What's up everyone and welcome to the revamped Broly: The Legendary Huntsman. Now, this is what I'm sticking to from now on. There won't be any starting over or revamping from this moment on. This is the story I'm going with. So, I hope you all enjoy and tell me what you think.
Broly, the Legendary Super Saiyan, has broken free of his binds yet again and is now rampaging through Hell in his hunt for Goku. Many warriors, both evil and good, has fallen to the rage of the monstrous Saiyan, most notably Frieza, Cell, and Pikkon. King Kai has called Goku for assistance and together, with the help of Supreme Kai and Elder Kai, they have formed a plan to stop Broly once and for all. Now, Goku faces off against the mighty Legend in a final showdown.
"I'm going to kill you, Kakarot!" Broly shouts in anger as he and Goku face off in the middle of Hell.
"Enough is enough Broly! Stop this now!" Goku shouts.
"Never. I will never stop till you are dead! You hear me Kakarot!?"
Goku grits his teeth and thinks, 'Damn I didn't think he'd be this strong. Frieza. Cell. Even Pikkon. Broly has taken them all down looking for me. Even if a lot of them are evil, I can't allow Broly to hurt any more people because of me. I hope this plan works because if it doesn't we'll be back to square one.' "Alright then," Goku says as he powers up to Super Saiyan, "let's do this Broly."
At first, neither of the Saiyans move and it begins to feel as if Hell itself was watching them. Then, with no warning, the two fire a ki ball at each other. The attacks collide, creating a huge explosion and in the middle of it is Goku and Broly fighting it out. Their fists, elbows, and knees collide multiple times which start to create massive shockwaves that can be felt all the way to King Kai's planet. Their hands eventually lock and the two mighty Saiyans begin to try and overpower the other. Broly then gives a wicked grin before bringing his knee up and catching Goku in the stomach then punching in across the face. The attack sends him flying into the side of a red jagged rock protruding from the ground, but Broly doesn't end the assault there. He plants his feet into Goku's chest which sends him through the rock. He then vanishes above the orange Gi wearing Saiyan, grabs him by the face and slings him down to the red earth with enough force to break the sound barrier.
Luckily, Goku is able to right himself just before impact and lands on his feet. The landing creates a massive crater that becomes bigger when Goku brings his arms up to block an incoming punch from the Legendary Super Saiyan. The two then lock hands for a second time, trying to overpower one another. "What's the matter Kakarot? Not going so well for you this time?"
Goku grits his teeth as he feels himself being pushed back. He then starts to give a chuckle and says, "Well, to be honest, Broly, I really wasn't expecting you to be this strong. You must've been doing some serious Image Training since last time you broke free."
"That's right. I've been Image Training nonstop all in order to finally kill you."
"Heh, that's amazing," Goku says before bringing his foot up and kicking Broly in the chin.
The kick makes Broly stumble back and release Goku's hands. He flys a few feet away and blasts the Legend with a super powerful Kamehameha. Broly puts his hand up just as the attack hits and is engulfed. Goku stops firing and waits for the smoke to clear, expecting to see Broly injured. But, despite the power behind his attack, Goku finds that his opponent had put up a barrier just before the attack hit. Broly takes the barrier down and says, "A pathetic attack like that will do nothing to me Kakarot."
"Heh, you're. I'm gonna have to take it up a few notches." Goku begins charging his Ki and says, "take a good look Broly. This is a power you'll never be able to obtain."
Broly is taken aback by the sudden increase of Goku's power, which seems to continuously rise until it explodes. Once the dust has cleared he notices that Goku's hair is spikier and a more rigid. He also notices that electricity arcs around the Saiyan's body. "What...what is this?"
"Like I said, this is a power you'll never be able to obtain. This is Super Saiyan 2." Broly looks on with astonishment by the sheer intensity emanating from Goku's body and feels that it's not yet over. Goku's power continues rising to unimaginable heights. "And this..." his aura begins to flare about violently and intensely as his power explodes again causing chunks of red earth to rise up and dust to swirl around. But even with the debris obscuring his view, Broly can sense, from the weight of energy around him, that Goku reached a level he never thought existed. His thoughts are only confirmed when the dust finally begins to settle. What he sees makes him take a subconscious step back as he takes in what stands before him.
"What is this? Kakarot, what is this?!" Broly demands.
"This," Goku says as he slowly opens his eyes, "is what I call a Super Saiyan 3." Broly stands visibly shaking in fear as he takes in the new form. Goku's hair was now long and spiky, almost touching the ground, no eyebrows, and an aura of electricity that arced more violently than it did in the 2nd form. But what really put Broly off was Goku's voice. The once cheery voice that filled Broly with rage was now replaced with a serious, almost savage one. "What's the matter?"Goku asks, gaining Broly's attention, "too scared to attack? Fine, then I'll just make the first move."
Before Broly can react to defend himself, Goku appears in front of him with his fist buried in the Legendary Super Saiyan's stomach up to the elbow. The punch causes spittle to spray from Broly's gaping mouth as he hunches over in pain. Goku pulls his arm back and kicks him into the air, then vanishes behind him and knocks Broly back down to the ground. The Saiyan lay unconscious for a few seconds as Goku lands a few feet away before finally struggling to get back up. "I don't want to have to destroy you Broly. Stay down and give up."
The words echo through Broly's mind as he finally gets back to his feet. "Give up? Give up?! Never! I'll never stop until you lie dead at my feet!" Broly shouts as he charges at Goku.
"Hmph, I figured you'd say that." Goku vanishes behind Broly and elbows him in the back of the head causing him to stumble. The berserker of a Saiyan manages to recover and spin around, firing his signature attack: Eraser Cannon. Goku watches as the attack rapidly approaches him, but does nothing to stop it. Instead, he lets the attack hit and is instantly engulfed by the explosion and flames that came after impact.
Broly begins to laugh maniacally only to stop short as he watches the flames, smoke, and debris get pushed away by Goku's aura and reveal an unharmed Saiyan. "How...how is this possible?"
"It's simple. You're not strong enough to even scratch me. So why don't you give up."
Broly grits his teeth as his rage for his inability to harm Goku begin to overtake him. "Never! I will kill you Kakarot! You hear me?! I'll destroy this entire realm if I have to!" Broly flys up into the red sky and begins to channel his Ki into the palm of his hand. A green sheet of energy washes over his body and gathers into his hand to form a power ball. Broly then brings his arm back and gets ready to throw it. However, just as he brings his hand forward to throw the attack, Goku vanishes in front of him with his elbow embedded in Broly's stomach. The attack causes him to spit up blood and his attack to dissipate. "Wh...what? How...how is this possible," Broly says as his body begins falling from the sky. He hits the ground with a heavy thud and when the smoke clears, he has reverted back to normal. Goku lands beside him and Broly looks up and asks, "how...how are you so powerful Kakarot?"
"Because unlike you Broly I have people I wish to protect. People that you threaten."
"People, to protect?" 'Does he mean those weaklings? How can weaklings give him such strength? I don't understand.'
"I didn't want it to come to this. You're an amazing warrior Broly and I wish we could've fought more. But you're too big of a threat to everyone.Perhaps in another life, we could've been rivals or maybe even friends." Goku raises his hand up and points his palm at Broly. An energy ball forms and it's clear to Broly what's about to happen. "I hope wherever you end up, that you find peace and are not plagued by anger and rage." Broly raises his hand up in an attempt to defend himself. "Goodbye." His vision is filled with a white light as Goku's attack engulfs his body, leaving nothing, not even dust.
(Transition)
Broly's unconscious body falls into an endless black abyss as a voice begins speaking. "We are sorry it had to come to this Broly, but we have no other choice. You're a threat to everyone, but we don't want your soul to be destroyed. So instead I, as the Supreme Kai, have decided to banish your soul to another dimension," the voice, announcing itself as the Supreme Kai, says with a voice heavy with sadness.
"Your link to our dimension is severed. You'll never be able to return to our world and you can no longer use Ki. I'm sorry." A bright light shimmers around Broly's body and the Halo over his head disappears. Along with the Halo vanishing, Broly's body also becomes younger and shorter. "There, you have been brought back to life and I have restored your body to an appropriate age for your new home. As requested by Goku, I will allow you to keep your memories and your Saiyan blood. Your Super Saiyan powers, however, will be locked away until certain conditions are met. A portal showing green trees and grass opens up beneath Broly's body. "With all this, I bid you farewell. I hope this world can give you peace. Goodbye, Broly." His body falls through the portal signifying the closing of his old life and the start of a new one.
Alright, so I know this is a short chapter, but don't worry. The rest of the chapters will be way longer. As I said above, this is the story that's going to be sticking. I hope you all enjoy and let me know what you think.