Hi this is Hp-pj nutter here and i thought about wiriting this as a change. Now there's a few changes as in Eve is the sixteen year old who comes to live with them, Michael is not a ghost and he will not be turned into a vampire and him and Claire are eighteen year old twins and Claire and Shane are already going out.
Eve was dead. She had no doubt about it. There stood Monica in all her fake tanned glory, with her other two regular ompa – lumpas next to her. Eve had just been on her way back to her dorm after afternoon classes at T.P.U and had just climbed the stairs when Monica Morrell, along with Jennifer and Gina, popped up and started playing torment the freak.
"Oh lookie here girls," Monica drooled, "We have ourselves a little sixteen year old to play with." Now, ok, Eve was sixteen. She was a little know it all her favourite lessons where history and English and she took higher classes. Eve knew why Monica was acting like this. Eve had witnessed Monica being very stupid when she was out shopping. Eve had seen her talking too two boys, both about eighteen, and when Eve says talking she means flirting. Now the boys did not look all that impressed anyway and both seemed to know her.
"Look Monica, i don't like you, Shane doesn't like you and to be perfectly honest my sister could kick your expensive little butt if you go for Shane." The blonde one said to her.
"Yeah , Michael's right but don't underestimate Claire by going for him Monica , she may kick your butt for me but go for her twin brother after everything that's happened before and she will probably kill you." The brunette, Shane, Eve guessed it to be, coldly said.
"Oh come on Michael, Shane you know you want some of this." Monica had wiggling her hips. Now by then the boys tempers seemed to have been rising but when they looked out the window they seemed to pale and tried to move to the door but Monica was blocking the way. Eve turned to see who they were looking and who Monica hadn't noticed yet. A girl, again about eighteen, with blondie brown hair tied up in a ponytail came in. She took one look at the boys and who they were trying to get away from and she got angry. She stormed right up to them and heard the last bit of what Monica said. The thing that had made Eve scared and hate her from that day.
"Your skank arse of a sister and girlfriend needed what happened to show her whose boss and what not giving in to me is like. She was meant to burn to the ground with that rubble of a house but no Shane here had to play the fucking hero didn't you. I'm not sorry about your sister or brother Michael and I only wished when she went back in there for them she could have burned along with them. Or if it was a brother who had to go I would have liked it to be you because she wouldn't have been able to move on without you and that would have killed her in itself."
Eve stared; open mouthed at Monica, then back the girl, who she now knew to be Claire, who had gone a ghostly pale. Both boys wanted to either, smack Monica in the face or step round her and put their arms around Claire. That's when Claire tapped her on the shoulder.
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