When the Valar were Divine

by Cactaur of Doom

Centuries ago the elves lived with humans in peace, they left middle-earth quitely. but several remained. He watched as man destroyed the world, killing off the other species. all other elves where destroyed, but one lived. This is his story.

This story may seem familiar. If it does that is because I have taken over ad am making

adjustments that suite my fancy. I have spell checked this old piece of crap and have slowly

begun an actual story line. I have to say the person who was here writing before me the

biggest idiot I have ever seen. But enough of that. You didn't come here to hear my qualms

over idiot 13 year olds. So here is the new and improved version of when the Valar where

Divine.

And so it begins.

When I was young the stories I heard

of Valinor where splendid. The place seemed like an unattainable fairy haven.

A paradise for perfect elves and those the Valar chose. But not all elves go across the seas.

Not all firstborn are perfect, there are some who where not lucky and now grace the halls of

Mandos. And even fewer, those who never left. In fact there is only one who never sailed

west. That one is me. I stayed behind. I watched as middle-earth became mans world and

elves where forgotten. The dwarves retreated into the mountains and where all slaughtered

by scavenger Orcs. The Orcs and Goblins themselves where destroyed and man ruled all.

Man became lazy in their speech and middle-earth became simply "earth". And then man

began creating technology. Electricity sprang up everywhere and magic was forgotten. I hid

away from the men. Fearing I would be murdered like the dwarves, But there is no escape.

Not for long at least. No safe haven can keep the humans at bay for long not even the grey

Haven. Not that I could travel there if I knew where it was. Man owns the seas to. There

will never be rest for me, because I am an elf, one of the firstborn. I am Legolas, youngest

son of Thranduil and Prince of Mirkwood, once known as Greenwood the great. I never

will find peace... and nobody can help me .....Not even you.....

So, what do you think is it a keeper? I hope so!!!!

Give me input. What do you think will happen? Nothing is set in stone yet, but I think it is a promising idea. Let me know what tickled your fancy and I will se what I can do.