Me: The story is called 'Abusive life'
Summary: Eriol is the 'perfect guy' he's in middle class of school. He's intelligent, helpful, and a great athlete. But not everybody is perfect…what's wrong with Eriol? Why is he getting pale everyday? Does Tomoyo know anything about this?
Age: Tomoyo, Sakura-15, Eriol, Syaoran-16, Nakuru-19, Touya-20
Note: No magic Kaho and Yukito are married, E+T bit S+S and a bit N+T (Sorry T+Y)
*Chapter one*
(After school)
"Sup Eriol" said Syaoran
"Nothing much, Syaoran, do u ask that chick yet?" said Eriol
"No man, I feel nervous," said Syaoran
"You shouldn't, Sakura feels the same for you" said Eriol
"You're right Eriol, I'll ask her tonight" said Syaoran running away from Eriol
After Syaoran left, Eriol took out a cigarette and then smoke
"That's it baby, no one will never know about this," said Eriol holding the pack of cigarette
(With S+T [At night])
"Sakura, why are you nervous for your big date?" said Tomoyo
"What if I mess up the date? Syaoran will hate me," said Sakura
"No what ifs, Syaoran will like you no matter what," said Tomoyo
"I hope so Tomoyo, I need the perfect dress for the date," said Sakura
Tomoyo nodded
"Here" said Tomoyo handing Sakura a dress (I don't wear dress
-_-; I'm a boy so I don't know the description)
"Thanks Tomoyo, I owe you," said Sakura
"Just tell me all about your date later," said Tomoyo
" Okay" said Sakura
Tomoyo left Sakura's house and walked home
When she walked home she saw a man who was about her age smoking
Tomoyo's POV
'Who would smoke at the age of fifteen?' thought Tomoyo
As she walks closer, the man walks back step by step.
"Who are you?" said Tomoyo
Eriol's POV
Ah…I needed that. What's that? I looked around, I see Tomoyo, Sakura's best friend there. I got worried, what if she sees me smoking and tell everybody, that'll ruin my reputation. She's coming closer, as I walk back. She walks closer and closer.
I ran away
"Wait!" I heard her shouting
Tomoyo's POV
Who was that? He's scared, but why? And who was he?
Eriol's POV
I was panting, I felt tired as I arrived home. I shut my eyes tightly as I open the door
"Where have you been Eriol? You should've been back two hours ago!" shouted Eriol's mother who is Mitzu
"Mom, I was out for a while," I had said
"Did you get what I want?" said Mitzu
"Yes mother," I said as I handed her some cigarettes
"Some are missing, Eriol! You been smoking" said Mitzu
"No mom, a man stole some of it," I lied. I know I shouldn't lied to my mother.
"Eriol you're lying, for that you have to be punish," said Mitzu. Mother was holding the whip again, she start hurting me
As I scream in pain my mom start to whip me even more
"Eriol do you learn your lesson?" said Mitzu
"Yes mother," I said wincing
"You will get this much pain if you start lying to me again" said Mitzu
"Yes mother," I repeated
"Go to sleep and buy some more tobacco," said Mitzu
"Yes Mitzu" I muttered
"What do you say Eriol?" hiss Mitzu
"Yes mother" I said quickly
"You are just like your father, Eriol, do not disobey me again," said Mitzu
The moment I hear father, I immediately felt guilty. I should've saved him from mother. Nakuru should be home now, I walked our room and saw Nakuru
"Hey Nakuru" said Eriol
"Eriol did you get the whipped from mom?" said Nakuru
"Yes" I said
"Eriol, we have to do something about mom," said Nakuru worrying (They're brother and sister in this story)
"Nakuru, you heard what she said, if we tell, she'll come and get us and our friends" I warn her
Nakuru's POV
I was worrying for my brother. That was his fifth time this week. Mother is getting stricter about Eriol, father why did you have to leave us?
"Eriol let's go to sleep now" I said
"K" Eriol said
Eriol went to his sleeping bag and slept. I turn off the light and slept in my sleeping bag too. I wish we could have a real life
Closing my eyes
*Tomorrow*
Reader's POV
"Nakuru, Eriol! School!" shouted Mitzu whipping them
Nakuru and Eriol suddenly woke up then went to school
"Eriol, remember give me more tobacco" said Mitzu
Eriol nodded
(School)
"What sup Eriol?" said a kid. Eriol gave him a fake smiled and said "Nothing much"
Eriol went to his room before the bell ring
"Sup Eriol" said almost all the kids
"Nothing much guys" said Eriol giving them another fake smile
Tomoyo and Sakura went barging in and said
"Sorry Tsuki-sensei, we over slept"
"That's fine Sakura, Tomoyo, go on take your seat," said Tsuki
"Now we began on the American and the Vietnam war" said Tsuki
Eriol's POV
Got to stay focus, but I feel dizzy, I have to stay awake. That smoking really cost me, erg… the pain is still hurting me
"Eriol?" said Tsuki
"Yes Tsuki-sensei?" I asked
"Do you know when is the American and Vietnam War?" said Tsuki
"Uh…1950?" I said, I was actually guessing but that was right
"You are correct Eriol like always," said Tsuki
"Alright today we are doing a project that involves everybody, it's about a play. A little kid lost his father but not his mother. Everyday the kid is getting pain from his mother, but a little girl found out that he was being abuse and tries to help him. But his mother forbid it and tries to kill her. This is called 'Life and abuse," said Tsuki
(After school)
Still Eriol's POV
"Syaoran, did anything happened during the date?" I said,
"It was cool," said Syaoran smiling a bit
I smirked
"You kissed her didn't you little wolf?" I teased him with his nickname
He began to blush and start to stuttered
"Well, I…I was, kinda, yea"
I pat him on the back
"It's ok dude, hope you guys get married" I said and smirking too
He was blushing so hard that a tomato can't even beat him
"How about you man? Who do you like?" said Syaoran
I can't really say, I don't think I like anybody in this school
"I'm not sure Syaoran" I said while I shrug
"Fine dark star" said Syaoran saying my nickname (Eh, I call Eriol dark star for no reason what so ever)
"I gotta head home now Eriol see ya," said Syaoran leaving
I was relived as he left. I didn't want to smoke but I'm already addicted to it
I went to the store and buy some cigarette and tobacco. I showed him my fake I.D. he believed me. I went to the park again to have some relaxation
Tomoyo's POV
"So Sakura, what happen at your date with Syaoran?" I said curiously
"Well…" Sakura told me everything and I mean everything
"He kissed you?" I shouted
Sakura nodded
I shriek into happiness
"Tomoyo, do you like somebody?" Sakura said changing the subject
"Well…no" I said
I really don't have a crush. We talked a bit, and then Sakura went home. I decide to go to the park as I went there I saw the same man smoking. I began walk toward, but he didn't run away. I guess he doesn't see me. I saw who it was and I gasp
Eriol's POV
Oh no…someone saw me. I looked who it was and it was Tomoyo, Sakura's best friend. I dropped my cigarette and ran to where I live
Tomoyo's POV
I was about to say 'Wait' but he was out of sight. I can tell he's going to his house. I'll ask him tomorrow at school
*Tomorrow*
Reader's POV
Eriol was awake by his mother whipping him. He shut his eyes tightly trying hard not to cry. He went to school and saw Tomoyo there. He was usually the first person there. He knows Tomoyo would say 'Your reputation is ruined' or something like that
But Tomoyo said something different
"Eriol?"
"Yes?" With his eyes close
Tomoyo looked down
"I won't tell"
Eriol open his eyes and said
"W-what?"
"Eriol, not everybody is perfect, but I won't tell"
Eriol didn't say anything but nodded
There was an awkward silence
"Are you auditioning?" said Tomoyo breaking the silence
"Yes, I'm audition for the abusive boy how about you?" said Eriol
"I'm auditioning for a small part like the girl's best friend and help the play by creating costumes," said Tomoyo
Eriol stared at her
"W-what?" Tomoyo stuttered,
"When you said 'not everybody is perfect' do you also mean you?" said Eriol
Tomoyo nodded
"Daidouji (Spelling?) You don't care about yourself or your reputation, but I do. You're great in everything how cannot you be perfect?" asked Eriol
"I…I guess I never thought of that but I know there are something that makes me imperfect" said Tomoyo
Eriol sighed as the bell rang
They all took the seats while the students were there
"Ok, the audition starts now," said Tsuki
"Tomoyo, which part are you going for?" whisper Sakura
Tomoyo smiled
"I'll help the play by making costumes and I think I would try out for the girl's best friend" said Tomoyo
"Tomoyo why not the lead part?" said Sakura
"I'll let somebody else get the lead part," said Tomoyo
When they were talking, Eriol was listening
Eriol sighed once more
'Tomoyo you really are unselfish' thought Eriol
(At the audition)
"Let's start with you Sakura to be Madison and Syaoran to be Eli," said Tsuki
"You are really stubborn Eli moon!" shouted Sakura
"You don't know how I feel Madison, I feel pain, hurt, and anger. You never felt like that!" shouted Syaoran
"You're wrong! I feel the same as you are," said Sakura softly
"How can you feel the same?" Syaoran said
"Because I love you, I feel for you!" shouted Sakura
Eriol and Tomoyo watch the scene with no emotion on their face
Tsuki clap his hand
"Good job, let's try the next pair, Eriol and Kiko" said Tsuki
[Kiko
Description: Brown hair,
Dark blue eyes, always wear girl clothes
Occupation: Trying to get Eriol and be the most popular girl
Boyfriend: none (Soon she will get a boyfriend)
Talent: Acting]
"Eli you're not always perfect, nobody is" said Kiko
'Once Eriol and I get the part, he'll fall for me' thought Kiko
"But as you said, nobody is perfect. Why do I feel that you are?" said Eriol. Eriol's eyes widen
'This is the conversation Tomoyo and I had a while ago' thought Eriol
"I'm not perfect Eli," said Kiko holding his hand
Eriol felt a chill in his back
"But Madison, you don't care for yourself only others. Even enemies, why couldn't you call yourself perfect?" said Eriol
'Our conversation' thought Tomoyo watching the scene
"That's great guys!" said Tsuki
"Next Tomoyo will play Madison's best friend, Sapphire," said Tsuki (In the English version of CCS, I don't like name of Sakura, so I change it to Sapphire)
"Tsuki is it ok if Sakura come, not Kiko?" said Tomoyo
Tsuki nodded
"Madison, you have to help Eli, he's in pain," said Tomoyo with emotion
"Sapphire, he's too stubborn. He doesn't care about himself," said Sakura
"You're the only one who can help him. You love him and so does he," said Tomoyo looking down on the ground
'Tomoyo is great at acting, why didn't she go after the lead part?' thought Tsuki
Tsuki smiled
"That's enough results are tomorrow," said Tsuki
*After school*
"Sakura I'll meet you later" said Tomoyo. Sakura and her friends nodded
Tomoyo went to find Eriol and she saw him on the back of the building pulling out another cigarette
Tomoyo ran as fast as she can to hit his hand throwing the cigarette out
"What the hell?" Eriol said
"No more" said Tomoyo coldly
Eriol growled
"You never said that you'll help me, you said that you'll never tell anybody" said Eriol glaring at her
"But I will help you, you're smoking for a reason," said Tomoyo softly
"I am not!" Eriol lied
"You're lying, Eriol you're hiding something and I will found out" said Tomoyo coldly walking away
*End transmission*
Me: That's the first part of the chapter, the next chapter will be up soon
Summary: Eriol is the 'perfect guy' he's in middle class of school. He's intelligent, helpful, and a great athlete. But not everybody is perfect…what's wrong with Eriol? Why is he getting pale everyday? Does Tomoyo know anything about this?
Age: Tomoyo, Sakura-15, Eriol, Syaoran-16, Nakuru-19, Touya-20
Note: No magic Kaho and Yukito are married, E+T bit S+S and a bit N+T (Sorry T+Y)
*Chapter one*
(After school)
"Sup Eriol" said Syaoran
"Nothing much, Syaoran, do u ask that chick yet?" said Eriol
"No man, I feel nervous," said Syaoran
"You shouldn't, Sakura feels the same for you" said Eriol
"You're right Eriol, I'll ask her tonight" said Syaoran running away from Eriol
After Syaoran left, Eriol took out a cigarette and then smoke
"That's it baby, no one will never know about this," said Eriol holding the pack of cigarette
(With S+T [At night])
"Sakura, why are you nervous for your big date?" said Tomoyo
"What if I mess up the date? Syaoran will hate me," said Sakura
"No what ifs, Syaoran will like you no matter what," said Tomoyo
"I hope so Tomoyo, I need the perfect dress for the date," said Sakura
Tomoyo nodded
"Here" said Tomoyo handing Sakura a dress (I don't wear dress
-_-; I'm a boy so I don't know the description)
"Thanks Tomoyo, I owe you," said Sakura
"Just tell me all about your date later," said Tomoyo
" Okay" said Sakura
Tomoyo left Sakura's house and walked home
When she walked home she saw a man who was about her age smoking
Tomoyo's POV
'Who would smoke at the age of fifteen?' thought Tomoyo
As she walks closer, the man walks back step by step.
"Who are you?" said Tomoyo
Eriol's POV
Ah…I needed that. What's that? I looked around, I see Tomoyo, Sakura's best friend there. I got worried, what if she sees me smoking and tell everybody, that'll ruin my reputation. She's coming closer, as I walk back. She walks closer and closer.
I ran away
"Wait!" I heard her shouting
Tomoyo's POV
Who was that? He's scared, but why? And who was he?
Eriol's POV
I was panting, I felt tired as I arrived home. I shut my eyes tightly as I open the door
"Where have you been Eriol? You should've been back two hours ago!" shouted Eriol's mother who is Mitzu
"Mom, I was out for a while," I had said
"Did you get what I want?" said Mitzu
"Yes mother," I said as I handed her some cigarettes
"Some are missing, Eriol! You been smoking" said Mitzu
"No mom, a man stole some of it," I lied. I know I shouldn't lied to my mother.
"Eriol you're lying, for that you have to be punish," said Mitzu. Mother was holding the whip again, she start hurting me
As I scream in pain my mom start to whip me even more
"Eriol do you learn your lesson?" said Mitzu
"Yes mother," I said wincing
"You will get this much pain if you start lying to me again" said Mitzu
"Yes mother," I repeated
"Go to sleep and buy some more tobacco," said Mitzu
"Yes Mitzu" I muttered
"What do you say Eriol?" hiss Mitzu
"Yes mother" I said quickly
"You are just like your father, Eriol, do not disobey me again," said Mitzu
The moment I hear father, I immediately felt guilty. I should've saved him from mother. Nakuru should be home now, I walked our room and saw Nakuru
"Hey Nakuru" said Eriol
"Eriol did you get the whipped from mom?" said Nakuru
"Yes" I said
"Eriol, we have to do something about mom," said Nakuru worrying (They're brother and sister in this story)
"Nakuru, you heard what she said, if we tell, she'll come and get us and our friends" I warn her
Nakuru's POV
I was worrying for my brother. That was his fifth time this week. Mother is getting stricter about Eriol, father why did you have to leave us?
"Eriol let's go to sleep now" I said
"K" Eriol said
Eriol went to his sleeping bag and slept. I turn off the light and slept in my sleeping bag too. I wish we could have a real life
Closing my eyes
*Tomorrow*
Reader's POV
"Nakuru, Eriol! School!" shouted Mitzu whipping them
Nakuru and Eriol suddenly woke up then went to school
"Eriol, remember give me more tobacco" said Mitzu
Eriol nodded
(School)
"What sup Eriol?" said a kid. Eriol gave him a fake smiled and said "Nothing much"
Eriol went to his room before the bell ring
"Sup Eriol" said almost all the kids
"Nothing much guys" said Eriol giving them another fake smile
Tomoyo and Sakura went barging in and said
"Sorry Tsuki-sensei, we over slept"
"That's fine Sakura, Tomoyo, go on take your seat," said Tsuki
"Now we began on the American and the Vietnam war" said Tsuki
Eriol's POV
Got to stay focus, but I feel dizzy, I have to stay awake. That smoking really cost me, erg… the pain is still hurting me
"Eriol?" said Tsuki
"Yes Tsuki-sensei?" I asked
"Do you know when is the American and Vietnam War?" said Tsuki
"Uh…1950?" I said, I was actually guessing but that was right
"You are correct Eriol like always," said Tsuki
"Alright today we are doing a project that involves everybody, it's about a play. A little kid lost his father but not his mother. Everyday the kid is getting pain from his mother, but a little girl found out that he was being abuse and tries to help him. But his mother forbid it and tries to kill her. This is called 'Life and abuse," said Tsuki
(After school)
Still Eriol's POV
"Syaoran, did anything happened during the date?" I said,
"It was cool," said Syaoran smiling a bit
I smirked
"You kissed her didn't you little wolf?" I teased him with his nickname
He began to blush and start to stuttered
"Well, I…I was, kinda, yea"
I pat him on the back
"It's ok dude, hope you guys get married" I said and smirking too
He was blushing so hard that a tomato can't even beat him
"How about you man? Who do you like?" said Syaoran
I can't really say, I don't think I like anybody in this school
"I'm not sure Syaoran" I said while I shrug
"Fine dark star" said Syaoran saying my nickname (Eh, I call Eriol dark star for no reason what so ever)
"I gotta head home now Eriol see ya," said Syaoran leaving
I was relived as he left. I didn't want to smoke but I'm already addicted to it
I went to the store and buy some cigarette and tobacco. I showed him my fake I.D. he believed me. I went to the park again to have some relaxation
Tomoyo's POV
"So Sakura, what happen at your date with Syaoran?" I said curiously
"Well…" Sakura told me everything and I mean everything
"He kissed you?" I shouted
Sakura nodded
I shriek into happiness
"Tomoyo, do you like somebody?" Sakura said changing the subject
"Well…no" I said
I really don't have a crush. We talked a bit, and then Sakura went home. I decide to go to the park as I went there I saw the same man smoking. I began walk toward, but he didn't run away. I guess he doesn't see me. I saw who it was and I gasp
Eriol's POV
Oh no…someone saw me. I looked who it was and it was Tomoyo, Sakura's best friend. I dropped my cigarette and ran to where I live
Tomoyo's POV
I was about to say 'Wait' but he was out of sight. I can tell he's going to his house. I'll ask him tomorrow at school
*Tomorrow*
Reader's POV
Eriol was awake by his mother whipping him. He shut his eyes tightly trying hard not to cry. He went to school and saw Tomoyo there. He was usually the first person there. He knows Tomoyo would say 'Your reputation is ruined' or something like that
But Tomoyo said something different
"Eriol?"
"Yes?" With his eyes close
Tomoyo looked down
"I won't tell"
Eriol open his eyes and said
"W-what?"
"Eriol, not everybody is perfect, but I won't tell"
Eriol didn't say anything but nodded
There was an awkward silence
"Are you auditioning?" said Tomoyo breaking the silence
"Yes, I'm audition for the abusive boy how about you?" said Eriol
"I'm auditioning for a small part like the girl's best friend and help the play by creating costumes," said Tomoyo
Eriol stared at her
"W-what?" Tomoyo stuttered,
"When you said 'not everybody is perfect' do you also mean you?" said Eriol
Tomoyo nodded
"Daidouji (Spelling?) You don't care about yourself or your reputation, but I do. You're great in everything how cannot you be perfect?" asked Eriol
"I…I guess I never thought of that but I know there are something that makes me imperfect" said Tomoyo
Eriol sighed as the bell rang
They all took the seats while the students were there
"Ok, the audition starts now," said Tsuki
"Tomoyo, which part are you going for?" whisper Sakura
Tomoyo smiled
"I'll help the play by making costumes and I think I would try out for the girl's best friend" said Tomoyo
"Tomoyo why not the lead part?" said Sakura
"I'll let somebody else get the lead part," said Tomoyo
When they were talking, Eriol was listening
Eriol sighed once more
'Tomoyo you really are unselfish' thought Eriol
(At the audition)
"Let's start with you Sakura to be Madison and Syaoran to be Eli," said Tsuki
"You are really stubborn Eli moon!" shouted Sakura
"You don't know how I feel Madison, I feel pain, hurt, and anger. You never felt like that!" shouted Syaoran
"You're wrong! I feel the same as you are," said Sakura softly
"How can you feel the same?" Syaoran said
"Because I love you, I feel for you!" shouted Sakura
Eriol and Tomoyo watch the scene with no emotion on their face
Tsuki clap his hand
"Good job, let's try the next pair, Eriol and Kiko" said Tsuki
[Kiko
Description: Brown hair,
Dark blue eyes, always wear girl clothes
Occupation: Trying to get Eriol and be the most popular girl
Boyfriend: none (Soon she will get a boyfriend)
Talent: Acting]
"Eli you're not always perfect, nobody is" said Kiko
'Once Eriol and I get the part, he'll fall for me' thought Kiko
"But as you said, nobody is perfect. Why do I feel that you are?" said Eriol. Eriol's eyes widen
'This is the conversation Tomoyo and I had a while ago' thought Eriol
"I'm not perfect Eli," said Kiko holding his hand
Eriol felt a chill in his back
"But Madison, you don't care for yourself only others. Even enemies, why couldn't you call yourself perfect?" said Eriol
'Our conversation' thought Tomoyo watching the scene
"That's great guys!" said Tsuki
"Next Tomoyo will play Madison's best friend, Sapphire," said Tsuki (In the English version of CCS, I don't like name of Sakura, so I change it to Sapphire)
"Tsuki is it ok if Sakura come, not Kiko?" said Tomoyo
Tsuki nodded
"Madison, you have to help Eli, he's in pain," said Tomoyo with emotion
"Sapphire, he's too stubborn. He doesn't care about himself," said Sakura
"You're the only one who can help him. You love him and so does he," said Tomoyo looking down on the ground
'Tomoyo is great at acting, why didn't she go after the lead part?' thought Tsuki
Tsuki smiled
"That's enough results are tomorrow," said Tsuki
*After school*
"Sakura I'll meet you later" said Tomoyo. Sakura and her friends nodded
Tomoyo went to find Eriol and she saw him on the back of the building pulling out another cigarette
Tomoyo ran as fast as she can to hit his hand throwing the cigarette out
"What the hell?" Eriol said
"No more" said Tomoyo coldly
Eriol growled
"You never said that you'll help me, you said that you'll never tell anybody" said Eriol glaring at her
"But I will help you, you're smoking for a reason," said Tomoyo softly
"I am not!" Eriol lied
"You're lying, Eriol you're hiding something and I will found out" said Tomoyo coldly walking away
*End transmission*
Me: That's the first part of the chapter, the next chapter will be up soon