Taking Back Ba Sing Se

by FearlessFencer

The Avatar is gone and the great wall and city of Ba Sing Se has fallen. But what about a few spirited teens that are left? Will they fight for their home or be overrun by the Fire Nation.

1. Chapter 1

-While the Avatar and his friends were planning an Invasion of the Fire Nation, another group of rebels were starting an Extermination of the red-armored soldiers.

In the window of a ramshackle hut built right into the side of the once-great wall of Be Sing Se, a light flickered twice then a shadowy profile blocked the flame. Another, smaller figure could just barely be seen in the light that was left.

"Do ya think this'll actually work, Ly?" Whispered the small figure, fear in his voice and uncertainty in his bespectacled eyes.

"It will work," replied the tall figure fiercely. " It has to." Finally he blew out the signal light and they where bathed in total darkness. Ly looked out the window, knowing(but not seeing) that his rebel friends where hiding out there somewhere. He looked out the window a second longer, at the lowest part of Be Sing Se, at his home.

The candle had been lit. Tonight they would take back Ba Sing Se.

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Just the beginning of a story I might continue. What do you think so far? I know it's short but if I added anymore it would give away a lot.