A/N:Hey guys and welcome to my new story "Shuichi's Excellent Adventure" which for anyone who followed my old account, will see it as a follow up to "Hajime's Excellent Adventure" which I may or may not eventually continue.
So this is indeed a retelling of DRV3 but with an added twist, it's going to be a huge harem adventure with Shuichi! And yes, it's going to be a a lemon, because everyone love's Lemons ;)
So I think my main problem with "Hajime's Excellent Adventure" is that every chapter was a lemon chapter and I felt myself forced to include lemon scenes in every chapter. So this time not every chapter will be a lemon, which may not please everyone but honestly it's for me to avoid running dry on ideas fast.
So I guess the main question is if there will be any killings, and the answer is yes...However they won't be a main focus and not every killing will be the same...Mostly because none of the waifus are dying because waifu's dying are just too sad. ;(
So Each chapter will have chapter warnings for what kind of "fetishes" will be in each chapter, that away people who may not like a certain fetish can just skip! Here is a full list of Fetishes!(Note*Some may be added later on):Pissing,Futanari,Blowjob,Yuri,Lolicon,Breastfeeding,69,Vaginal Sex, Anal Sex, Handjob,Footjob,Masturbation,Ass Smacking,Fingering,Threesome,Dildo.(If anymore are added, they will be announced in the Authors Note, also for chapters without any Lemon scenes, the Chapter Warning will just say none.)
Anyway I hope you all enjoy and feel free to leave criticism and the such!
Chapter 1 Warnings:None
~Elizabeth
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...Huh? Where am I? I thought I had opened my eyes but darkness still surrounded me, I tried to feel around but all I felt was cold metal around me. I began to turn around and once I did light shone in my face through the top of the metal in front of me, and once I got a look at the design, I understood where I was.
I was in a locker for some reason, I began to push the door in front of me but it wouldn't budge. I kept pushing and pushing until I began throwing my weight at the door and finally I was able to break through and fell onto the ground "Whoa!"
I feel down and hit the ground as I quickly reached up and stopped my hat from falling off, but once I hit the ground I heard a shriek in front of me. I looked up and saw a girl in normal school clothing looking down at me with a shocked expression...That was understandable, it would be rather weird to see someone fall out of a locker..."W-Who are you? Are you the one who kidnapped me?!"
Kidnapped?...Oh yeah...I remember now...I was walking to my uncle's detective agency when all of a sudden a van stopped beside me and grabbed me, I tried to yell for help but they must have used chloroform on me because that's the last thing I remember...Anyway it looks like she suffered the same fate "I-I'm Shuichi Saihara...A detective..."
"D-Detecive?"
"Ah well...Apprentice Detective...I do side work for my uncle at his detective agency..."As I was speaking the girl was looking at my uniform and for some reason seemed to be getting happy.
"T-That uniform! A-Are you a student at Hope's Peak?"
"Huh?...Oh yeah, I'm part of the 80th class..."
"S-So you're the Ultimate Detective!?"...*Sigh* yes that was my title...The Ultimate Detective, but it's mostly because of a case I solved by accident...I was nowhere near good enough for the same title as Kyoko Kirigiri, the legendary detective who helped solve the first killing game.
"Y-Yes that would be...correct..."As soon as I finished, the girl in front of me ran forward and wrapped me in a hug as she spouted words frantically.
"Oh thank God! I was so scared as I was alone but if the Ultimate Detective is here, then I know I can be saved!
I was taken back and tried to push her off but she wouldn't let go of her grip as tears came down her face, once she had calmed down though I was able to speak "Listen...Like I said I'm just an apprentice..."
"B-But you're the Ultimate Detective right!?"
"Yes but...Well whatever, mind if I ask your name?" She got off of me and straightened herself up before she gave a smile.
"I'm Kaede Akamatsu! I attend 'Maizono's school of arts'!"
"Ah, so you're an artist?"
"Yep! I love playing the piano! Though I'm not the best at it, but I like to think I'm better than average." Well thats better than me in any case...But I guess that means...
"So you're not an ultimate?"
"Haha, not even close! I do just enough to play the piano!" Hm...I thought I saw her around Hope's Peak but I guess not...
"I see...Well it's nice to meet you in any case Kaede."
"Hehe, same to you Shuichi!" She gave a smile and I had to admit that she was rather cute...But that should be the last thing on my mind...First off, we should try to find a way out. I gave a look around and noticed we were in a classroom...However the place had an eerie feel and I saw a monitor in the room...
...
..."Kaede, we have to leave."
"Huh? But why?"
"Trust me...Come on." I grabbed Kaede's hand and ran towards the door dragging her along as she tried to ask me what I was doing but I didn't have time to answer...Because this feels exactly like...
...
I shook that thought out of my head as I opened the door and ran into the hallway but as soon as I did, a huge metallic robot was waiting for us "HAHAHA! Found you assholes!"
A huge robot with a blue tent was in front of us as it laughed leaving Kaede screaming "W-What is that!?"
"An Exisal? But they shouldn't be out of the beta phase..." I spoke without thinking as Kaede looked at me.
"An Exisal?"
"They are a type of attack robot currently in development by the Future Foundation to help defend against the Ultimate Despair...They were created in response to the Towa City incident from a few years back...But they shouldn't be ready to be occupied yet..."
As I spoke the Exisal in front of us laughed as it raised it's hand in the air and spoke "HAHAHA! You sure know quite alot for an dumbass! But I guess you don't have all the details yet Bastard! I'll be sure to re-arrange your memory!"
The exisal smashed down as I grabbed Kaede's hand and ran narrowing avoiding the smash as I began to run down the hallway, Kaede in hand,as the Exisal laughed and began the chase. I didn't know where to go exactly but I just kept running until I found some stairs and ran down them until we were on the floor below "Shuichi, where are we going!?"
"I'm not sure, but I know we can't stand around here!" I kept running until another Exisal with a green tent appeared in front of us "..."
"Guess he's not one for talking." I made a small joke before I took a turn and began running again until I found a metal door shaped like a jail door and busted through still hauling Kaede behind me. We kept running until we finally found a door at the end with a sign at the top "Guess this must be the gym..."
"Is it safe in here?"
"..." The gym huh...I wonder...
"Shuichi?"
"...We have no choice, come on." We ran inside as a bright light enveloped us as we were blinded.
"...Huh? Two more?" I heard a voice and soon I saw around fourteen more people in front of me wearing uniforms similar to Kaede's.
"That makes sixteen in all huh?"
"Do you think they know anything? I mean that guy has different clothing than the rest of us." All of them seemed to be chattering among each other about us. That makes sense, they must be as confused as Kaede.
"M-More people?" Kaede spoke behind me as she stared at everyone...I could only imagine the confusion but my suspicions were confirmed...The school...The monitors...Sixteen students...The gym...The only thing that didn't make sense was that Kaede wasn't an ultimate...
Before I could say anything, someone's voice rang out "W-Who's the guy with the uniform?"
They must be talking about me...I went to speak but Kaede spoke up before I could "He's Shuichi Saihara! And he's the Ultimate Detective!"
I turned to Kaede but before I could do anything, everyone surrounded me and started spouting words towards me "Ultimate Detective!? Your an ultimate!?"
"That means you went to Hope's Peak Academy!?"
"Oh! Does that mean you can tell us whats going on!?"
Everyone talked over each other and it was quite hard to make out was everyone was saying, before I could even say anything more voices rang out from behind us. "Oh looks like everybody's here!"
Everyone went silent and looked behind us as five Exisals all appeared before us "Hell yeah! Now you chumps get to experience the power of the Exisals!"
"Yeah!...Wait whats an exisal?"
"You've already forgotten...?"
"Forget about him! These babies will make us millions!"
"But I thought we were using these for the introduction?"
"Introduction? We were introducing ourselves? And seriously, whats an exisal!?" The Exisals began bantering with each other as I stared at them in utter confusion while everyone else were terrified of the robots.
"Giant Robots! What!?"
"H-Holy...!"
"Are they going to kill us!?"
"Wow cool! I want one!" Everyone's voices again rang out overlapping each other as they screamed at the Exisals. Finally all the bantering between the Exisals and screaming of the others stopped when an sinister but familiar voice rang out over the speakers "Now Now Now..."
"Oh that voice!"
"Father!"
"Papa Kuma! Papa Kuma!" The Exisals screamed in delight at the voice as the others still looked on in confusion. Finally a Black and White Bear jumped out from the podium on the stage and fluttered down before landing on the podium itself as it stared at us...
"Daddy! You're here!" The exisals again ran out in delight before all of the hatches opened as 5 different bears resembling the Black and White one jumped out onto the stage as the Exisals all knelt down giving us full view of them.
"My Beautiful cubs, your all so freaking cute! The Black and White Bear yelled this out loud as the other five bears all seemed delighted. I could feel my hand tighten up as Kaede squeezed it.
"W-Who are they...W-What are they?" I froze up as I stared, I didn't want to answer but...
"...Monokuma." As soon as the words left my mouth, everything went silent as the bears stared at me along with the students.
"M-Monokuma?"
"Yes...The symbol of Despair."
"Symbol of Despair?" Everyone kept staring at me along with the bears as I stared at the Black and White bear who was called Monokuma.
"Yes...The symbol that Junko Enoshima used for her killing game."
"Junko Enoshima? Killing game? W-What are you talking about?"Kaede looked at me with a pleading look but I didn't say anything as I kept looking at Monokuma. Finally Monokuma began to laugh breaking the silence.
"PuPuPuPu Someone's informed...I'll give you that Shuichi."
"I had my suspicions for a while, you're just the confirmation."
"PuPuPuPu Hahahaha! Well this is interesting."
"But something doesn't make sense...While it's true I'm an ultimate, Kaede isn't...And judging from everyone else's reaction, they aren't either...So why do another killing game with ordinary people?"
"Huh? But my cubs should have already given them their Ultimate talents...Right kids!?"
"Huh? O-Oh...Um...Monosuke...Should've..."
"What!? Don't throw me under the bus! Monophonaie was in charge of it!"
"What!? Wasn't M-Monokid going to do it!?"
"Fuck that! Lets just put all the blame on the dipshit Monodom!
"..." As the bears began to argue with each other, Monokuma just sighed before taking out a flashlight and aiming it at us.
"Guess I'll have to do it myself..." Monokuma turned on the light as a bright flash blinded me for a split second as I heard bodies hit the floor. Once I had regained vision, I saw everyone else on the ground.
"What! Kaede, are you alright!" I bent down to Kaede and instantly checked for a pulse...She was alive and breathing fine...What was wrong with her and the others?
"PuPuPuPu They're fine, I just put them asleep...But it's interesting Shuichi...You're not affected by the Flashback light."
"Flashback Light?"
"It's a light that allows me to give them memories...Or change them PuPuPu..."
"...So you're manipulating them."
"PuPuPu All I'm doing is making them 'remember' their Ultimate Talents."
"...So that's it, take a bunch of random people and make them think their Ultimate's and put them in a killing game...Saves you the time of trying to find Ultimate's..."
"PuPuPu who can say...But it's a problem if you're not affected by it...I can't allow someone to be in my killing game that I can't control...Especially someone as knowledgeable as you..."
"So what? Are you going to kill me? That would be against your rules wouldn't it?"
"Against the rules?"
"Yes...The old killing games didn't allow you to directly interact with the students."
"...PuPuPu Maybe you're an positive after all...The killing game is going to happen no matter what...So I'll give you two options..."
"Two options?"
"PuPuPu You can either die and not be in the killing game and let the others murder each other...Or you can be in it with a twist."
"A twist?"
"PuPuPuPuPu Hahahahahaha! The twist is that all of the females will bend to your every will!"
"What do you mean?"
"I mean exactly what I say! You wanna grope Kaede? Go right ahead! You wanna fuck her? Thats fine too! Every female will do whatever you say and believe anything you say without question!"
"...How would this impact the killing game?"
"PuPuPu Knowing this, could you contain yourself?"
"All I care about is ending this game before a single murder happens...But If I have to have this power...So be it...I guess you're going to put that memory in their heads? Not to ever question me?"
"Bingo! HAHAHA But I'm glad you're going to participate, I already like you! Now Shuichi, please go back to the locker you were in and wait ten minutes, once you hear Kaede wake back up, you can exit and officially begin the game!"
"...Fine, I'm ready Monokuma...I'll end this game before you can even start it."
"PuPuPuPuPu you can try." I turned around from Monokuma and began walking back as he began laughing along with his 'cubs'...I don't know why a new killing game has started...Last I heard, the Future Foundation was easily winning...I guess this might be their last attempt to stop Hope.
But why grab fifteen normal people and make them think they are Ultimate's, but also grab a real Ultimate like myself? It makes no sense...I guess it's one of the mysteries I have to find out here.
I kept walking as I soon found the room I had woken up in and went back to the locker I was in.
As soon as I entered the locker I could hear movement from the outside as I heard the talking of the cubs that were with Monokuma. Finally it seemed they left and silence came back as I laid back against the wall of the locker...
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To think that another killing game was about to happen...As far as I know, killing games are rare, the most memorable one is the Hope's Peak killing game where the Ultimate Hope, Makoto Naegi, defeated the Ultimate Despair Junko Enoshima...But that's not the only one.
The very first one only lasted a few minutes as it was very Hunger Games style in how it was performed...I don't know many details other than that. Then there's the Jaberwock Island one involving the Remnants of Despair, however that was a virtual world and I believe I read that none of the participants actually died...
Then finally was the one involving the Future Foundation, where former Hope's Peak Headmaster Tengan created it in a flawed attempt to spread Hope...Those are the only recorded killing games...However they all involved Ultimate's, unlike this one, where it just involves ordinary people thinking they are Ultimate's...
I suppose it could be like the first one where Despair is being spread throughout the world by having this broadcasted...It's not like the people on the outside would know the Ultimate's are fake...Of course it could also be just like the Future Foundation killing game, a very flawed way to spread Hope...However, instead of using real Ultimate's, they use fake ones...
However neither of those theories explain why I'm involved since it sounded like Monokuma was surprised that a real Ultimate was here...Perhaps I was captured by mistake...Or maybe fate brought me here to end this game before it even starts. Whatever the reason, I'm not going to let anyone die, and I'm not going to believe Monokuma's lies.
My thoughts were interrupted as I heard the locker beside me open and footsteps on the floor...Kaede must have finally woken up. I took a deep sigh as I opened my locker and came out behind her and immediately I noticed she was...Different.
Gone was her school uniform, instead she had one a pink sweater vest and musical notes on her skirt. She also had a music note in her hair...Judging from what she told me before, I could take a guess what her 'ultimate talent' was. I took a step and as soon as I did she turned around and gasped. "W-Who are you!? Are you the one who kidnapped me!?"
Hm...So her memories from before were erased...Not surprising..."My name is Shuichi Saihara...The Ultimate Detective."
Her look changed to shock before changing to a smile as she nodded "Oh, so you're an Ultimate to?"
"Y-Yes..."
"Great! So am I! I'm Kaede Akamatsu, I'm the Ultimate Pianist!" Just as I thought...Which might mean that everyone's 'ultimate talents' might be based on their actual talents...Just exaggerated.
"It's nice to meet you..."
"Yep, same to you!" Well she seems more confident than before...Though I'm sure that's because of the so called flashback light Monokuma used...Which might mean...
...
It would be a problem is what Monokuma told me was true, that the females would never question me and always believe me...It would be hard to gather opnions that way...I should give some kind of test to confirm if Monokuma was bullshitting me. "Kaede, mind if I ask a question?"
"Not at all, go ahead!" Hm...I don't know what to ask, if he was telling the truth it has to be something outrageous to confirm it...But if he was lying, then it can't be something that would make Kaede already hate me...
"...Kaede, take off your shoes." If Monokuma was truthful, then she would do it without question...And if he was lying, then she would just think I'm a weirdo who likes feet.
She looked at me and blinked a few times before "Alright, sure!"
She gave a smile as my heart dropped as she bent down to take her shoes off...That means "N-No! I was just kidding...Haha...Ha..."
She stopped and looked at me before giving another smile "Haha, alright!"
...This is a problem...However I can't dwell on that...I have to find the others..."Alright Kae-"
Before I could finish my sentence, a bunch of voices rang out interrupting "Rise and Shine, Ursine!"
The voices rang out and soon the cubs from earlier appeared in front of me singing some tune...I just gave a glare at them while Kaede ran behind me "Shuichi, what are they!?"
"...Monokuma's cubs..."
"M-Monokuma's...cubs...?" I gave a nod as the cubs looked at me and laughed.
"Hey, how do you know who father is!?"
"Um...Monotaro, remember? He was the one that wasn't affect by daddy's flashback light?"
"Oh yeah..I forgot..."
"Tch, well whatever! He wasn't even right about our names. We are the Monokubs, and don't cha forget it!"
"Hell yeah! Just saying our name gives me a rock hard rager! Though we should get rid of Monodom because that sad sack of shit is making me depressed!"
"..."
The 'Monokubs" fought with each other while Kaede gripped onto my shoulders as she watched the bears in front of us. "Enough of your rambling, what do you want?"
The Monokubs stopped bickering and looked at me before the Red one spoke up. "Oh yeah! Well first off we have to introduce ourselves! I'm Monotaro."
"I'm Monophanie, nice to meet you!"
"I'm Monosuke, and don'tcha forget it!"
"And I'm fucking Monokid! And that sad sack of shit is Monodam!"
"..."
"Alright...But you didn't answer my question, what do you five want?" Monotaro seemed to clear his throat as he excitedly spoke.
"Father wanted us to tell everyone to assemble in the Gym!"
"Yep! Thats what Daddy wanted!"
"And don't be late! Because Pops doesn't like people who are late!"
"Hell yeah! Otherwise You're end up just like Monodam!"
"..."
"Fine, I'll head over there...But I'm going to find everyone else and tell them, because I don't trust any of you."
"B-But Father wanted us to tell everyone!"
"No it's ok Monotaro, Daddy said Shuichi might do this, and we should just let him."
"Oh yeah, I forgot!"
"Thats fine, just be sure to tell everyone, otherwise Pops will be mad!"
"Hell yeah! And Monodom will be killed because he's a sad sack of shit!"
"..."
"So Long, bear Well!" The Monokubs bid farewell before the five of them left, leaving me and Kaede alone.
"A-Are they gone?"
"Yes I believe so...Lets go ahead and find the others."
"Alright...But hey...Shuichi?"
"Yes?"
"You were really cool right now...No being afraid and standing up to them...And you protected me...Thanks!" I felt myself blush as I just gave a nod and quickly left.
"U-Uh yeah...No Problem..." I quickly walked to the door and opened it "Y-You coming?"
"Hehe, yep!" Kaede followed behind me as we entered the empty hallway.
As soon as we entered the hallway, the first thing that caught my eye was a door on the other side of the room that had a piano design on it. I walked over to it and examined it "What is this?"
"Oh maybe it's a music room!" Well that would make sense, though why not just hav-
"Rise and Shine Ursine!" The Monokubs all spoke up again as the five of them appeared in front of us, again causing Kaede to get behind me and grab my shoulders again.
"It's us! The Monokubs!...Wait...Was that our name?"
"You've forgotten again!?"
"Enough of your rambling, what do you five want? I thought I told you all to let me talk to everyone?" I cut off the five of them before they could enter their ususal banter with each other.
"Huh?...Oh yeah! This is an Ultimate Lab!"
"Ultimate Lab?"
"Yep Yep! Father made one for everyone! They're made so everyone can use their Ultimate talents! Kinda like practicing!" I see...So everyone can master their talents so they will look like and act more like Ultimate's.
"Oh but Daddy said their not done yet! Sp can you wait a bit longer? Please!?"
"Whatever, just leave so I can continue on finding the others."
"So Long, Bear Well!" Without questioning me, the five bears left, again leaving me and Kaede alone together.
"U-Ultimate Lab?"
"Yes, judging from the design, this is most likely yours...Though they said it's not ready yet."
"Oh...I see..." She seems...Sad? I wonder if she was hoping she could play the piano?
"Anyway, lets go ahead and try to find the others."
"A-Alright...But how do you know there are others? Those bears could be lying."
"No there are others...I know for a fact there are."
"A-Alright, I believe you." I nodded as I grabbed Kaede's hand and began leading her...Though I looked back at her to test my theory again.
"You don't mind if I hold your hand do you?"
"Huh? Why would I mind?" Right...I just nodded as I dragged her along trying to find any others who could be present.
I kept walking with Kaede trying to find where the others were, finally I came across a huge door with a sign that read 'Library' on it. I figured someone would be in here so I extended my hand and opened the door and entered, still tugging Kaede along.
Once I entered, I saw the first person that wasn't Kaede. She had long pigtails and was wearing red clothing, she was over by a shelf of books and reading something. Though as soon as I took a step, she instantly turned her head around and looked at the two of us. "Who are you two?"
Kaede let go of my hand and moved beside me, she seemed happier than before...Maybe because we found someone else. "I'm Kaede Akamatsu! And this is Shuichi Saihara!"
The girl drilled holes into the two of us that sent a chill down my spine but Kaede didn't seemed fazed "...Why are you two here?"
"Well...Shuichi and I were looking for other people and see if they were kidnapped as well."
"...So you were captured to?"
"Yeah! So are you also an Ultimate?"
"What?"
"Well me and Shuichi are both Ultimate's, so I kinda figured everyone was an Ultimate."
"...What are your Ultimate talents?"
"I'm the Ultimate Pianist! And Shuichi is the Ultimate Detective!" The girl glared at me again once she heard of my Ultimate but then just closed her eyes.
"I'm Maki Harukawa...The Ultimate Child Caregiver." Child Caregiver? So I guess she's really an babysitter...A scary babysitter...
"Nice to meet you Maki!"
"..." Kaede went to say more but I spoke up before her.
"Maki...Do you know where we are?"
"No...Why would I?"
"Well you were reading that book, so I thought it might have something interesting or informiable."
"It's nothing more than a nursery Rhyme." Nursery Rhyme huh? I guess that makes sense.
"I see...Well I was everyone has to meet in the gym so you might want to head there."
"...Fine, I'll head over in a minute." Maki went to put the book back up and a thought crossed my mind...Was she affected like Kaede?
"Maki I have to ask you a question real quick."
"What?"
"Can...You take your shoes off?" She looked at me for a moment before sighing.
"Fine..." She bent down to take her shoes off but again I stopped her.
"No wait...I was just kidding haha." Hm...Her as well huh?"
"...Weirdo." She spat out those words before walking past me and out of the Library, leaving me and Kaedo alone again.
"You really like that joke, huh Shuichi? Haha." Kaede laughed beside me after witnessing everything.
"Huh? O-Oh...Yeah..." Kaede put her hands behind her back and gave a smile that made my heart speed up. I just shook my head and gave a sigh...
...
Something began to enter my mind...A...Mans fantasy? I tried to shake it out of my head but it was pressing...Was...This Monokuma's doing? I couldn't get the thought out of my head as Kaede put her hand on my shoulder. "Shuichi...Are you alright?"
I looked at her and my mind went blank...The sudden headache went away and I calmed down...However doubt was starting to creep into my mind about Monokuma's power...Asking for them to take their shoes off isn't that out there...Perhaps I should try something else to really confirm it.
"Shuichi?"
"...Kaede, I need you to do something for me..."
"Huh? What?"
...This was just to confirm the truth...As a detective, I have to do this.
"Shuichi?"
"Kaede...Take your panties off..."
A/N: Too short? Apologies but I wanted to push through the early prologue to get to the good stuff! Expect the next chapter out in the next few days! Also you may have noticed quite a bit of changes here. First is that Shuichi didn't lose his memory, and that Hope's Peak is a real school. Also I'm going to make Shuichi more of a confident badass, like he's still going to be his likeable self, but I think in a situation like this, he would try to be confident and stand up to Monokuma to protect everyone else.
Honestly, I didn't like V3's ending, so I'm making a few changes. I hope you all don't mind! Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed and feel free to leave criticism!