I'm still a beginning writer so please, NO FLAMES! Still though comment. This includes keeping kids captive but nothing bad. I only own Lain, Molli, Jacob and Mr. Tomer.
The Field Trip
"This is pretty cool," my friend Lain said.
"I know right," I replied. My whole class was on a field trip to this factory that worked a lot with water and ice. They study the freezing and unfreezing properties of it.
"They must discover really cool stuff here," my other best friend Jacob said walking over to us. I had to admit he was right. There were probably discovering really cool stuff, maybe stuff the public didn't even know about yet. Jacob ran off to look at water tubes they use. He's very easily distracted.
"Do you kids want to see something really cool," the owner and also our guide, Mr. Tomer asked.
"Would we ever," Lain replied. Mr. Tomer led us into a room and asked Lain to step into this capsule.
"What are you going to show us," I asked. A glass dome came down and sealed Lain into the capsule.
"I'm going to eliminate him," Mr. Tomer said.
"No you can't do that I said as I saw ice enter the chamber and encase Lain in it. Then he slid into a room that I couldn't see that was inside. I couldn't believe it, Lain was gone.
Sorry it's so short. Please comment.