Trelós
I Obviously Don't Own Tales of the Abyss.
ENGLISH SUCKS SO IM LOOKIN FOR BETAREAD CLEAR?
Author's Note: (Crossover a bit but its still focus on TOTA) i saw a random vid of 'tales of radiant mythology' where Luke is injured and Guy protected him, and Lloyd fought guy -its on japanese so i didn't understand anything except the fact that Guy said "So your the one pursuing Luke? I won't let you" and so then there the misunderstanding starts XDD
I didn't play the gameplay (i have no time) and im not really addicted to tales either, I only love Luke Fon Fabre i wanna torture him badly.
This is actually my dream and Luke centric with other protagonist tales such as Symphonia/Graces/Vesperia etc..etc...Anyway Tales of Abyss is the main here so don't expect too much. My english sucks so i'm so scared to publish a fic for TOTA, cuz you know...i need a beta reader, but then i came up with a solution to just do my best then if anyone of you willingly to be my beta read please message me~
Critic ok, but no flame -w-
Just help me anyway XD
Ok let's start. LUKE IS SHORT HAIR. dunno if ooc, but you see Luke is not a replica on that world~ so...less emoish.
Chapter 1 - Unknown
Luke found himself in the center of the forest, sadly the forest seems different from the forest he know. The scent of the air is also different, he sat up and scanned where he is without moving an inch.
His friends weren't there with him.
None is.
The panic began to creep on his bones. 'w-where am?' before he completely stood-he notice his sword is missing. "My Sword?!" he look onto his left and right but found no trace of his favourite sword. 'damn.' So unlucky indeed.
For some reason he couldn't remember anything at all on how come he is in the middle of the forest, how come he is alone and how come he feel his whole body a bit in pain. He decide it's better to search for the others, 'i can just try to recall later of whatever happen.'Then he started to walk away from the grass he's been staying on.
"Man, i can't find the exit." Thankfully it's still morning,Luke didn't want to call out to someone even if he's friends might be nearby, for his sword is missing what if he tooks attention to monsters and animal instead? It's better to find the exit first then maybe go to a town then buy some weapon. It wasn't easy but he have to try.
He stop on his steps when he heard a loud roar of a creature just on his right side, in instinct he hid one of the bushes to provide him shield and to spy.
There he saw a two pigtail spiky pink haired girl with sky blue eye color, wielding a giant axe. The girl simply looped when the said monster kept on attacking with his fierce claws. It looks like a bear yet crocodile appearance.
Luke was quite worried that only a lil girl fighting a monster, and yet look who's talking? Compare to his fighting style the girl is more better to him.
Shortly after the creature was defeated, the girl didn't even sweat.
'i guess i'll be thankful that she killed it before it can detect me.' he thought, it happen so fast, Luke could only blink and find a blade pointed over his neck, the bush were now in half.
"!" Luke could only let out a frighten squeak, "W-w-ait! i'm no enemy!" he raised both of his hands in total surrender.
The girl didn't even spoke, she just stared then the axe that was pointing Luke were moved on her side waist.
Looks like the girl will let him go. He slowly stood up giving the girl a smile while rubbing the back of his neck, "hehe, Wew, i thought i would loose my neck." Luke introduced himself.
"Hi, i'm Luke, Luke Fon fabre...And uhh.." trying to find words, "I'm actually lost, do you have any idea how can i get out here and if there is a near town here?"
The girl acts like a mute, but then she pointed to the east. Luke thought why the girl doesn't speak, well atleast she helped him out."Thanks!"
Luke wasn't sure if he should left now, first of all he doesn't have any weapon to protect himself while heading to east, so he looked back to the girl and the girl is still there emotionlessly staring on the spot where he was hiding just a minute ago.
"Um..."
The girl eyed him, looks like she is waiting on what he's going to say.
"Can you..." sweat drops, Luke really find it suffocating when he talks to a girl, especially if the girl acts like Tear a coldhearted woman or somewhat robot. Luke doubt if Guy was a bad influence or not.
"You know." he completely turned to face the girl, and the girl did the same. 'She's ready to listen.' So he continued, "If you don't mind, can you guide me out of this forest? I have no weapon with me...and since you have...uh..i wonder if you could-"
He wasn't finished, yet the girl passed by him heading to the east direction. "Eh?"
"Presea."
"?"
"Presea."
We all know Luke is slow, but it can't be blame, especially with this girl who could only mutter few words. More like it's the first time she spoke but very faint.
"I see so your name is Presea. Nice to meet you."
Presea Combatir continued to walk as Luke followed.
"Luke! Luke!" He's been searching for his young master about 30minutes ago, but still no sign of Luke Fon Fabre around. "Damn it! Where is he?!" he panted and some sweat already on his forehead, he'd been running and jumping after all.
"Calm down." a voice ordered him softly. Guy Cecil turned after to see an exact copy of him,Flynn Scifo. it would be very funny if you saw both of them, they look like twins or dopple.
"I know." Guy could only reply, still panting, this place makes him easily tired, how inconvenient.
"He must be in random town if he's not on this same forest." Flynn he said in a still voice. Guy regained his composure. "Ok, let's do that." Flynn just smiled and so Guy.
"Alright let's get moving."
Guy remembered when he woke up, he found himself in the middle of forest with another blonde named Flynn. Both of them were calm yet deep inside they are trying to reciprocate. Both had no idea how come they were in that state, it looks like they were just thrown into another world or era on where both of Fonons and Blastia doesn't exist. Though they can still use their ability yet not completely.
Guy knew Jade,Tear and the others could handle themselves but not Luke. Luke could be careless, he is not bright even he is nice now. He is also slow, he was believe kidnapped by Malkuth and lost all his memories due to traumatic experience that have caused him to forgot how to talk,how to walk and all simply human nature does. He is a total baby. In reality he was just born 7years ago.. He wondered if Luke was alright, he maybe is a replica but Luke is still Luke. Luke the one he loved as his big brother and if anything happens to Luke he can't forgive himself.
For he promised to stick with him till the end.
"Luke, you better use your brain, whenever you are...Don't be reckless!"
"Let go! Let go of me Damn it! I'll kill you bastards!" Anise Tatlin is currently being captured by some thugs.
"Your suspicious." one of the big guy said with a grin.
"Like i said i'm just a cuuutee lil girl got lost and found myself on this town on where stupid people like you can't understand a simple story!" Anise continued to struggle, but the grip on her hands were tighten.
"Take her to children's lost and found."
Anise gawked, what the hell did they just called her?
"Hey! I have my own parent's don't go sell me to some day care bastard!"
Another man chuckled this time a thin one, "You say all you want, but not with that plushie behind you." the man took Tokunaga away.
"Wah-Wha! Not that!"
Anise were completely taken away by the adults. She doesn't know what did they do to her puppet, without it she can't fight, but it didn't mean she is useless without it.
Anise was brought to the said day-care, she thought it was a daycare, not until a door under the floor were open. "H-hey?"
The thugs threw her inside it and lock. kachin'
"HEY WAIT ! OPEN UP! PLEASE!" Anise tried to put her cute acting, "I BEG ANISE WILL DO ANYTHING!" she didn't mean it, but we all know she had acting skills for her own advantage, especially she is a loli.
"It's useless." a cold voice behind her. It was dark so Anise wasn't sure if there is a person behind her, but she wasn't deaf not to tell on where the voice came exactly came from. "Who..?"
"My name is Rita Mordio. Looks like you got kidnap too." Rita snort sarcastically, then her voice turned deadly. "I'll slice those bastard like a pulp if i escape here."
Anise whistled, "Looks like we can be close."
But the other didn't seem to like what Anise said. So..."What? There's noooway that could be happening. I'm already strong alone."
Anise didn't like her response either, she was trying to be friendly yet look what she get. "Hmp. If you are then why are you captured and lock up on this dark dusty place?" they still couldn't see eachother clear, but they kept on talking anyway.
"They cheated!"
"Still."
"Shut up! Shut up!"
Smirks.
"Grrr.."
"Booo~"
Anise wondered how long will she be stuck on this prison?
Meanwhile Jade Curtiss and Tear Grants are riding on a ship guild with a lil girl with dark skin name Chat.
"Alright, we'll look for your comrades, however you also help us."
the man moved his glasses up and down adjusting the level, "Sure." he look pleased. "This is going to be interesting."
Tear could could only look out the window. "Luke.."
Luke stop on his tracks, he didn't heard Tear, it just felt like someone called his name. He saw no one behind him, "Imagination?" in his front, Presea could only study him, as if she was telling 'what's the matter' or 'let's keep on going.' Luke waved his hands, "It's nothing." smiling, Presea then marched to walk.
"Why am feeling...feeling different...?" he lifted up his left hand, watching how it looks fine yet he felt weird. "As if, am not...me..." He felt sleepy, which he didn't actually notice that he was.
Presea and Luke continued to move towards the east city.
Somewhere inside the forest, There is a poster that looks exactly like Luke but long haired version. A hand ripped off the said poster that been pasted on a tree. "hmm." there was a reward written, it wasn't an amount of money but an information that they all need...
"The way to go Back on your own world." Yuri Lowellgrinned at that thought, "Get Luke Fon Fabre kid then find the others..." thinking, "It's decided."
He walk out to the same direction on where the unknown east time awaits!
He hope somehow to have fun searching for Luke, the light of sacred flame.
Ok on chap two i'll explain things there sorry if its short but maybe the next one is long, so how was the first chap? interested? please do review if you are...If your confused, 'chat' is from tales of eternia (dunno much about it either tehe)
Luke is here is a human, but to his friend he is a replica...and secret find out on next chapie ~~
I hope my suck english still can be understood :v