He asks to himself. He cannot resist curiosity and he opens it. He looks inside and he sees a blue scanner like in the Chaotic show. "Ok...Why did I receive this?"
He sees that there's a letter and he opens it and starts reading.
Dear Julius,
You are probably wondering the reason you receive a scanner. If I'm wrong...I've try. This is a scanner you win has a special price for you talent in the game. This scanner will change the Chaotic game forever if you pick it up and follows the instruction on this letter.
First, mark you name on the scanner.
Julius did as the letter ask. The scanner says:
Welcome to Chaotic player Julius, live a unique experience like you never live before.
Julius focuses on the letter.
Now, you will have to go to the Heaven Park at midnight and you will receive a special price. If you do not come, you will miss a great opportunity. If you go there, you will meet someone special and then...Everything is possible for you.
Sigh: The Wisher.
Julius looks at the letter with suspicion but once again, curiosity win and he'll go to that place a midnight.
Heaven Park: Midnight
Julius was a little late when he runs at the direction of the park. He was unlucky this night as the clouds were big and let the rain fall from the sky. He continues running under the rain that way for a while until he reaches the park, completely wet and in a not so good mood. He starts regretting his decision. He checks his watch and it says that midnight will come soon. He then accelerates and tries finding a place where to wait until he bumps on someone's back. He falls on his butt and he shakes his head. He realises he has bump into someone's back and he sees him turning around.
"You better be careful whe-" The big and imposing figure stays quiet surprise by what he sees. He sees a tail.
Julius is on the ground and he looks at an imposing figure under the rain. He doesn't believe what he is currently seeing and only one question is on his lips.
"What...What are you?" Asks Julius who doesn't see things clearly.
"What do you mean? I should ask you that question." Says the imposing figure. This time, he recognises the voice from a TV show. The Chaotic show.
"Wait a minute...You...You are him." Says Julius surprise by him.
The big figure is completely lost by what he has said and also about who he was. The big figure recognises a child in front of him and he tries to appear peaceful so he will not scare or hurt him.
"Him?...Let me present myself...I've forgot about it. I am one of the general of the Overworld...I am Tangath Toborn." Says the overworlder.
"How?...That's...impossible." Says Julius.
"What are you talking about?" Asks Tangath. He then sneezes. The rain was cold.
Tangath Toborn is an Overworlder who has the appearance of a lion. He has brown skin and brown long hair. He has a long lion tail at his back. He wears a metal plate on his left hand, a blue shorts and metal plates for his legs. He is muscular and he has on his back his sword he always have with him. The difference is that he doesn't have an anime cartoon appearance. He is a real flesh and blood one.
"You...Here...That is not possible." Says Julius.
"...Calm down...Explain to me what do you mean by that." Says Toborn with a small and friendly smile.
"Well...Sorry! I forgot to introduce myself...I am Julius!"
"Good...Julius...can you explain what do you mean by that please?" Asks Toborn with the same friendly smile. He wants to win the trust of this strange overworlder.
"It...It will be easier...If I show you." Says Julius.
"Then show me please." Says Toborn.
Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip Bip.
The scanner starts ringing. Julius takes it and he looks at it.
Congratulation! You have found your partner for the game that is starting now. Tangath Toborn list of attack will appears on your scanner. The rules of the game will appear when the first battle will occurs.
Julius looks at this while Tangath Toborn walks by his side. When he was close to Julius, he quickly moves away from Tangath until a distance between them is made. He gives his a scared face and Tangath knows it isn't a normal one.
"Calm down...I only want to see that." Says Tangath.
"I know...But don't come too close." Says Julius with a mistrusting voice. It wasn't point at him but Tangath doesn't want to ask any questions since he is in an unknown place and he doesn't want to cause trouble now.
"What does it say?" Asks Tangath.
"That's what I don't understand...It says...Well..." Julius repeats the message. The overworlder looks surprise and he is a little angry by this. Not after Julius who is clearly as lost at him but at the one who causes all this.
"Alright...Show me why it is impossible for me to be here...And also...What are you and where am I?" Asks Tangath Toborn.
"I'll explain after I show too you what I mean." Says Julius.
Tangath Toborn nods and he follows Julius, in a respective distance of course.
Elsewhere midnight: Abandon house
Jack now feels stupid to have accepted the scanner in the box and going to an abandon house. At least, he's not under the rain waiting for something to appear and he isn't seeing his dad getting drunk once again and wasting the money his mom won with hard working and sweat. He has obtained the scanner of red color the same way has Julius but he doesn't know that for now. He starts searching around until he stands against a wall and do nothing. He then starts to hear footsteps and he looks around. The sound was a big one and it wasn't a weak one too. He looks around and he then sees in front of him something he absolutely not expected. An Underworlder of the Chaotic game was in front of him. He looks at him.
"What do you want minus?" Shouts the Underworlder.
Jack recognises Rothar by his Minotaur appearance.
He is a big underworlder of 8ft. and 8 inches high. He has big muscles covering all of his body and shows his dominant stature. He has orange-red skin covering all of his body. He is wearing a brown armor covering his chest and belly. He has metal plates at the outside section of his wrist to the upper arms. He has a green short attaching by a belt. He wears metal plates at his knee to protect it. He has long purple hairs at his head. His face is serious and looks like nothing can scare him. He has 2 ears and his right one has a silver right on it. He has 2 white horns at the top of his head. On his back is his battle ax made of a solid silver metal and seems sharp.
Jack looks at him and hates being call a minus, small, etc. especially by a big man. He remains calm since he cannot win a fight or verbal confrontation against him.
Rothar looks at him and he thinks he is wasting his time. He will not kill a kid...Even if he seems like an Overworlder. There is no honor and only a weak one or crazy will do that.
"I was waiting here for something...And you show up...But you...That is impossible." Says Jack.
"...Wait...Where am I?" Asks Rothar.
"You do not know...How are you even...here?" Asks Jack.
"Listen short one, I do not want to waste time. Tell me where I can go if I want to return to the underworld...Now!" Shouts Rothar.
"I...I do not know." Replies Jack. "You aren't even supposed to be here."
"...Explains." Orders Rothar.
"Well-" He was cut by the scanner beeping.
He opens it and reads the message.
Congratulation! You have found your partner for the game that is starting now. Rothar list of attack will appears on your scanner. The rules of the game will appear when the first battle will occurs.
"Ok...It is weird." Says Jack. Rothar was behind him and he has read the message too.
"What is this? What is this all about?!" Shouts Rothar furious.
"How should I know something that just happen?!" Shouts back Jack.
"You are lucky to be a little kid because I would have smashed you right now!" Replies Rothar.
"I...What?! I thought you would smash me anyway." Says Jack. "Well...Anyway...I think here is not the best place to answer your question."
"...True...Worm." Says Rothar. His insults are getting worse about Jack size.
"The name is Jack! Jerk." Says Jack furious.
Jack starts walking away.
"Where are you going?" Asks Rothar.
"My home...I do not intend to do what the scanner says or stick with you any longer so do what you want." Says Jack. He doesn't want to be with an Underworlder who mocks his size.
Rothar looks at him and he decides to follow him.
"Wait up!" Orders Rothar. "I will not let my only lead go away!"
He follows Jack who moves discreetly at the direction of his home.
They walk that way and Rothar doesn't say anything for a while. He walks way much slower than usual and he has enough. It wouldn't have been this bad if it wasn't raining on him for a while and using his patience.
"Move faster minus." Orders Rothar.
Jack goes slower.
"..." Rothar looks at him and he understood the silent message. "Faster!"
Jack returns to his normal speed and Rothar doesn't say anything. They walk together at the direction of Jack home, unaware that Julius and Tangath Toborn are doing the same at another place of in city. 2 nemesis creatures are so close without knowing it.
AC: This is the end of part one. Part two coming soon.