And I'm back with another story. This is another post Pariah complex rewritten ultimate Phantom storyline. This storyline fuses the regular with the upcoming X-Phantom Evolution version because we see Danny raise a night fury called Skyfire, or SkyShadow in costume, from when he hatched while Danny was 3 to modern day. He also picked up an orange terror named FireBolt (or Shadow Fire) later in life as a more scout dragon. However while evolution has the pariah complex occur when Danny was 10 the main ultimate Phantom continuity place is it when he is 14-16 ish. Also instead of the previous story where Danny could control time to a degree, he learnt engineering skills and built a high tech super computer with an energy based hard drive and used it to collect all the data in the world before accidently falling in. The fusion of the hard drive to Danny's body allows him to access the computer from inside his head as well as it giving him instant skills and technopathy, this is based on the NBC show 'Chuck' and yes it is called the intersect. Danny took all those exams on the internet. Anyway using shape shifting abilities Skyfire (simply Sky in his disguised form in public) can disguise himself as a black Labrador while FireBolt (Bolt) can become a ginger DSH (Domestic Short Haired) Cat.
Danny has darkened his look with his hero form. His Phantom suit (A nano tech suit that can shape shift into any type of clothing including Iron Man esqe armour and a space suit) adopts one of 2 looks in his hero form, The Shadow. In action mode, designed for fighting in, Shadow appears to be wearing a black morphsuit (If you haven't heard of it they are all over bodysuits that you can drink through, see through and speak through) but deflects most small attacks. In transport mode (Allowing Danny to fly about without using his Powers) shadows costume is fused with a wing suit. Danny can also use leg mounted thrusters like star lord's in guardians of the galaxy to fly freely. Danny also uses the Phantom suit to create a large marker to draw a large black X on the faces of the criminals he defeats much like the Toby Maguire Spider Man's notes, a form of calling card.
Anyway though I support CatxRobbie this is a CatxDanny Fenton story, Robbie's pairing will be decided by you, review in suggestions of crossover characters, use the shows and films I have written about in the past for that.
Anyway on with chapter 1.
Chapter 1 The new arrival.
Catrina Valentine had been given many compliments over the years. She had been called 'hot' and 'sexy' by random boys and her various dates, but time exposed their sole intention of getting her out of her dresses and leggings and onto their beds.
When she tried getting together with Robbie, her best friend, he called her 'cute' and 'adorable' but they quickly realised that they were so close that it was like dating a sibling and it felt weird so they split quite amicably but Cat was unhappy.
Because she had never, in all the relationships she had been in during all her 16 year life, been called 'beautiful'.
She had almost given up on love at that point.
But then he came. And everything changed.
No one had known what it was sitting in the car park of Hollywood arts.
At first it seemed to be some sort of narrow house but then walking around you can see that it has a hull with leg like protrusions with wheels on, a pair with a wheel each at the front and a pair with 2 wheels each at the back, an uncovered porch protruded from the back, with a top part extruding over part of it and the front had a cab reminiscent of a GMC classic moterhome. (This is actually the appearance of an amphibious mobile home that I want to build and live in at some point in the future, I'll explain in the end not.)
Sat on the back porch was a barbecue with a black Labrador and a ginger Cat sat by it. Then the peculiar vehicles' owner. It was a boy their age with black hair and blue eyes. He was dressed in a dressing gown and shorts. He had his left foot in cast and his thigh was wrapped in a bandage, his chest and stomach was also wrapped up in bandage.
"Um hi?" Tori said hesitantly.
"Oh, hi!" The boy said. He had a big friendly smile on his face.
"Who are you?" Tori's boyfriend André said.
"Danny, Danny Fenton."
"And they are." Robbie said, gesturing to the Cat and dog.
"That's Bolt and Sky."
"And that is." Beck, a popular boy asked, gesturing to the object beneath his feet.
"This is my home. I call it the F.A.M.H.U or the Fenton amphibious mobile housing unit. It is a hand built amphibious motor home." Danny said.
"Dude why are you all bandaged up?" Jade, becks girlfriend, asked bluntly. Danny's face immediately darkened as though he was angry at someone else.
"Google maps go to live sat feed at 9 today yes?"
"Yeah, so what?"
"Look at amity park, Illinois. I walk out of what it is now, I was the only one to walk out of there except Sky and Bolt." With that Danny pulled some bacon off the barbecue and put some on his plate with some toast while the rest went to Sky and Bolt.
A few minutes later the gang, Danny and several other students were in an acting classroom looking at a screen of Google maps looking at the quiet city of Amity Park. In the corner was a countdown going down from 30 seconds. There were teachers including the gang's mad teacher Sikowitz. Danny was now in a light grey t shirt with red trim and a red gear on his chest under an unbuttoned white short sleeved shirt. He wore dark blue cargo trousers and a brown sneaker. He had a black double loop fastening belt with leather belt pouches around it. On top of everything else was an ankle length brown coat.
"So what's so bad about this place?" a student asked. As they said this the timer ran out and the quiet city was transformed into a still burning wreck , buildings had collapsed, areas were reduced to craters and even from this height it was clear that the streets were covered in blood. A student went to zoom in.
"Don't." Danny said softly but it was too late. They were now scrolled right in over Main Street, looking at hundreds of bodies having been torn apart.
Many students, including Cat and Tori, started to feel ill.
Suddenly a fat blue glowing figure in overalls phased through the wall.
"What is that!" Beck exclaimed as everyone stared in shock.
"I think it's a ghost!" Robbie exclaimed.
"Yeah, that's the box ghost, an old amity regular. Ghosts were swarming the city most of the time. It was a ghost army that did this." Danny said matter of factly.
"Why didn't you call for help?" Tori asked, still shaken from the bodies.
"We did." Danny said bitterly. "But S.H.I.E.L.D, the military, the navy, the X-men, Stark. None of them, NONE OF THEM, believed us when our distress message featured a warning about the nature of the attackers. They sent a response telling us not to prank call them like that half an hour before our first line of defences, a hospital holding the babies, children, seniors and the ill, fell, it was a blood bath, by the time I got there everyone was dead. We fought back, but hardly any of us, with me being one of the lucky few who did, have combat experience. We took out all the invaders but they took out everyone else, I got these wounds killing their king."
"How long ago was it?"
"Long enough for us to limp to Salt Lake City where I finally collapsed and was taken to hospital, before finally getting our bearings and building the F.A.M.H.U before applying to an FX internship here and driving here." Danny said. "So probably a few months."
"An FX internship? What does that mean?" Cat asked. Most of the crowd had dispersed, it was really just the gang and Sikowitz left.
"Well I don't actually need to go to school because, basically, I got al the qualifications I could need years ago as the result of an accident with a super computer, long story, so."
"So Mr. Fenton here will be working with you lot as part of my new project for you to undertake this year. You are to write film and star in an action movie. You will have until the last few weeks of term, during which we will have a film festival in which we will grade and judge each group's film." Sikowitz finished.
"Yeah I'm your tech crew, don't worry I have a plan to help filming." Danny said.
And that's a wrap! The next chapter will introduce the character Metabee, a robotic character from the Japanese anime medabots, as well as interaction between Danny and his dragons.
Now firstly I want to explain the design of the F.A.M.H.U- the initial design was inspired by a trailer house from George Clark's amazing spaces, from that the idea of a similar style moterhome. Then I cam up with the thought of it being amphibious. My idea for an amphibious car works on the basis of my opinion of the failings of every amphibious vehicle throughout time. They are cars trying to swim; you need to make a boat that tries to drive.
Anyway I have 2 challenges for people.
The best one submitted before Halloween will be able to submit a character that will be featured in a one shot and May be used in my stories if I like them. The rules for all stories in a challenge are as follows.
1. PM me to inform me of the story's existence, include a link.
2. Acknowledge the story as part of my challenge.
3. Entries posted after the 31st of October will not be counted.
4. Feature in the end authors note feature the Bio for your character.
Here are the challenges.
Challenge number 1- ultimate Phantom the origin story.
Plot: Document the first few years of Danny's life leading up to the initial few months of his hero career.
Rules:
- You can use the original storyline or the new one just specify it as the original or intersect version in the title or summary.
- Sam and Tucker cannot feature as Danny's friends, they can be minor characters but a large part of Ultimate Phantom's past is that he was alone for his whole life.
- Danny took the serum at around age 6 (giving him a 10 year career)
- Danny always wanted to be a hero but was too physically weak to do so before.
Challenge number 2- the pariah complex.
Plot: the details of the ghost king's invasion of Amity Park. In this story the ancients never removed the ring so pariah awoke at full power.
Rules:
- If you are going to go into detail then rate it an M, this is only if you describe the bodies as it was stated in this chapter that the bodies were ripped apart.
- Again Sam and Tucker are not Danny's friends.
- Choose either classic (Original plotline, solitary 14-16 year old Danny (specify age)), evolution (10 Year old Danny and Skyfire) or intersect (16 year old Danny with intersect, Skyfire and FireBolt) version.
- Use the Pariah Complex as title, add the version modifier too (No modifier= classic)
- Only Danny (Plus aforementioned dragons) survive, this isn't the time war where we learn that others escaped too, everyone died, if it wasn't in battle then they were fleeing the warzone, got hurt and bled out, this is supposed to be a massive tragedy that Danny and his dragons survived simply because of the Phantom serum.
- If you do the evolution version then you can have Xavier pick up Danny from the ruins as this is cannon (as is the fact that the Xavier institute didn't respond to the message because they were involved in another battle at the time.
That's it. See you with a chapter of whatever I do next and I hope to see some challenge responses.