What up bros! This is my first ever fanfiction. I'm sorry if it's bad because I'm not a good writer but...please review because I'd really love to know your thoughts and opinions and I really would like some constructive criticism to help me get better but please don't be mean because I get enough of that at school and at home. Thanks for reading.
"You think giving you a hug would give away too much?" he says.
"You know," I say. "I don't really care."
I stand on my tiptoes and press my lips to his.
It is the best moment of my life.
Tobias pulls away after a minute and looks behind me. I turn around and see Will and Christina staring at me. I smile as I gently kiss Tobias again. "I have to go. I'll see you tonight though at Zeke's party."
I nod. "Okay, bye." He waves and I wave back.
"Care to explain what that was?" Christina asks.
I turn around to face her. "Oh...yeah...uh, I'm kind of dating Four."
She gives me a dull look. "Nah," she says sarcastically.
"Wait. You're dating Four? Since when?" Will asks.
I shrug my shoulders. I know when but I don't want to go into detail. "Well, I gotta go get ready for Zeke's party...bye." I sprint out the door, avoiding the awkward conversation that is yet to come.
I go to the transfers dorms and throw on the first pair of clothes of mine that I could find. Black hoodie and singlet and leggings. I go to the chasm and just sit for a bit, waiting for seven pm to come. But the place is pretty much empty.
I hear footsteps behind me and I turn around to see who it is. It's Peter. "Hey, Stiff."
I ignore him. But I shuffle the tiniest bit away from the chasm. Like I'd let him be near me when no one's around and I'm this close to the chasm. The flashback in my mind makes me shudder.
"What, you're not gonna say 'hey' back?"
I'm actually kind of scared that he might push me for beating him in initiation.
"Ow...now I'm sad that not even the Stiff will talk to me."
I sigh. "Go away, Peter."
"So no one wants to talk to me? Fine. But will you do me a favour?"
I roll my eyes and stand up. "No."
"That wasn't an option." He punches my jaw and I wince. I hold my hand to my jaw as I punch him in the face. He stumbles back.
He kicks me in the leg and I collapse to the ground. He constantly kicks me while I'm on the floor and I can't get up because whenever I try he pushes me back down again.
He grabs my hair and slams my head into the ground. A streak of blood falls from my forehead and I get a massive headache.
I kick his leg and he falls too. He quickly gets back up, clearly annoyed, and punches me in the face constantly. My jaw hurts, as does my nose, head, temple, ear, neck, throat, gut, legs, arms, knuckles.
I hear more footsteps and Peter runs away. My vision starts to blacken as I see Tobias run towards me.
"Tris!" he shouts. "Tris! Are you okay? Tris!"
My vision fully disappears and I slip out of consciousness.
Sorry for the short chapter, I'm going to try make them all at least a thousand words. It was only short because I wanted to end it on a cliff hanger and it was the first chapter. Anyway, I have to go to bed now. I don't want to miss being beaten up at school. Sorry for being such a downer. Anyway, please review, follow, favourite and share with your friends. Also, I like constructive criticism so please feel free. Stay awesome guys. And out!
