Title: The Girl's Word
Author: Dark Star Goddess
Disclaimer: I own all the characters in THIS CHAPTER. But the rest of the story will have characters owned by Tolkien, who I admire greatly, besides, if I wrote Lord of the Rings, BAD THINGS WOULD HAVE HAPPENED, and some characters would be hotter/younger.
Faith frowned to herself as she watches her little sister play a jumping game. The little girl took notice to the frown and came to her, "What is wrong Faith?"
"Nothing Constance, are you having fun?" She replied putting on a fake smile that fooled the girl.
"Yes, thank you for bringing me here, I was getting bored at home."
"Me too." Faith said looking over the three year olds sister's shoulder and noticed her stepfather, "Father is here Constance, time to go." Faith though, hiding her fear from her voice.
Constance took Faith's hand in her own and smiled, "Let's go!" She said in a cheerful voice. Faith knew that if she were done babysitting Constance for her mother she would have to come home, and home meant seeing her dad. He would always come home and... We will not finish that though, you will see, you will see soon. Faith smiled and picked her up and put Constance on her shoulders and walked to the graying man.
"Hello Joe." Faith said smiling at him.
Hugging the girl Joe smiled, "How have you been, I've missed you for the last few weeks or so."
Faith smiled up at Joe and swept back her wavy blonde hair, "Good. School ended a week ago and my mother seems to always get home before you."
"Would you like to come to dinner?" He asked her, his eyes felt with worry and care, he though there was something going on with Faith.
Wish she could she shook her head, "No, I have to go home and do my chores, sorry." She said, and she truly was sorry.
She smiled, kissed her little sister and left, wanting to cry all the while. Her mother had left because her father... And she had tried to get Faith to come with her, but when court came her father won... Keeping her and... Now he... he... She shook her head, her tears were worthless.
She finally got home, back to... Not even getting her to finish her thought her father stumbled in, "Finally back?" He asked, his breath smelled like alcohol, once again she had come home and he was drunk.
"Yes father." She said, not smiling, her smile long gone, leaving her face the minute she had walked in the door.
"Good, cook my dinner."
"Yes father."
"Is that all you ever say?" He asked, glaring at her.
"No father."
She walked pass him and he watched her pass, "Good girl."
Faith bit her lip, she hated her life, and she hated it so much.
End of chapter one
AN: Sorry I didn't put Lord of the Rings yet, I'm trying to give to a feel of the character, I'll try not to make her a Mary-Sue, but it can get pretty hard sometime, cause having a perfect person would be cool, they may be slightly annoying. One thing, however, I will try to do, it make it so she is not a skilled fighter, she knows the basics, but with her father like he is, she's the kind that will summit. This will be a romance, not sure with whom yet, and even more, YOU GET TO PICK. The only characters I will allow her to be with however are the following.
+Legolas (I know! It's over done but hell, I wouldn't mind this)
+Boromir (I may let him live, I may not, and if they're together, I might put her with Eomer)
+Eomer (I want to lean away from this cause he's not the best looking guy, but I will put them together if you want)
Here are reasons I do not want the following pairings
-Aragorn (I would like to put him with Arwen and put a little more romance between him and Arwen!!)
-Hobbits (in gereal, the furry feet are not a turn on, but the characters will be close)
-Gimli (Please don't make me start, will leave it at the beard, to much is not always a good thing!)
-Haldir (He's GOING TO DIE!!! Plus he doesn't seem like the love-struck type, and whoever she's with will be love struck with her, so sorry)
-Faramir (He's with Eowyn in the end, I hope you get the point! Faith is not a boy stealer)
If you want a reason why a person is not on there, ask and I'll try to explain. Voting ends at the third chapter, quick, ne? ALSO, this is important, I will not take votes that only say something like 'PUT HER WITH LEGOLAS!' or more that one vote from the same person, and if the two people say the same thing and vote for the same people, I'm going to wonder. I will only take ones that have a comment or suggestion, THANK YOU!
ANY FRICKING WHO! I'm going to start working on the other chapter right now, that way I can get these out as quick as possible, and I'll try to make chapters longer, this is just a trial run kind one, and if I don't get a good reaction then I'll stop, unless even one person want me to keep going, no reason that they have to suffer just because others don't like my fic. BAIBAI!
PS: IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY FIC DON'T READ IT! JUST GO ON WITH YOUR LIFE AND IGNORE IT! But if you're going to flame me I just want to say one thing about it, so help you god if you spell one word wrong I will NEVER let you live it down, cause if you're going to give me shit about my spelling and grammar, the least you could do if have good grammar and spelling yourself. Flames will be ignored, and if they tell me something worthwhile I'll work on it, if not, GET OFF MY BACK!
Author: Dark Star Goddess
Disclaimer: I own all the characters in THIS CHAPTER. But the rest of the story will have characters owned by Tolkien, who I admire greatly, besides, if I wrote Lord of the Rings, BAD THINGS WOULD HAVE HAPPENED, and some characters would be hotter/younger.
Faith frowned to herself as she watches her little sister play a jumping game. The little girl took notice to the frown and came to her, "What is wrong Faith?"
"Nothing Constance, are you having fun?" She replied putting on a fake smile that fooled the girl.
"Yes, thank you for bringing me here, I was getting bored at home."
"Me too." Faith said looking over the three year olds sister's shoulder and noticed her stepfather, "Father is here Constance, time to go." Faith though, hiding her fear from her voice.
Constance took Faith's hand in her own and smiled, "Let's go!" She said in a cheerful voice. Faith knew that if she were done babysitting Constance for her mother she would have to come home, and home meant seeing her dad. He would always come home and... We will not finish that though, you will see, you will see soon. Faith smiled and picked her up and put Constance on her shoulders and walked to the graying man.
"Hello Joe." Faith said smiling at him.
Hugging the girl Joe smiled, "How have you been, I've missed you for the last few weeks or so."
Faith smiled up at Joe and swept back her wavy blonde hair, "Good. School ended a week ago and my mother seems to always get home before you."
"Would you like to come to dinner?" He asked her, his eyes felt with worry and care, he though there was something going on with Faith.
Wish she could she shook her head, "No, I have to go home and do my chores, sorry." She said, and she truly was sorry.
She smiled, kissed her little sister and left, wanting to cry all the while. Her mother had left because her father... And she had tried to get Faith to come with her, but when court came her father won... Keeping her and... Now he... he... She shook her head, her tears were worthless.
She finally got home, back to... Not even getting her to finish her thought her father stumbled in, "Finally back?" He asked, his breath smelled like alcohol, once again she had come home and he was drunk.
"Yes father." She said, not smiling, her smile long gone, leaving her face the minute she had walked in the door.
"Good, cook my dinner."
"Yes father."
"Is that all you ever say?" He asked, glaring at her.
"No father."
She walked pass him and he watched her pass, "Good girl."
Faith bit her lip, she hated her life, and she hated it so much.
End of chapter one
AN: Sorry I didn't put Lord of the Rings yet, I'm trying to give to a feel of the character, I'll try not to make her a Mary-Sue, but it can get pretty hard sometime, cause having a perfect person would be cool, they may be slightly annoying. One thing, however, I will try to do, it make it so she is not a skilled fighter, she knows the basics, but with her father like he is, she's the kind that will summit. This will be a romance, not sure with whom yet, and even more, YOU GET TO PICK. The only characters I will allow her to be with however are the following.
+Legolas (I know! It's over done but hell, I wouldn't mind this)
+Boromir (I may let him live, I may not, and if they're together, I might put her with Eomer)
+Eomer (I want to lean away from this cause he's not the best looking guy, but I will put them together if you want)
Here are reasons I do not want the following pairings
-Aragorn (I would like to put him with Arwen and put a little more romance between him and Arwen!!)
-Hobbits (in gereal, the furry feet are not a turn on, but the characters will be close)
-Gimli (Please don't make me start, will leave it at the beard, to much is not always a good thing!)
-Haldir (He's GOING TO DIE!!! Plus he doesn't seem like the love-struck type, and whoever she's with will be love struck with her, so sorry)
-Faramir (He's with Eowyn in the end, I hope you get the point! Faith is not a boy stealer)
If you want a reason why a person is not on there, ask and I'll try to explain. Voting ends at the third chapter, quick, ne? ALSO, this is important, I will not take votes that only say something like 'PUT HER WITH LEGOLAS!' or more that one vote from the same person, and if the two people say the same thing and vote for the same people, I'm going to wonder. I will only take ones that have a comment or suggestion, THANK YOU!
ANY FRICKING WHO! I'm going to start working on the other chapter right now, that way I can get these out as quick as possible, and I'll try to make chapters longer, this is just a trial run kind one, and if I don't get a good reaction then I'll stop, unless even one person want me to keep going, no reason that they have to suffer just because others don't like my fic. BAIBAI!
PS: IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY FIC DON'T READ IT! JUST GO ON WITH YOUR LIFE AND IGNORE IT! But if you're going to flame me I just want to say one thing about it, so help you god if you spell one word wrong I will NEVER let you live it down, cause if you're going to give me shit about my spelling and grammar, the least you could do if have good grammar and spelling yourself. Flames will be ignored, and if they tell me something worthwhile I'll work on it, if not, GET OFF MY BACK!