This is my first story and it consist of my own original character. Give me some feed back and I'll make this go through a few chapters for you.


I have been wandering around, searching, wanting to find everything that I have lost. I decided to go somewhere that I haven't been in nearly three hundred years. As I looked up at the castle, I was in awe. I could not believe that the little village in the middle of the woods was now this amazing town around a large castle. 'Could that simple family have built all of this?' I thought to myself.

I lift the strap to the guitar case on my back and walked into the city, looking at everything surrounding me, and everything seemed so bright through my eyes. The buildings were large two story houses that looked beautiful, and everyone of them had a small candy person walking out of them into the morning light. I stopped and watch a small family of gumdrop people running down the street, hurrying off to school and work to my best guess.

Passing a small store that has a mirror in the window I look into it and see my sharp grey eyes staring back at me, my raven black hair curling all over my head, and my pointy teeth shine in the light. I quickly turn away not wanting to see my own face. I then walk towards the castle thinking that maybe someone up there could help me.

The case softly bounces against my back as I ascend the stairs to the large doors. As I reach the top I look back down at the town and wonder to myself, 'Where did the giant gumball guys come from?'

I then knock on the door and wait for a minute until a small peppermint candy man in a butler uniform opens the door as asked, "Yes, can I help you?"

"Hello, my name is Spike, and I have come searching for a few things that have been lost to me for a very long time. I was wondering if the king, queen, prince, or princess of this castle could help me in my search." I said in a formal tone.

The little man looks me over, and beckons me in quickly so I follow him into a large hallway as he starts to talk. "The woman you are about to talk to is Princess Bubblegum, so be very respectful." He continued, but I drifted off thinking that I might finally be able to find what I was looking for.

We got to the end of the hall way where he opened a door to a wide room with a large throne at the opposite side from the door. The little man beckoned me to go forward, which i did and bowed to one knee at the bottom of the steps leading up to the throne. "Princess, thank you for seeing me on such short notice. I would like to ask you for your help in finding three things that I have been searching for a long time." I then bow my head thinking, 'I can't stand to bow my head, but if this allows me to find them, it will be worth it.'

I look up in time to see her wave her hand with a very bored look upon her face. "Go ahead and state what you are looking for. If I can help you I shall."

"Thank you princess," I say as I stand up looking up at her, "The first thing that I am looking for is a book that has a sword, a bird, grapes, and a skull on the front. It is called the Enchiridion."

At this the princess sat up in her throne and said in a interested voice, "The Enchiridion was used to open a portal by the Licht. After he was defeated by a hero the book disappeared and has not been seen since."

"I see, maybe it is better that way," I say with a disappointed sigh, "The second thing that I am looking for is the Taffy tree forest. There is a hidden treasure left there for me."

A smile creeps over the princess's face as she says, "My uncle cut down the forest long ago. I can have you taken there, but unfortunately I do not believe that you will find anything there."

A large sigh exits my mouth as my shoulders start to slump, the strap for my guitar case slipping down some on my shoulder. "My luck does not seem to be good today princess. Well the last thing I am looking for is actually a person. I heard that she should be in this area."

"What is this lady's name? I will be able to find anyone if i know their name." She said standing up in front of her throne.

I look up at the princess and take a deep breath hoping that my luck will be there for once. "Her name... is Marceline."