Hi I'm zeal and I never wrote a fan fiction before, so Pleaaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeee give me some tips

K? Thnx! Now, Enjoy!

It has been almost 2 hours, since Light kun and I were chained together. Why do I feel like someone is watching me? I turn around to find Light kun gazing at me. What is that Kira mind of his thinking?

"Are you okay light kun?" Light blushed and turned away.

"Y... yeah... it's just... Um... well..."

"What is it light kun?" I tilted my head a bit.

"Uh... L...Um... damn it!"

"If you can't say it, than can you write down?"

Light kun was still trying to explain himself, but than nodded. I saw him scribble, and decorate the words like a little kid. He held up the paper to my face to show me that it said 'I love you L'. With hearts and clouds. I started at it, then got up, and pressed my mouth against his. At first Light kun s face was red, but his eyes were closed. We're lucky everyone went home. I made my head tilt a bit, to make the kiss more zeal (passionate). I felt Lights hands as they covered my ears and pulled me closer to him. Then I felt his tongue brush up against my top lip, to ask for an entrance. I opened my mouth wider to let him invade. Our tounges battled to be the dominant one. As our tounges fought, I felt his left hand go down to my lower back. My hips thrusted forwards at his touch. I felt him lift me, breaking the kiss. And carried me to our room. He opened the door and set me on the bed. What's happening?!