Hello everyone, as you see this is my first attempt of showing a big community something i've wrote so please be gentle.
I hope you enjoy my poem. Reviews are always appreciated.
I'm from Germany so it is possible that there are some mistakes in grammar :-(
An Angel Love
Someone falls from heaven
He crashes on the earth
An angel with broken wings
He cries bloody tears
Because nobody cares about him
He is loosing his faith
He arches his back from the pain
That is shooting through
His veins
He can't take it anymore
The white of his coat
Is turned to black
And he begins to
Fade away
His figure disappears
Into the shadows
Where he'll live forever
Punished for his crime:
LOVING A MORTAL WOMAN