So I am going to keep trying to think of a good storyline so keep into this
Warning: this is a new type of writing I am trying so bear with me here.
Disclaimer: Rick riordan owns all original PJO and HoO characters. Terms and conditions do not apply.
Hello. I am the narrator. Hmm, narrator is not much of a name. What should you call me? Stanley?! No, no, I am nothing like that undignified man. How about... Kevan. Yes, Kevan is a wonderful name (if you get that reference say so in a review). Now let us start with our counseling session. Yes, a counseling session. What! You came here for a story ? Well I guess we can start with a story. How about a parable. Yes, what- never mind. Not going there again. Well, I guess I could tell you this one story...
(Bold text is narrator)
Leo
Finally! He had gotten Calypso off Ogyia! And they could rest peacefully knowing that Kronos and Gaia were destroyed.
You know, why does everyone think that life is going to be perfect? It never happens, really. Hey! Just trying to make reasonable comments.
"Leo?" Calypso asked. "What?" He asked before freezing up as Calypso pulled him around and kissed him.
"That," she said, breaking apart the kiss, "was for getting me off Ogyia."
"Welco-"
Slap! "And that," she continued, "was for doing it so heroically." "What's wrong with heroism?" He joked,
Rubbing his cheek.
"You" she said before wrapping her arms around him and resting her head on his shoulder. They felt calmly for the rest of the long journey to camp Half-Blood, glad to once again meet friends.
Well, what do you think about a separate narrator? Please review and give me some thoughts. A writer lives off his readers wants, after all
What do you think?