Vampires

Vampires is my shortest story to life. It was done as a work for school in high school. Which mean it's pretty old. And was translated from french. It has been beta read by Sailor-MSA. Thank you my friend. ^^ Warning: Its might be a bit violent for some.
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I was always told that vampires did not exist. But to reassure themselves humans say that, right? My name is Marie, I will tell you about the story of the day of my death and by at the same time; my coming to being in the world of night. It was said to my mother on the day I was born that I would have a long life. She had been happy about it until my fifteenth birthday. That day, I remember, a man I didn't know came knocking at the door. When Mother saw him she cried out:

"I won't let you take my daughter!"

What I saw scared me. The man caught my mother and biting into her neck. As blood gushed out of her wound, I was unable to keep in the scream that alerted my brother. He was barely at the doorstep when he suffered the same fate. My body wouldn't move but I forced it to. Running like crazy, I tried to hide in the wood adjacent to the house. Sadly, I had no time to get to the forest. Men in white caught up with me lying on the ground and brought me to that white room I hated so much.

Bad? Really bad? Not that bad? Flammers will be used in my « Délires » in french with my other friend that we will call Marylin for now.