Ok I made Redwin older and everyone eles but my bros …and I made the half brothers ..

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At the beginning of the day a teen stood behind a tree looking at the wood elves that followed her and her half brothers . Long red hair flowed from her shoulders blowing her cloak along with it . The followers were 5 dark elfves the hunted the half elves of the land and This red headed teen was on of them . She looked back at 2 wood elfs her half brothers . One looked around 11 still to young to fight and the other around 6 both blond hair boys wore dark green cloaks . The red head looked 18 .

"come on they are after us young ones "

" Redwin I can't believe you got us in trouble all cause you had to get that Poison "

" shut up now let's go " Redwin yelled and started to run west .

" Redwin wait up! " Both boys yelled following her .

Then out of no where a bunch of skeltons aperred . Out of the shadows a Darkelf no older then Redwin or so she looked came out . followed by 5 guards holding Wood elfs over their shoulders .

" Redwin u got caught ? " The women asked .

" yeah Aires now let's go I got it ! " She showed a bottle of pink liquid .

They walked followed by Aires's undead servents . In silence they walked when they arrived at The dark elf city . Many greeted Redwin all she did was nod . AS they got to a small house at the edge of the city not far from the main building . Redwin looked at the bottle she planed to use it to aid the war of good and evil . Half elfs normally took no part in the wars cause they were nither but the good side refused her a home and when she finally found her mother she was solen from her so Redwin held a strong hate for the elfs of Faydark . When Redwin was young she was found wandering the forest it was around her being 8 years old . The Darkelf's found her and took her in. She was said to be living with her Dad when he was killed she ran and was found by the Dark elfs .

" Red come on u have to get to your post it will be a while before we get ready for the war " Aires said as she put the boys in their beds .

" ok " She walked out the door still holding the liquid .

COOL! Much better this time