Yes, I have rewritten story and changed the original plot line. I did not get much of the story out when I first started but I feel inspired to finish it and make it better. I'm ashamed of all the errors in the original. DX Feel free to mock me for them if you see any at all. I tried my best to get them all. :)

As I stated about the re-write, a lot of changes has been made. Yin and Yang may make an appearance still but will no longer be the focus. I have the first 2 chapters done and will post the second chapter soon. Keep in mind that I am also writing a novel series so this is for fun and will not be updated as often as you may like.

Thank you!

The True Master of the Darkness Flames

Chapter One

A girl waste long dark amethyst hair knelt on her bed with her arms folded on the widow sill, her bright yellow eyes were fogged over with day dreams as the sun made her olive skin glisten.

"Naomi!" came a yell of a female voice downstairs. "It's time for school!"

Naomi snapped out of her dream world up land ooked at her clock on her night stand. 7:32 A.M.. She got out of bed and slipped on black denim shorts and pulled on tight white tank top. Across the front was printed 'Satan's little helper' accompanied with horns and tail in black. Finishing the look with thigh high sock and buckle boots, she walked out and down the stairs to the kitchen. "Hi, mom." She grabbed a piece of toast, immediately stuffing the toast between her teeth and grabbed a small leather jacket and book bag as she opened the back door. "Bye, mom." She spat around crumbs as she rushed out the back door of her house, deciding to take the short-cut through the woods.

School - Lunch - School Gardens

Naomi found herself laying on the grass in the back of the gardens closest to the woods. Deciding not to go to class immediately she decided to lay down and enjoy the day before she was stuck behind the desk. Before she knew it time had passed and her stomach was rumbling. 'I should just skip today. Skip and go hang with Genkai,' Naomi sighed with that thought. 'yeah, I think I'll go do that.' She stood up and her stomach rumbled again. 'Alright, eat first then.'

As she started to turn towards the woods she spotted the school delinquent round the corner with high velocity. Yusuke Urameshi stopped short to check for followers and with a sigh of relief he bolted into the woods. She stopped. 'Hn, wonder if I should follow him….' She watched after him for a minute and smiled to herself. 'Yeah, I think I'll hang with him today.' So she took off after him, careful to hide herself until she was ready to reveal presence.

Now off school property, she watched as he exited the convenience store with a drink in hand. 'I know he knows I"m here, why hasn't he said anything?' she thought to herself as she continued to follow him to a park. He watched the small children with their mothers for a moment before vanishing into the tree tops in the woods. She smiled to herself, 'He's willing to play now, it seems.' She darted into the tree tops after him but as soon as her feet touched a branch, arms wrapped around her from behind, clasping one hand around her mouth.

A small escaped her as she bit into one of her capture's fingers. "OW!" Yusuke snapped his hands back and was now inspecting the fresh bite mark. "What did you do that for, Omi?"

"That's what you get for sneaking up behind me, dumb ass." She rolled her eyes. "What are you doing here anyway?"

He gave her a look that read 'and I'm the dumb ass?'. "Skipping. Gotta problem with that?"

"No. Though, Yusuke, I do think it's stupid since you only have 3 days left to complete high school..." She sat next to him on the branch with her feet dangling under her.

"Look who's talking, short stuff, you're still in school too, Naomi!" He laughed as he gave a slap to her back.

She slapped back with the same intensity. "I still have a whole year left so I don't want to hear it." She laughed with him though and they sat in silence for a few moments. "I'm bored and you never answered my question." He looked up at her with a questioning look. "See? I told you. Dumb ass. Haha! What are you doing here?"

He closed his eyes as he leaned back on the trunk of the tree. "Nothing. I just happened to notice you were following me so I figured I'd play your game for a minute. Now that I think about it, seems like a nice spot for a nap."

"Seriously? I thought I was doing so well at covering my spirit pressure." Disappointment swept over her.

"You did. You creep me out with how quickly you get these tricks down. Genkai must love training you more than any apprentice she's had, though. I didn't notice you till I got to the park. I had to use my eyes and ears in order to see you behind me." He let out a light laugh.

"Awesome, complimented by my idol!" Her arms went up in victory. Standing on the thick branch, she stretched. "So since we're not going to school today, how about we go to Genkai's and I finally get training from you?" She smiled and jumped to the ground.

"Whatever," he said as he jumped down as well and started in the direction of Genkai's temple.

She watched quizzizally as he walked past her. She grabbed his shoulder then, "Why walk when you can be there in the blink of an eye?" With that they were gone.

Genkai's Temple

"What the hell was that?!" Yusuke shouted when he figured out where he was.

"Well, it's got a few names, but I just call it blinking," Naomi answered. "Sorry, I would've blinked up there, but her talismans, you know." She started up the stairs.

"Huh?" Yusuke just stood there, starring at her in a very confused manner.

"It's a new 'trick', as you call them." She smiled at him. "You'll get used to it. Well, are you coming or not?"

Yusuke started up the stairs, still confused.

"Oh! I know you've been back for a week but congrats on winning the demon world tournament. I would've loved to watch your final battle! From what I hear from Yukina, they're still talking about it and it's been a month over there!"

He took it. "Thanks … I guess."

"Well, instead of wasting time, why don't you two start training? Run around the temple grounds 50 laps," came the raspy, old voice of Genkai.

"Oh, man. I knew there was a reason I didn't want to come here," Yusuke complained.

"Don't be such a baby," Naomi said as Genkai turned and left. "You know her, she'll have tea and lunch ready by the time we're done. Hey, come to think of it, I hope she makes us battle each other. I've always wanted to fight you."

"You're NOT the only one."

"Hey, I'll race you."

"I'd win."

"Wanna bet?"

"Yeah."

"Alright, if I win, you have to introduce me to the famous Kurama and Hiei."

"And if I win?"

"You won't."

"Right, if I win, you have to do my part of the training."

"Like I said, you won't win." She smirked. They got ready and started off at a normal run. After a lap and a half, they sped up and slowly sped up until they finished 12 laps. They were side by side and going as fast as Yusuke could go. Finally, with two laps left, Naomi grinned evilly. "Hey Yusuke! I'm not done yet!" With that, she sped up even more and was now ahead of him by two runners and still counting.

Yusuke tried his best to speed up but only succeeded a little. They came to an abrupt stop. The race was over and Naomi won.

To Be Continued . . . . . . . .