AUTHORS NOTES MAYBE CONTAIN SPOILERS FOR FUTURE CONTENT.
Ok First of all thank you for taking your time to read my story. Second this is a SI Story where I will get thrown into the Story at about the beginning of Book 3. I will try to follow the canon storyline for some time and but I plan to let it go AU at about the last third of Book 3. I would like to say that this is my first fanfiction but I already used that on a really shitty fanfic that I deleted later. Please give me some tips how to get a better writing style and how to make my chapters break the 1k words (without authors notes). Also feel free to correct me if I made any mistakes in time forms and spelling. Also correct me if i broke any cAPiTal RulES. My mother tongue German is really different and has caused me a lot of trouble in english classes already.
I dont own anything of this show except my own characters etc. (Man do I really have to write this?)
"Speeches"
'Thoughts'
(AN: Authors Notes)
Slowly my eyes open.
'so tired, lemme sleep'
'shouldnt have watched TLOK until like midnight and then continued with fanfiction 'til 2:00 AM'
'Well nap time is over, now comes pants time' (AN: yes that is from Red vs Blue)
With that I yank my blanket away with one hand just like every other day and jump from my bunk bed just like every other day. But I don't hit the ground after a split second just like every other day. I just keep falling. Strangely I don't feel the air blowing upwards. I looked around and didnt see anything, just pure black. Then there was something coming closer slowly. I tried to focus on it but it didnt seem to be real. There was no way that a figure could look like this, but I really wanted to know what it is. Suddenly I fainted.
(AN: it was a more than 3-dimensional figure. The brain couldnt process it and fainted, just like those KO-Light things that are flashing so fast that the brain also can't process it and shuts down)
Slowly I awake. I look up and get dazed by the sun, a small line in the middle of two house walls. I quickly get up and brush off the dust on my... robes? 'Why am I wearing green robes?'
Suddenly a little boy rushes through the alley and nearly runs me over. I hear two male voices shouting after him and soon I see the owners of them.
I react quickly, throwing some trash in their way and run after the boy. In no time I catch up to him. When he was at 3 o'clock, I looked over to him and saw a smirk on his face as he reaches into his pocket and pulls out some strings. 'BOLA!' I edge to the right to make him throw it in a lower angle and then jump to the left to avoid getting hit.
"I don't want to stop you, kid!" I shout to him. "Why do you chase me then?" he simply replies. "Lets make a deal, I help you loose those guys and you answer me some questions later, does that sound good to you?" I offer. "Deal" he says. "Hey" I hear him panting "Can you slow down please? I'm getting exhausted." "If you can't run from them knock 'em out" I answer. "I would like to and already have tried in the past, but they're stronger than me" he admitted. "You got two more bolas?" I asked. He grinned. "Of course I got some more of them, but that won't stop them for long." "Yeah I know but I can pack a punch to send them sleeping" I assure him, twisting my wrist making it clunk (AN: Is this the right word?) "OK get your Bola, and on my mark throw it."
I waited 3 seconds until i shouted "MARK!" We both turned around, he threw the Bolas knocking down one of our chasers. The other one managed to dodge the Bola and came running at us. "I got this!" I shouted and ran directly to him. As I ran I drew my fist back and hit him square on the chest. He stumbled backwards, stood there in a bent posture. I used this to knee his head and hit him in the chest again, sending him into unconsciousness. The other one was much easier as an easy punch to the temple was enough to send him to sleep.
"So now that I have some questions." I say, dusting off. "First of all what country are we in?" "That would be the Earth Kingdom." he answered. "Wait, like got-a-terrible-Queen Earth Kingdom? Does she have golden claw-like tips on her ring finger and her pinky?"'This cant be No, No, No, No' "OK I want you to punch me in the head, and I want you to punch hard." 'I have to wake up!'
"Alright, it seems a bit weird, but here you are." He said as he drew his fist back with that a sharp pain enters my temple. "OW that really hurt, am I bleeding?" I tilt my head so that the wound (if there is one) would be on the upper side. "Stop tilting your head there is no wound." he laughs. "So, who are you and why were you running from those men?" I continue asking. "Well," he begins "My Name is Kai and..." "you lost your parents a few years ago and you lived on the streets and had to steal to survive. Then you began making a habit out of pickpocketing and then you got airbending." I finish for him. The more I talked the more confused he looked. "OK maybe you heard of me to be able to tell who I am and what happened to my parents, but how do you know of the airbending? I got that like just a week ago and never used it in front of other people. Did you spy on me?" "Well you could call it that but if I told you some details you wouldnt believe me and think I'm crazy." I answered. "Try me" he challenged.
"Well
I'mfromanotheruniversewherethisallisjustastorydunnohowIgotheredunnowhyIgofthereI'msorryifthismakesyoueelinferiorIthinkIminasimilarsituationbecauseeveryuniverseisjustastoryinanotheruniverse" I beamed. "That's unlikely, but I have thought about this kind of subject too." 'WOW he understood that. When I talk in caffeine mode usually nobody can understand what I am saying. he also processed it and he seems to believe me.' "One more thing: Can you teach me how to pickpocket?" a smirk spread across his face. "Only if you tell me how I am involved in the story."
I hope you enjoyed this first chapter. Please review this and give me tips to improve. I already got a second chapter prepared but I would like to rewrite it after having got some tips from you. Also a follow/fav would be really nice. Bye *waves*