So guys I am the writer of as long as you love me and in that story Carlisle changes a 13 year old girl. This is the story of that girl.
Preface
The fire was burning, scorching, unlike anything I had felt before. Who was doing this to me and why? What did I do to deserve this. Holy cow, this is HOT! Wow my heartbeat is fast. Should it be this fas? I want to scream but some thing is holding me down. My muscles too. I can't move.
I hear voices. It is a man with the voice of an angel. There is also a girl angle whose voice reminds me of my mom. Can't they see the fire and but it out? Why are they making me suffer? I wish I can see them but my eyes won't open. The fire just gets hotter!
Finally, what seems like days later but was probably just a few hours, two things happen at once. I am able to move and my heart takes off. I scream and thrash around. There is a sudden commotion around me. Did they finally realize that I am in pain? Good. Every one is around me and I hear some babies crying. Why are they here and why are they crying? Oh god if they are going through whatever I am going through then I could never forgive myself. They sound like newborns. The screaming fades and I focus on the sound of my racing heart.
Eventually I notice that the pain in my fingers and toes is receding, while the fire in my heart only gets hotter, if possible. I burn and scream and thrash until the fire is only in my heart. My heart speeds up even more as is my heart and the fire seem to be in a death match. I am confident that my heart will loose but the fire has to eventually die out right.
Finally it is the the fire that gives in and I am pain free! My heart slows, beats twice, and then stops all together. Everything is still.
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