Author note: Sooo... This is my first story and I am Austrian so English isn't my mother language. I need to say this because I am afraid that there might be a lot mistakes. Especially commas are something I have no clue where I should put them. HOWEVER, you might wonder why I am writing in English then. I love this language and in my opinion English is a more beautiful language than German. Anyway I hope you like the story. Reviews, if negative or positive I will be happy if you'll write some. I try to upload every week a new chapter... so yeah let's begin
The incident with the Level 4 Akuma was several days ago and almost everything was back to normal at the Black Order. The branch itself was now transferred into another building which looked like a church in some ways. General Tiedoll was at the moment on patrol with his students Marie, Kanda and the fresh baked exorcist Chaoji.
The general was worried about the recent developments and knew about the pressure of getting stronger pushed onto his students and the other exorcists. "What about a short breack, everyone?" he suggested to the three men. Chaoji was the first one to reply "Shouldn't we patrol the area?" Tiedoll lifted his hands and responded "It seems today's a peaceful day. Why don't we get some coffee?" "Doesn't sound too bad" Marie said. "Yuu-kun, come here!" the general shouted to get the moody Kanda to go to the café with them. As Kanda arrived and wanted to ask what all that fuss was about, an explosion was heard. All of their heads turned into the direction the noise came from and they rushed over.
Ca. twenty level one Akumas and a few of level two Akumas were gathered in the alley when the four exorcists arrived. They immediately started to fight them. Marie was evacuating the people in the street. As he thought hewas finished and would be able to help fighting a teenage girl with dark-red hair walked up to him. "Miss, you shouldn't be here. You need to go somewhere safe" Marie told her but she ignored him, asking: "You are an exorcist, aren't you?" "I am and that's the reason why you should go. It isn't safe here" he responded and tried to get her away from the fighting area. "No wait!" she shouted and pulled down her neckline exposing a lot of skin. Marie wanted to turn his head away but then he saw what the girl wanted to show him. "You know this don't you?" the girl asked him curiously. "Yeah I know what it is", Marie answered. He eyed the green cross on the girls décolleté. Then he noticed where he was looking and pulled up her dress which she had held down. I need to take her to my master. After all this is an Innocence. Marie thought and took the young lady with him ordering "You need stay close behind me where it's safe Miss." She nodded and followed him silently.
As they reached the fighting front Marie took the girl to his master to whom he said "Master, this girl needs to be protected. She's got Innocence." The general turned to Marie and the young lady. She wore a long dark blue dress and her hair was tied up, only single strands where falling into her face. She seemed at a young age around 16-17 years and didn't seem be scared from the Akumas flying next to them, being destroyed by Maker of Eden, Chaoji or Kanda. Tiedoll nodded and replied: "When we're finished I'll take a look at her."
After the exorcists finished fighting they gathered around the glass wearing man. Only one of the exorcists was checking the nearby streets if there were any of the monsters left. It was the blue haired young man who the glass wearing man called Kanda, the girl remembered. "What's your name Mistress?" the man asked looking at her through his glasses. "I'm sorry! I haven't introduced myself, have I?", the girls responded a bit shocked about what she forgot. "I am Finn Carter. Nice to meet you all." The oldest of the three nodded and replied:" I am General Tiedoll and this are Marie" he pointed at the dark skinned man with the headphones on and then on the younger looking brown haired guy, saying "and this is Chaoji. Would you mind telling me why you knew we could help you?" Finn nodded and responded "My mother met an exorcist long ago and knows a bit about the exorcists. Then one day, an Akuma came to our village and to our house. I wanted to protect my mother so I went out of the house to face the monster. Then this happened" she stopped explaining and pulled back the sleeve of her right arm. They looked at her hand curiously and the moment they would thought nothing would happen anymore a yellow-orange liquid gathered at her fingers and dropped on the ground. She went on recounting "When this touched the Akuma as I wanted to defend myself, the monster exploded. My mother told me that merely an exorcist would be able to do this. So I searched for someone like you for a month or two now." "That's right, only Innocence is able to destroy Akumas" the general explained. Finn got confused and wanted to know "What is Innocence?"
The end of my first chapter! I hope you liked it and read on when some new chapters are published. If there is anything that disturbs you or that you don't like please tell me I will change it. Thank you for reading!