Okay, well this is my first fanfic so please dont yell at me. I really dont have much to say, so enjoy the story.
Zack
I crept around the corner slowly. In the dark I had no clue what was going on so I made miniscure movements to keep me conceiled. My two younger brothers, Ryan and Jacob, and I had heard some voices through a tunnel so I had come to check it out. I suppose I should tell you who we are. Have you ever heard of the Greek and Roman gods? well they're real. my brothers and I share the same mom but, our dads are Greek gods. Yes I said dads and they are Zeus, Poseidon and Hades, or you could call them 'The Big Three', my dad is Zeus. I'm the oldest of my brothers (six-teen) so that's why i'm the one going to check this stuff out.
So, anyways me and my brothers back there heard some hushed whispering coming through the tunnel we were in and Jacob turned us invisible using his powers he got from his dad, Hades. Once the monsters had passed we quickly decided that since im the oldest, so I should go. So now im all alone and cold and following some really determined monsters in the dark. Overall my life sucks. So right now im creeping around this corner and wishing I could just die. It seems I just might get my wish.
All of the sudden, a deep voice boomed, "STOP!" and I froze in my tracks, holding my breath. I was sure they could hear the pounding in my chest from however far away they were. I reminded myself to breathe but I do so inaudibly. I risk a glance around the corner and it was probably the biggest mistake of my life, because standing right there was the smiling face of a gargantuas cyclops.
Jacob
It had been over three hours since our brother dissapeared down the Labrinth and I was getting a little worried, He should have been back by now. I knew he was the toughest of us three, but it had been a while since we saw him. I decide to shake my brother awake so we could decide weather or not to go after him.
"Ryan, wake up." I say while shaking him. He wakes up and I tell him how long it had been since Zack had left.
"Hmm... it's dangerous in there if Zack hasn't been back yet, and he told us to stay here, we probably shouldn't go." He told me.
"But he's our brother, at least let me go check on him invisibly." I say.
"Alright but be careful, promise." he says.
"I promise. If I'm not back in an hour come looking for me, okay." I told him. Then I turn invisible and run off.
I was gone about ten minutes when I saw the dried blood. It wasn't very big but it was there. I turned the corner and followed some drops of blood until I saw the ashes of a campfire. it could probably keep a party of ten people warm but it was small enough so it couldn't be seen from far away. I followed the blood a few more paces and saw a skidded, muddy footprint. It looked like someone had been dragged. I turned the corner and saw an opening into a forest. Zach was nowhere to be seen. I turned on my heel and hoofed it back to camp.
When I got back to camp I told my brother what I found and he seemed worried. He told me that he had first watch and I went to sleep. In the morning we were going to find my brother.
I dreamed that I was back at my house a year ago when I was twelve. A dracaenae broke down the door and charged my mother. she sidestepped and doged but the dracaenae wheeled around and stabbed her with it's trident. Then my brother, Ryan, punched the dracaenae in the face, took its trident and shish-kabobed it. Then all three of us looked down at our mother and started bawling.
My brother shook me awake and I left the horrible memory. After a few minutes of silence my brother curled up and fell asleep. It was a peaceful night after that.
Thanks guys for reading my story. Im probably going to try to update as much as possible just to let you know, and im not one of those people that says, "no review no story!" but that doesn't mean i dont appreciate them so if you do review thank you. Flames are accepted just keep cussing to a minimal because i don't appreciate that at all and I would really like tips on the story as well, thank you. ( P.S. I will answer any questions you have after the chapter, unless they're spoilers.)
