Hey all! Well as promised, here it is. One massive story edit complete for my readers viewing pleasure. I hope this will make it easier on you all!
Also! I am looking for an experienced Beta to help me along with this story. If anyone is Interested please PM me. Edited 4/12/13
Oh well whatever. I hope you enjoy... it starts out just a little angsty, but I don't like angst so that won't last
Well R&R
Disclaimer: I don't own bleach... if I did me wouldn't have been so stupid as to have Ulquiorra die! *WAAAAAAHHHHH! T-T* no offense kubo sensei
In this part of town, where prostitutes and junkies walk along the side of old abandoned buildings and cracked city sidewalks in downtown Karakura, nobody would notice me.
It had been raining all day. The streets that have been un kept and ignored for years flooding with the offending water that seemed to want to cleanse Away any and all sin was making it that much harder for me to walk along the wet slippery sidewalk when I could barely hold myself up.
Eleven o clock at night in downtown Karakura wasn't a place you wanted to be. The sky over head was a murky dark grey, meshed with the night sky, the color was that of a disgusting cloudy brown, and despite it all, there were those junkies and whores who still walk the street, looking to get their next fix, or pay day. I limped forward slowly, careful not to slip.
I held on to my left arm that hung limp at my side in a bloody mess. I continued forward little by little. Even if my leg wasn't swollen I don't think my ribs would have allowed me to get as far either.
A few minutes came and went, and I had barely gotten to the corner of the street I'd been. I looked around to see if there was anyone I could call for help to… there was none. I kept on for a while longer keeping my mind on one thing
'I have to get out of here' was the only thing that was dragging me along.
'I have to get out of here! I NEED to get out of here! I have to find help'. That's what I kept playing in my mind. If I didn't have that then I'm pretty sure I would have collapsed a long time ago.
I limped on, not bothering to stop and rest, because if I did, I knew there was no way I'd have the will to get back up again. No, I needed to move.
I was brought out of my mantra by a loud scream. I turned my head to my left, where the sound had come from, and spotted a prostitute and her pimp arguing. About what? I didn't care, I was determined to make it back to the suburbs and I'll be damned if I didn't! I began to limp forward once again, and that's when it happened.
It shouldn't have bothered me anymore than usual, but after what happened tonight, it would only be expected.
The pimp yelled at his "worker", and she intern yelled back. Wrong move apparently. The pimp infuriated drew his hand back and let it loose upon the girls face.
'He drew his hand back and smacked her hard on her face, leaving a fresh bruise and an open cut left by his ring.
"Jinta! No stop! Please!" she said moving her hands to shield her face from any more abuse
"You were gonna leave me? Leave me to rot in this ditch while you go to school and become some hot shot lawyer? I don't think so! You're my girl and your stay just the way you are with me, whether you like it or not!" Jinta said as he heaved his leg back to kick her in the stomach.
She coughed up harshly as he brought his leg back to again kick her ribs in…
"NO!" I yelled out loudly I won't think about what he did! I need to go…. I need to get out of here! I thought franticly.
I won't think about what he did to me…. To my body…. I can't…
I chanced a look down at my clothes… or what was left of them.
In my hast to escape I had only enough time to pull on my now torn jeans, no time to find underwear, that wasn't important, I had left the zipper and button undone not bothering with it. My white button up blouse was torn from the left are where a long gash from my shoulder to my elbow resides. All the buttons torn off from being ripped from my torso so fast, so it hung open showing the only thing that wasn't removed from me, my bra.
Memories of his… assault on my body came crashing down on me like bricks. Each one heavier than the last slowly weighing me down, until finally I couldn't go any farther.
I fell to my knees when my legs could no longer support me, but even that didn't last too long, for my knees gave out just moments after I fell unto them. And so I here I am face down on a wet city sidewalk where no one would notice another 'Junkie' collapsed on the floor.
'It can't end like this' I thought 'It just can't. What would Yuzu say? Or dad or Ichigo?'
Thinking about my family wasn't a good idea; it only made the pain worse. And then for the first time in a long time, I began to cry.
I moved my head to the side to stare out at the street, hoping that someone would find me. But that was just stupid.
Slowly, everything began to blur, and then blacken.
'This is it huh?' I thought
I closed my eyes welcoming the darkness, so that I would feel no more pain.
But one last time I opened my eye to get a last look at my life, and I saw something, no someone. My vision is too blurred to make out a face, but what I could make out was….. White. White and green.
'What a pretty color' was all I could get out before u succumbed to the darkness.
Well that's it for now, please constructive criticism is very much welcome... and if you're a flamer I will sick Ulquiorra on you! and he will NOT! Be half naked! Lol review please!
Edited 4/12/13