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The room was covered with blood, it was a horrifying sight for those who hadn't seen it before but for the silver haired man who had just entered its contents where all too familiar. He looked behind him to see his team of NCIS agents following him into the hotel room, there gear at the ready to start solving the case.

He walked around the room taking all the aspects in; it looked like any other room in the hotel if you take away the blood and clean up the mess that covered the floor. He went to the master bedroom to see the reason that they where there. There were three bodies in total, one of a young boy, no older then 11, A women and a man where also there, it looked like it was a family all in the one room. The man looked like he put up a good fight to protect the others and the women was protecting the child.

Gibbs hated it when there where children involved. It was just not fair on them. There was a sound in the doorway and Gibbs turned around to see a shorter older man standing there with a young assistant behind him.

"Gibbs," the man said in acknowledgement to the man in front of him. "Are there any others?" he asked to make sure that this was it. Gibbs shook his head slowly to signal that this was all. " Okay palmer better not waste time just standing here" he said to the man behind him as he walked into the room.

"I'll be back in a minute Duck" Gibbs then left the room to see what the rest of his team had gotten done. He made his way into the living area to find a man on a laptop typing something up, he looked around to see Gibbs behind him and started to report.

"The hotel manager says that this room was lent out to a Ms Shana Higurashi and her two children, they came two days ago from Japan." The man clicked on another document and pictures of the women's id came up. "he also said that the Man, LT Mitchell Walter came in each day to take the kids out, it appears to be a divorced couple."

Gibbs thought back to the room with the bodies, there was only on child in there. "McGee, Get as much information on the kids as possible." McGee responded with a quick 'Got it Boss' and started to type away on his laptop.

Gibbs left to another dinning type room to find two of his agents. A man and a woman, the woman appeared to be lecturing the other about something. "Dinozzo, David, stop squabbling and tell me what you got." This surprised the two causing the man to start ranting.

"Yeah Boss," Dinozzo said eyeing the woman evilly. "well what we have here is a fight," he smiled at his colleague.

"Yeah I can see that Dinozzo," Gibbs said to the confused agent "what about the case"

The woman laughed "what Tony here was trying to say is that the fight appears to have started here before moving towards the master bedroom." She said before smugly looking at Dinozzo forcing his name to sound insulting.

"Thanks Ziva," Gibbs said leaving the two alone to fight, again, and go see if Ducky had gotten anything yet.

He entered to see the two packing up getting ready to go "Palmer if you would go get the equipment from the van so we can get these three back," Dr Mallard said still not noticing Gibbs as he got up to leave.

"Duck, you got me time of death?" the special agent asked the man causing him to jump in surprise

"Oh, hello there," Ducky said finally noticing him "yes yes the man died no more than four hours ago and the other two no to long after, it appears that the man was trying to protect the other two," and with that Palmer returned and Gibbs left them to continue their work.

He went out to his team who appeared to be packing up and getting ready to go, there wasn't much left to do here anyway but he wanted to be sure, he was still confused about the missing child. "Did you check all the cupboards?" he asked wanting to know if anyone had found anything.

"No boss we didn't think too" McGee said responding to the question asked "do you want us to now?" he asked with a confused look on his face. He looked at Gibbs who had the looked on his face that kind of said 'you think' and with that the team was off.

It wasn't long until you heard the usual 'clears' from the boys but when he didn't from Ziva he went over to investigate. He found her standing in front of an open closet eyes wide in shock of what sat before her. Gibbs walked over to see what had startled her.

To his surprise inside he found a young teenage girl flinching from the sudden light, when he saw her raven black hair he knew that they had found the missing child.


okay there we go first chapter