Hi so this would be the first story I'm writing and right now it is just an Idea. Please tell me what you think of it and if you think I should keep writing this. I know its is like 200 words right now but I really think it could be great.(keep in mind that I'm like almost 14 with the critisism)
Misty Pryer was an average seventh garade girl. She had average red hair in average pigtails, she was the average 5'3" height, and most of all she had an average superhero rolemodel Kid Flash.
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"this should work" I said to my friend who wanted to recreate the accident that gave Flash his powers. "So I just drink this science project and I'll be like flash." I nodded "Yeah right, you probably are trying to poison me! How 'bout you drink it" did I say friend. She was stronger than me and easily over powered me. "wai-" with my mouth still opened, she shoved the chemical down my throat. "aaaahhhh" I cried out in pain as I felf the world so slowly chug along as I moved at a normal rate. It felt like my organs were ripping apart as I saw black dots etch their way into my vision.
When I woke up and remembered what happened my first thought went against everything I stand for of priorities. I should have been wondering if my chemical x worked but instead my first thought, to may dismay, "Jesus Christ, when's lunch".