Hey.. yeah, if you read my bioish thing, you'll have noticed that I had to cut off my other fic, and for that I'm sorry. I just don't have enough time or energy to write any fic but this one. And as for this fic here, (again, if you read my bio you'd know this) I'm rewriting it. Why? No big reason or excuse. I just didn't like it. Lol. Don't worry. It'll be exactly the same, just (hopefully) better written (you know, more words? Lol, j/k). I'm also sorry that it takes me so long to update. I've been extra/ultra busy (I should be doing homework right now), and whenever I got on ff.net, I usually just read fics... Anyway. Another apology - I'm sorry my fic keeps getting so repetative in the later chapters. That's another thing I'm aiming to fix. So, here's the revised (but not editted - after all, my fics just aren't the same without all the typos, are they?) version of chapter 1. Please enjoy... And *please* R&R.
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Leaves danced in the wind as the sun shone peacefully down upon the citizens of Tokyo, warming the pavement that was crowded with several bustling citizens. No one was paying attention to anyone else, far too consumed in their own worries to care about others, ignorant to all the supernatural things that were going on throughout the world... Of course, some were very aware of the odd, unnatural things going down, including the two teens caught in the crowds, mosying down the street (yes, mosying).
"Yes! Two days of school until summer vacation! MWAHAHA!"
"It's not like it would make a difference to you, Yusuke, you're never in class anyway."
"Oh yeah? Well... okay, you're right."
"Aren't I always?" One of the teens smirked playfully.
Keiko, the latter of the two, was nibbling on a slowly melting ice cream bar she had bought from a vendor a few minutes back. Her short hair and skirt ruffled and swirled in the gentle wind, but it was not uncomfortable. She was even enjoying bickering with Yusuke, and she knew he enjoyed it as much as she did.
They continued on in companionable silence (having run out of arguments), delighting in each others company, and walking beneath the pleasant dappled shadows of trees that lined the sidewalks. Their footsteps could not be heard above the murmuring of the crowd around them, but the two didn't mind. The sun's golden rays beamed down between foliage as the two turned off into a shortcut through a small park.
From the opposite side of the small park, a petite teen with bouyant ebony hair trotted down the unpaved path. "Gotta get to the well before Inuyasha get's mad..." Her mind was so set on her chanting and path home that she didn't have enough time to keep from tripping over an overgrown root. She didn't have enough time to keep from falling... straight into Yusuke's arms.
Having his ultra-fast reflexes, he caught her without a problem, but released her as soon as possible. He didn't want to be slapped by his girlfriend. Yusuke was quite startled, and, despite the fact that the girl was very pretty and pleasant to hold, he didn't want to be that intimate with any girl but Keiko.
He paused a second, losing his train of thought only a moment as he stared at the mysterious girl, who was staring nervously about, itching to get a move on. The boy soon remembered what he had been planning on saying. "Watch where you're going from now o--" Yusuke made an effort to tell her off, but she skipped past him easily... There was something odd about her... Somehow, her aura slightly resembled Genkai's, but... different. "Come back here!" He allowed her to go on her way, however. Was it really worth chasing her? No... He didn't know if there was really anything odd about her...
"I'm so sorry!" Kagome Higurashi called as she booked it around the corner ahead, right out of the park.
Staring after her a moment, he began mumbling, his temper finally overtaking his curiosity. "Stupid girl. Honestly. Who in there right mind run into Yusuke Yurameshi..." He went into a stream of words Keiko chose not to listen to.
"Yusuke, if you are going to keep talking like that, I'm just gonna walk myself home." She stopped, placing one hand on her hip while waiting for a reply from her classmate, but to her disappointment he continued walking forward, oblivious to her presence.
He continued to swear and mutter under his breath.
"Yusuke!"
Again, she gained no reply.
Keiko pouted, a crease forming between her eyebrows. "Guys are so dumb." She stalked off, leaving Yusuke to swear all he wanted, kicking up a few clods of dust as she trudged away.
Yusuke hardly noticed her leave. He did, however notice the annoying, bubbly, blue haired diety of death that popped up next to a large oak tree tree in front of him.
She leaned liesurely against the tree, her face slightly hidden in the ominous, cool shadow of greenery, obscuring her features and making her look almost... evil.... "Hey Yusuke!"
He stared in horror, "NO! NO! Not on summer vacation! AAAAAAAAH!!" He ran like he had never ran before...
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Leaves danced in the wind as the sun shone peacefully down upon the citizens of Tokyo, warming the pavement that was crowded with several bustling citizens. No one was paying attention to anyone else, far too consumed in their own worries to care about others, ignorant to all the supernatural things that were going on throughout the world... Of course, some were very aware of the odd, unnatural things going down, including the two teens caught in the crowds, mosying down the street (yes, mosying).
"Yes! Two days of school until summer vacation! MWAHAHA!"
"It's not like it would make a difference to you, Yusuke, you're never in class anyway."
"Oh yeah? Well... okay, you're right."
"Aren't I always?" One of the teens smirked playfully.
Keiko, the latter of the two, was nibbling on a slowly melting ice cream bar she had bought from a vendor a few minutes back. Her short hair and skirt ruffled and swirled in the gentle wind, but it was not uncomfortable. She was even enjoying bickering with Yusuke, and she knew he enjoyed it as much as she did.
They continued on in companionable silence (having run out of arguments), delighting in each others company, and walking beneath the pleasant dappled shadows of trees that lined the sidewalks. Their footsteps could not be heard above the murmuring of the crowd around them, but the two didn't mind. The sun's golden rays beamed down between foliage as the two turned off into a shortcut through a small park.
From the opposite side of the small park, a petite teen with bouyant ebony hair trotted down the unpaved path. "Gotta get to the well before Inuyasha get's mad..." Her mind was so set on her chanting and path home that she didn't have enough time to keep from tripping over an overgrown root. She didn't have enough time to keep from falling... straight into Yusuke's arms.
Having his ultra-fast reflexes, he caught her without a problem, but released her as soon as possible. He didn't want to be slapped by his girlfriend. Yusuke was quite startled, and, despite the fact that the girl was very pretty and pleasant to hold, he didn't want to be that intimate with any girl but Keiko.
He paused a second, losing his train of thought only a moment as he stared at the mysterious girl, who was staring nervously about, itching to get a move on. The boy soon remembered what he had been planning on saying. "Watch where you're going from now o--" Yusuke made an effort to tell her off, but she skipped past him easily... There was something odd about her... Somehow, her aura slightly resembled Genkai's, but... different. "Come back here!" He allowed her to go on her way, however. Was it really worth chasing her? No... He didn't know if there was really anything odd about her...
"I'm so sorry!" Kagome Higurashi called as she booked it around the corner ahead, right out of the park.
Staring after her a moment, he began mumbling, his temper finally overtaking his curiosity. "Stupid girl. Honestly. Who in there right mind run into Yusuke Yurameshi..." He went into a stream of words Keiko chose not to listen to.
"Yusuke, if you are going to keep talking like that, I'm just gonna walk myself home." She stopped, placing one hand on her hip while waiting for a reply from her classmate, but to her disappointment he continued walking forward, oblivious to her presence.
He continued to swear and mutter under his breath.
"Yusuke!"
Again, she gained no reply.
Keiko pouted, a crease forming between her eyebrows. "Guys are so dumb." She stalked off, leaving Yusuke to swear all he wanted, kicking up a few clods of dust as she trudged away.
Yusuke hardly noticed her leave. He did, however notice the annoying, bubbly, blue haired diety of death that popped up next to a large oak tree tree in front of him.
She leaned liesurely against the tree, her face slightly hidden in the ominous, cool shadow of greenery, obscuring her features and making her look almost... evil.... "Hey Yusuke!"
He stared in horror, "NO! NO! Not on summer vacation! AAAAAAAAH!!" He ran like he had never ran before...