Okay this is Sango's poem to Miroku. If you don't entirely understand it, it is saying how Naraku gave her so much pain, because of everything. And that one day in the future they could be together but not any time soon.
How I feel
You laugh while my head screams
When I'm having nightmares you have wonderful dreams
As if he didn't cause enough pain
There is no love from my heart for you to gain
When you touch me I jerk away
Because there is something that I need to say
I love you, but your heart will break
Because everything around here is unreal and fake
You see things that are outside
When I see the things that are inside
So there is no reason for us to pretend
And because of these hurtful words your heart might need to mend
I'm leaving now, cause I can't handle this
This wonderful thing, and uncontrollable bliss
Please forgive me, I'm not worthy of you
You can say anything, but you know this is true
In the future, some day
Together we can finally stay.
okay well if you guys wouldbe so kindly enough to tell me how it was. I'm really into poetry. Not really writing it, so i need to know how well i wrote it. Thanks