I found this trollfic so I decided to make fun of it. All of my comments will be like this- [hi]
OncE upn a tim. Their was theze childs an they were starting a jurney taht wud change there LIFES 5EVs [
it Statred at the store.
Rosea nd Dave was in there (the stor)0 when snududently,,,[Snuffdudely... is that even a word? Oh well. Time to get out of this place snuffdudely style!]
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!
thEre was a big isploshun and everthing went flying. Ros and Dave where okay becuase they are powr rangrs!1[Its a miracle!]
"POWER RANGUR ACTIVAET!" rose and dave climaxed is unisin.[Climaxed? Does that mean this awful story is almost over? It better be! My eyes are already bleeding.] and they Tarnsfromed into POEWR RNAGERSSSSSSSSSS/
~meenwile~[Hey mom! Mean Willy is here!]
these 2 diffrent kids were at another stor in athor place and they were Jade and Johnithin. but evreyone called him just John for shot.[They shoot him!? Some friends..]
"Hmm do you wnat the cheese munchers or the nachobursts 4 brakefast"? [Last time I checked Mexican food wasn't breakfast. Oh wait. It is. If you're Mexican!]Jade inqutisited? before John culd ansewr they're was a
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM![I think this area needs better police. There's terrorists everywhere!]
"oh no I thenk were poewer rangersssss" shreked John and then they TRINSFRAMMED![So John transframed into Shrek. How nice...]
OKAY BECK 2 ROZ N DAV[...]
"oh shit wer power Rangers."[Yeah. Isn't it amazing?] Rose said noncahlinatay. Her Power Rangur otfit was a gothic pink with red blood and sparkles and lace trim with leather desines and cats.[AT least her outfit makes sense]
"at lest i still have my Shaeds!" Dave cooled. He had skinny jeenz[Skinny jeez man! Look at my shades!] but made out of power ranger stuff and shades and robot arms and shades[ How many shades do you need?]
"Be Carefull the city is under aTTACK" [Either his caps lock button is broken or Gamzee typed that sentence.]Rose gestered."Oh look thers too more POWER RAGNERS"{Yeah. There's TOO MUCH Power Rangers!]
And then the two platinum blond harred siblings gazed on the horzin landscae as a swift breez was sweeping the sunris.[I had no idea that trolls could attempt to write such a beautiful sentence.]
and they saw jon and jade there and they said
"hi w'er power rangers"[ OMG! You're Power Rangers! Nobody cares!]
cliffHANGER ENDNINGGGGGGGGGG PLS REVIEW THNKKKKKKKZZXXXX [That was a cliffhanger? It was more like a piece of crap.]