Ok guys. I quit the first story because some how it deleted. So this is a story with the same characters, but different point of view.
Prolog:
The rain sprinkled down as shimmerleaf padded towards the moongrass. Ahead of her was spottedfur. The grass was soft beneath her paws as she climbed down the slope. Shimmerleaf caught up with her mentor just as they got there.
The moongrass turned silver and sparkled as the moon shone upon it. It was in a cave with a hole carved on top, where the moon shone down in a circle. Her mentor started to walk into the cave. With a brief nod at shimmerleaf, he laid down on the silver grass and closed his eyes.
Shimmerleaf did the same. When she opened her eyes, a new scene was in front of her. She was in a field of grass, with tall sturdy trees bordering it. Shimmerleaf saw a cat padding up to her. "greetings." The cat said. Shimmerleaf got a closer look. The cat was a tom, and he had ragged brown and white fur, and warm brown eyes.
"hello." Shimmerleaf was nervous, and she did not know what to say.
"my name is mossstar. And I have a prophecy to give you. Are you ready?'
Shimmerleaf looked into his eyes and nodded.
"all right then." He cleared his throat. "darkness is coming. The red eyes will sink into the shadows, only its red eyes visible." he gazed at her for a moment. "take heed at what I just said."
Then he started to fade, and shimmerleaf opened her eyes to find her self by the moon grass. She stood up, panic clear in her eyes. "is every thing ok?" spottedfur asked her. Shimmerleaf wondered if she should tell her mentor. Then she shook her head. "every thing is fine."
