Hey… is my new Suite Life fan fick ! Don't want to say much so read it!
ThE hInT iS tO rEvIeW
Zack and Cody didn't live at the Tipton anymore. They had been living in a house a mile away from the Tipton for over a week now. Both boys no longer shared a room , which Zack was happy with since he could have his room a mess and didn't have Cody bothering him. Cody on the other hand didn't like this at all. He grew to like sharing a room with his brother , there was always someone to talk at night to when he couldn't fall asleep and there was always someone there for him when he had nightmares , now there was no one. Zack and Cody still went to the same school, had the same friends and had a pretty good life. MR Mosbey missed the twins, now it was just a regular hotel even though that's what he wanted. Zack missed Maddie a lot but Carey had her come baby sit once in a while since she still worked at the Tipton.
Cody unlocked the door to his new 2 story house since Zack had forgotten his keys in his room.
"Hey guys, how was school?"
"It was okay..." Cody said
"Oh it was great mom; I don't know what Cody is talking about. I have my own crew!"
"Your own crew huh! Sounds pretty exciting."
"Yeah it really is, now I'm like Drew, except cooler." Zack said folding his arms
"So Cody what about you? Are you in this new crew?" Carey asked as she placed warm chocolate chip cookies on the table
"No!" Cody answered angrily
"Oh why not?" Carey asked as she looked at Zack
"I guess I'm too much of a nerd for their taste." Cody said as he left the kitchen
"Zack?"
"Mom you know, you bake awesome cookies and their really good with this milk you know!" Zack said trying to change the subject
"Not going to work Zack."
"Mom, what do you want from him?"
"I want you to have a little respect for your brother, this is all new to him and you're not helping him."
"Why do I need to help him? God he's such a baby he can help himself."
"You know what Zack, I'm really glad to know that Cody's own twin brother could care less about him."
"It's not like that; I just need a break from him."
"Well you sure are getting one and on the way you're hurting you brother!" Carey said as she placed some cookies on a plate and headed towards Cody's room
Knock knock
"Yeah?" A voice said
"Honey I brought you some cookies." Carey said as she slowly opened the door
"No thanks, I'm not hungry." Cody said bristly
"Their your favorite." She said putting the plate next to him
"No there Zack's favorite, I like sugar cookies." Cody said pushing the plate away
"Oh well do you want me to get you something else, you must be a little bit hungry."
"No I'm not." Cody said
"Is everything okay, I'm kind of worried?" Carey said rubbing Cody's back
"Well don't be I'm fine."
"I'm going to let you get back to your homework okay. Dinner will be ready at six."
"Yeah whatever." Cody said as he got back to work
Carey closed the door behind her and went back to the kitchen
"I thought Cody like chocolate chip cookies."
"He does." Zack answered
"He said he didn't."
"More for me." Zack said taking another cookie
"Zack I want you to go talk to your brother. I'm worried about him and he won't talk to me."
"Do I have to?" Zack asked
"Yes you have to, show some respect." Carey said as she got dinner started
"Okay, but I don't know why you think he's going to talk to me." Zack said leaving for Cody's room
"Hey Cody!" Zack said as he opened the door
"Have you ever heard of knocking?" Cody said meanly
"No I haven't." Zack answered
"Well you should try it sometime, since this is not your room."
"Listen Cody I don't want to be in here either so let's get this over with .what's wrong?" Zack asked not really caring
"Mom sent you in here?" Cody asked hurt
"Yup so tell me what's wrong so I can go?"
"Go then bye!" Cody said pushing his twin out the door
"Hey get off of me!" Zack shouted
"THEN GET OUT OF MY ROOM!" Cody yelled back
"I would be happy to!" Zack said leaving while giving Cody a dirty look
Cody was pretty hurt that it took his mom to get Zack in here to talk to him. Something was deffinly brothering him but he didn't know what. He hated Zack and his new crew. Zack just left him there at the lunch table to eat alone while he sat with his crew , when Cody sat down with him Zack told everyone to move to a different table , since he didn't want to be seen with the school's nerd. At first Zack felt bad but like other time he soon got over it and could care less. Ever since he left the Tipton he had changed, that's when he met Matt. Matt was the one that introduced him to all his new friends. They had left Cody all alone, even though Cody had some friends. It wasn't much since Tapeworm was absent, and his friend Jason was only in his advance math class. Cody felt all alone for the first time in his life. He had no one not even his twin brother...
That was the first chapter. Doesn't seem like much but its leading into the story and major problems. It might seem like Zack doesn't care now but he will. Cody might seem lonely but he get's new friends and get's into a lot of trouble almost losing his life!
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