Hi, dis is not my 1st fic but its my first entry on fan fic.net. Sorry
bout a little confusion earlier. I published a letter I wrote to my uncle
by accident. I'm only human. I'm not sure if u guys will like dis sory so
read my idea and say if u want me to continue. My other chapters should be
longer.
Disclaimer- I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho but I do own everyone and everything in this chapter. If anyone sues me, I have 3 lawyers in my family. Now to start the story. I won't continue without atleast 10 positive reviews.
LAST BREATH IN THE DARKNESS!!!
Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!somebody, anybody help me. Please!!!!!!! Oh no Its Chelsea. I wish I could help her but I can't. Noone can help anybody. Its a fight against death. (running) Im running in complete darkness. I can't see my hand infront of my face for now.
No, please don't!!! I want to die!! Kill me. Why won't you let me die? Oh, Come on. The fun has only begun, I can't let you die just yet. Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!! Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great, this time it was Misty. They must have got her too. We started running about an hour ago. Chelsea, Misty, and I were forced to split up and I'm the last one left. Both of them got caught.
Do you always make this much noise. I'll just have to make you shut up. AAAAaaaaaHHHHHhhhhhhh......................
I can't even hear her anymore. Either he killed her or cut out her toungue. I have to keep going for there sake. If I stop and try to go back, they'll get me too. I'm really the last one left. (stops to see a door) This can't be right. I was here 10 min. ago. How does someone start running down a straight hall and end up where they started 10 min. later. This makes no sense. I must be seeing things, its to dark to make accurate observations anyway. I sshould just keep running. Owwwwwwww........ What the hell was that?
Arn't you used to hearing the statement that you can't run. You have to face the darkness. Especially because your about to be engulfed by it. I knew we'd eventually find you.
(right leg bleeding due to a dagger strike)- ( trying to run) I'd rather die than go back.
Who said your going to die. The only thing your going to do is beg for death but you won't get it. Now maybe if you beg for mercy, I'll allow you to rejoin us after about a year of torture.
No way! aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh. Let me go.
There's no use screaming. You could scream for hours and noone would hear you. Your silent torture will continue in the darkness. Let it consume you. Your already growing weaker.
MISTY_ CHELSEA!!!! I'm sorry I let you all down. Find it in your hearts to forgive me.
ALRIGHT!!!!! That's it for now. Please review for another chapter. Like I said atleast 10 reviews telling me to continue this or its through.
Disclaimer- I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho but I do own everyone and everything in this chapter. If anyone sues me, I have 3 lawyers in my family. Now to start the story. I won't continue without atleast 10 positive reviews.
LAST BREATH IN THE DARKNESS!!!
Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!somebody, anybody help me. Please!!!!!!! Oh no Its Chelsea. I wish I could help her but I can't. Noone can help anybody. Its a fight against death. (running) Im running in complete darkness. I can't see my hand infront of my face for now.
No, please don't!!! I want to die!! Kill me. Why won't you let me die? Oh, Come on. The fun has only begun, I can't let you die just yet. Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!! Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great, this time it was Misty. They must have got her too. We started running about an hour ago. Chelsea, Misty, and I were forced to split up and I'm the last one left. Both of them got caught.
Do you always make this much noise. I'll just have to make you shut up. AAAAaaaaaHHHHHhhhhhhh......................
I can't even hear her anymore. Either he killed her or cut out her toungue. I have to keep going for there sake. If I stop and try to go back, they'll get me too. I'm really the last one left. (stops to see a door) This can't be right. I was here 10 min. ago. How does someone start running down a straight hall and end up where they started 10 min. later. This makes no sense. I must be seeing things, its to dark to make accurate observations anyway. I sshould just keep running. Owwwwwwww........ What the hell was that?
Arn't you used to hearing the statement that you can't run. You have to face the darkness. Especially because your about to be engulfed by it. I knew we'd eventually find you.
(right leg bleeding due to a dagger strike)- ( trying to run) I'd rather die than go back.
Who said your going to die. The only thing your going to do is beg for death but you won't get it. Now maybe if you beg for mercy, I'll allow you to rejoin us after about a year of torture.
No way! aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh. Let me go.
There's no use screaming. You could scream for hours and noone would hear you. Your silent torture will continue in the darkness. Let it consume you. Your already growing weaker.
MISTY_ CHELSEA!!!! I'm sorry I let you all down. Find it in your hearts to forgive me.
ALRIGHT!!!!! That's it for now. Please review for another chapter. Like I said atleast 10 reviews telling me to continue this or its through.