Blake River
By I Heart Thunderstorms
This is my first ever Doctor Who story. And I have also had this idea for a while and began to write it during last lesson Maths. It is basically if Amy and Rory had twin girls instead of just Melody. Zara is there youngest daughter what if she meets a younger version of her mother and starts travelling with her and the Doctor. What if she starts to develop strong feelings for her mothers best friend. What happens when she meets the younger version of her dad and her older sister River. Will she let them know she is there daughter or will she keep the secret to herself. Follow Zara Pond or Blake River through the fifth and part of the sixth series.
I think this is a original idea. I am not sure, if it is not I am sorry if it is anybody's
Zara/Blake looks like Elizabeth Gilles.
Please review and tell me what you think. Should I continue? Any advice on how I could improve? Is it a good idea? All constructive criticism is welcome.
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My name is Zara Pond I am more commonly known as Blake River. And this is the story of my life as a time traveller under a secret identity.
The Beast Below
Starship UK. My new home. I grabbed my backpack and sat down in one of the red seating areas. I was waiting for some people in particular. My mother and my mothers best friend. Apparently according to my mum it is important that I meet them on Starship UK. I looked around the busy market place and noticed a little girl sitting by herself crying. I thought it was strange that everybody was passing by and not stopping to notice the little girl crying to herself. Surely at least one person would stop and ask her if everything was okay. I was about to get up to talk to her when I recognised a voice talking. I looked around and spotted the people I needed to speak to. Amelia Pond and the Doctor. Amelia or as I know her as mum looked much younger then she does now. It was like I had stepped into one of her photo albums. The Doctor looked the same as always. Wearing his ever so cool bow tie. I remember every birthday up to date he had bought me a bow tie of my own a few occasions a fez. But seriously fez's are super awesome. I noticed that the little girl had gone while I was off in my own little world. I would look around Starship UK for a while before I introduced myself to them. According to certain people I am a daddy's girl where as Melody prefers mum. Which I still do not understand. Dad normally becomes overprotective when I hang around with the Doctor. As if he is trying to protect me from something, normally mum and dad would have fights over it. Mum usually says that he can not change the future. And then dad says that he can die trying. It is all very confusing. Anyway back to Starship UK. I swung my backpack over my shoulder and began walking towards nowhere in particular. I should introduce myself. My full name is Zara Nina Pond. I am nineteen years old. I have long curly brown hair, light blue eyes, pale skin and my height of 5 foot seven. I am more mature then my older sister. While she preferred activities such as
jumping off cliffs, going off in a forest by herself and swimming with sharks while growing up I enjoyed to watch DVD's, swimming and reading up on adventures in story books. Hoping that one day I could be a explorer. Mum and dad never understood why me, the quiet one enjoyed historical sites wanted a job that was full of danger, adventure and daredevil experiences. And Melody, the back chatting, adventure loving, bad girl one wanted to be a archaeologist. A job filled looking at boring old sites and hanging around examining boring artefacts all day. As I ran down multiple of streets I realised something. The creepy smiling guys in the booths were completely clean. The rest of the starship was dirty except the booths. Like people were scared to touch them. Maybe I should try and find the doctor now.
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I snuck into the 'Tower of London' ninja style. Ninjas were one of my favourite characters in the novels I read as a child. I often used to play Ninja v Assassin with Melody when we were much younger. Me playing the ninja. They seemed to be arguing about something. I passed by a shiny surface and looked into it. I needed to make sure that I looked nothing like my parents. My normally brown curly hair was tied up in I a French plait (I had received my hair colour from Grandma Shelley Williams). My light blue eyes looked exactly like my fathers. I walked over to them hearing the Doctor shout at my mum. It was quite scary actually. It was like that time when I was ten. We all went out hiking with the Doctor (One of the days he visited us. To see if everyone was okay) and I 'accidentally' got sperated from the group. And everyone was shouting at me for wandering off. Mum then went over to the lady grabbed her hand and pushed it down on one of the buttons. I felt the ground beneath my feet shake. I ran up to the Doctor and mum. It was going to be weird talking to them. Since I am somebody from there future. But I remember getting told not to reveal who I am before the time is right. "Hey"I said, " I am Blake Rivers. I was just wondering if you know where I am?", I lied through my teeth to them. Hoping that they would believe me. I am the universe's worst liar and that is saying something since on the planet Rosader the inhabitants the Prasoder's can not lie since lieing causes instant death. They just looked at me like I had grown another head. I just simply smiled at them waiting to hear there answer. Finally after a awkward minute of silence mum said, "Star Ship UK. The tower of London". I just stared back at them when they started to walk away talking amongst themselves. "Hello" I shouted from behind the, "Your just going to leave a innocent teenager in a place where she has no idea is. Let me come with you. You can adopt me" I said to them flashing my poor attempt at puppy dog eyes. The Doctor spoke up and said, "No sorry. We don't take extra passengers".
I just gave them a sad expression while saying, "Why not. I know we have just met and all. But I really need to get off this ship".
They just looked at each other and he then said, "We could take you back home if you want"
I nodded as he motioned for me to follow him and mum. I knew that this was probably one of the most stupid things I had done in my life. But I knew I could trust them. I followed them to the TARDIS. I had not seen it up close for over three years. For some reason the Doctor had stopped visiting us. As we looked back around Starship UK, I was sure I heard a faint phone ringing. Mum and the Doctor heard it as well and opened the Tardis door. As I walked inside behind them I put a shocked expression on my face. Even though I had been in this time machine more then enough times I still found it glamours. As mum picked up the phone I heard her and the Doctor talk as I walked around the time machine. I heard snippets of the conversations. I heard Winston Churchill, Britain and prime minster. Mum handed the phone over to the Doctor. As I went back to looking around the room. After about a minute later he put the phone down and turned to me he then said with a grin on his face, "Well Blake, we will be making a little stop first!"
A/N: Please review and give me some advice. Should I continue? Is it good? Where can I improve? Also if you do not like my story please can you not flame me. I am only young and I write fanficton for fun.